Digital Art Okay-ish Roxas Sig

Darn slumps. >>



I've been having trouble making new sigs, and I view this as a path out of my slump. CnC?

 

I like it!! I think the words should be larger,though...

 

I like it too!
but I agree the words should be a tad bigger.

 

Love it. Misty, can I use it for my siggie? D:

There's something about the typography that just draws me in.

 

Woah, seriously? You want to use it?

Well, go ahead. To me, this is an ultra huge compliment. =)

 

i like it ^_^
ya the text should be abit bigger

 

Ooo I like it a lot! ^_^ I love how you made it. I dunno something just appeals me to it.
Too bad I dont have it. T~T

 

BAD

(Hits you)

That's blinding, I'm sorry Misty.

Follow a tut or something, you can't expect to get out of a slump like this.

 

I actually did follow a tut for this one.

Anyway, how can I make it better?

 

I really like it!!! The text should be smidge bigger though, but besides that it is awesome!!!

 

May I suggest this one?
Anyways, Roxas doesn't really look to good in that.... like the contrast is horrible or something Healing Vision said to me one time.
Not many effects in there....... maybe fix the contrast and make it grayscale.

 

The contrast is how abrupt the change from light to dark is. And Misty's got a major problem with it. The light source takes up way to much of the tag and is basically blinding. It's hard to look at, literally.

 

Here's V2:



I cleaned up the empty space from the light source, added some more negative space, and fixed the light source.

 

Hmmmm
I'ts alot better, but it's pretty flat still.
The neg space just.... appears.... it's weird and doesn't look natural(sp?)
It's not the best i've seen from you, but it's okay.
Nice work though :).

 

Bring down the light source. Too bright.

Otherwise, nice job.