Basically, after all the advice, I agreed that it did pretty much suck, so I totally redid it with a different style, please tell me what you think:
It's better, btu you have these huge white blobz..... Take the effects off the face(o.o?) and also, the effects are limited, not much there. However, the lighting from the white blobs is good. And guys, don't spam his thread saying "OMG UR SIGZ ROX0RZZZ111oneone!!".
Lol, thats my first time noticing effects on face. Nice point out. Don't know if you ment to do that Moodkip.
Okay, this one is way better than the first one. The colors are much more interesting and that weirdo blur doesn't stand out so much. I really, really like it, and those splashes of the darker color are a nice touch. I have no complaints!
Offtopic Notice: Guys, please, remember CnC rules and the six words per post rule~ In other news, I really like it. You blended the stock in very well, but there are strange light sources out of nowhere and too many. IT's kinda weird. Overall, you've improved. 6 of 10
Don't push your luck, as it probably will be enforced more often. I love how you blended the render. However, there are too many lightsources, whether intentional or not.