I'm not the bed story writer and the chapters are short and I'm still working on it. Here's chapters one and two. Read them and let me know what you think. I'll post more chapters once I complete them if the first isn't too horrible. I am Princess Sikicana of my home planet. Before the Zeptons invaded, it was a peaceful place. My dad and pet Alimo, Alina were always happy to have me with them. Since I am the protector of the Sapphie gem, my dad and Alina got worried as the years went by and I got older. The Zeptons found out about the gem and wanted it for themselves. I refused to let the warriors of the planet protect me. I regret it once I realized it put my life at risk. To protect my home planet, although it was not easy to say goodbye to it and everyone there, I went to Earth and learned to be as a human. I visit my home planet when I can and everyone is happy to see me. My Earth life is not the best, but I put up with it. The thing I hate most about my new life is no one can know about my former life on my home planet. There are many things here that are difficult but I try my best. Just rememebering this is to protect my home planet from destruction, I have no choice but to dea, with all the challenges. The Zeptons are unable to find me on Earth, so that's one of the good things about being here. I suppose I should tell you about my life on Earth and my home planet and the similarites and differences. There will be so many adventures during the time I am here and maybe one day I can return home. Until then, I hope you enjoy finding out about the craziness I have to go through now. That's the first two chapter Not very long, I know but as the book goes on more things happen, blah blah blah. I'm still thinking of a title.
This is awfully short, but for an intro, it works; just not for a chapter. I know it's hard writing lengthy stuff, but it's always a start to try going little by little. In time, you'll get better for flowing into things. Anyhow, this has a few comma positioning mistakes. Other than that, it's clean. Just let me know when you want to change the title.
