Traditional Art Olette

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Ponisito, Aug 30, 2008.

  1. Ponisito Merlin's Housekeeper

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    It´s not pretty good. But I will improve it n_nu

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  2. RoxaSora2010 Nulla è reale. Tutto è lecito.

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    It seems Graphic Art, not Traditional. Rather, I'm pretty sure this is Graphic, however, I like it, it's very good ^.^
     
  3. Tahno The official Charlie Sheen of Republic City.

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    Ummm, this picture is ok. It looks like some effort and time was put into it though, so I am going to give you credit.
     
  4. Sanda Kingdom Keeper

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    Nice background, I really like how it came out, but Olette sure did go through puberty...FAST.
    Her chest is a tad big, not sure if that was intentional? Also...she's got some junk in the trunk XD (then again perhaps I am missing the sexy Olette look if that is what you were going for?)

    It's nice, practice a bit though. I like the hair and folds in her shirt, very well done!
    So yeah;;
     
  5. Cocohints "Up to now, the most discussed topic is global war

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    Actually this does belong here.. The graphic section is mostly for the people who make the signatures and avatars, stuff like that. The traditional art section is for things that you have taken the time to draw from scratch. Most of the time it is made with pencils or pens/ballpoint pens, BUT it can also be drawn digitally, like this one was. :3

    Anywhoo, it's always lovely to see some stuff of Olette - she needs more fanart to be honest. You made a pretty nice expression for her on the face. :> Sanda has a point regarding the body of Olette, I don't really remember her looking that grown up. I also noticed that the colour makes her stand out from the background you have used. If you add some colours from the environment it will make her blend into the image more naturally. Every object will have reflection effects on it, but the surface on the object will decide how sharp this reflecting colour would be. If it is a shiny/smooth/metalic-ish surface the reflection colour will be sharper.

    Am I making any sense..? o.o Erm, yeah my advice is to add more shadow on Olette, both in warm and cold colours. Give it a try.
     
  6. Xidon Traverse Town Homebody

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    I'm pretty sure that the member didn't make the background, considering I saw that exact picture (minus Olette) the other day.


    Aaaanyhow her hands are disproportionate, left arm doesn't look anything like the right, the right one (her right) somehow got fatter bellow the elbow, while the left one seems to gave bended bones and seem to bit a bit longer. The breasts are way too big and they look like someone did a very sloppy boob job and put the character in a zero gravity chamber after that. Her ass looks like one of a fat plumber, the hips are anatomically wrong in every sense, also her waist is way too thin. I'm guessing you wanted to show her waist sideways, but you messed it up really bad when you placed that nice and reeeaaaally visible crack at the center, the right cheek of the butt shouldn't have been visible as much as the left one because of the perspective.

    And the face... it is just fugly.


    I strongly suggest you start studying some anatomy if you want to make proper sketches and drawings.
     
  7. Sanda Kingdom Keeper

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    Bawww.
    This would be a major facepalm moment for me.
     
  8. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    I'd have to agree with Sanda on the puberty part. I don't remember Olette's ...um... butt that big... -_-;; You can fix it by making her chest flat a bit and her butt also. -_-;;;; (Jeez a guy like me can't say something like this) Everything else looks perfect and I guess the eyes can go with a smaller mouth also. Overall, a good job.