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My.best.ever!
Wow, I keep saying that but it seems it's never true...


CnC?

 

This actualy pretty good. The only problem I see is the brightness in the corner and the checkerboard thing you got going is okay but I'm not lovin it. But I must say this is one of your best.

 

Awesome! I knew 7 hours of hard work would pay off :) ,XD..... btw, can you people rate the siggy please?

 

I'm too lazy to give a clear, detailed criticism so this is the best I got:

1) It looks messy at the left-side, yet so bland at the right side. Try to balance out the effects, dude. I suggest to clean up the lighting a bit, because it's far too bright. The jumble of mess near the bottom of the Halo render needs to get less messy. Add possibly maybe 1-2 more of the strands of lights at the right-side to event it out.

2) The checkerboard-effect isn't a must for every dang thing... It fits the mostly with monotone avatars/signatures. Sometime, a reflective or a polar-base theme. I'm sorry, but the whole checkerboard-effect ruined this signature's appeal to me.

3) It doesn't look too blurry nor too sharpened... Excellent! A very strong point for this signature.

4) The text is hardly visible. Different color please. Text is very hard to do in GIMP, so it's okay to not make it look a bit flashy (IMO). I suggest making it lightblue, with a tiny hint of blend with white/black. Try to make it shiny (I'm not sure how to do this, but think of ways of GIMP's structure to do so).

5) Make the background of the signature to match with the render's theme... Halo is a shooting maniac game. So try a maniac shooting game, or something of that nature. *

Overall, the checkerboard effect needs to go, needs to balance out the elements, and have the background match with the render's theme! I say this isn't one of your best, but it's surely something that is worthy of a tutorial, no? I wouldn't mind learning how you did certain effects on that signature, ;)!

* It isn't a must, something that's generic with the Halo render. A cave, crystal forest, something. Really, the render matches with a lot of themes 'cept a plain background of lights that doesn't match well... A good example of a render that matches with the universe (as in space) is a Dragon Ball Z character like Goku. ;) So think of something that deals with the render itself...

... A warrior with swords, divinity-obstructions. A sniper with buildings, weapons, etc.

EDIT: I give the sig a 3.5/5 since it's too bland. However, some nifty effects are in it that saved it from being a 1/5. :P Your Kirby signature is the one I like, which I put at 5/5, if you wanted to know.

 

You've improved a lot!

Okay, one thing I have to tell you is that it doesn't have enough flow. On one side there's a part and nother, there's a lone partier, y'know what I mean? Balance it out and it'll look much nicer.

The simplicity of this sig is what makes it look so good, I think. Although, I think you can do better.

 

Ummmmmmmm, it wasn't a render ...... it was accaully a stock i smudged the backround with a leaf brush soooooooooo, I couldnt really do much with that

and thanks hissora

 

Its really good, though the only major criticism I have is that the text is hardly visible, and you misspelled Master Chief's name.

 

Ugh, I might just take out the text

 

This is a good one.

The brightness of the left corner is kind of disturbing, but the idea is nice. Try toning done the brightness on that and bring some of it to the right side of the focal. The text ruins it. Make it smaller and put it near the focal with lowered opacity. The checkerboard pattern is okay, but lower the opacity of it. Sharpen the focal some and bring it out. Slightly blur some of the effects on him. The effects on him are a bit messy and unattractive. Try moving the effects slightly to the left and add some more effects to the right. Brighten the lower part of his body to the bottom right and burn the top right.

 

K thanks, my mom was being a b!tch and wipped all the pictures on me, so now I can't fix it.... now im ticked...

 

Wait... she wiped off the pictures? nice...