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well this is another one it okay but what do you think?

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Everyday I'm full of sorrow
and everyday I cry,
which is why my heart is hollow.
Yet I still try.
Even though I get in trouble
my hopes are still high.
I'm no longer in my bubble
and people wonder why.
He had me like a puddle
because I would always cry.
Now i have someone to cuddle
someone I can call mine.​

 

I really like the flow of it, but sometimes the text color can work for a mood, but some don't work with a black background, i found the blue to kind of hurt the eyes but it is still a good poem with a nice resolve at the end

 

I like it! Even though I ussually don't care for poetry....

 

mkay i changed the color and thanks i didn't rly think i put much effort in this poem but i guess its not that bad :)

 

ah there we go, now my brain isn't hurting haha

 

VB that is such a cute poem, it starts off very sad, but it ends so nicely XD


Nice work ^^​

 

thanks i like this one better