-_-.... He means me.... Loozah. Anyway: I dunno, it looks to smudgy and that effect in the neck makes it look funny. The text could be flowed with the sig and not just placed randomly-ish like it looks. But yeah, it sort of looks like you spammed the smudge button. I think you've done better.
XDDDDDDDDDDDDXDXDXDDDDDXDDDXDDDDDDDXDXDDXDDDDDDLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOOLJUSTLOL I managed to find that funny, somehow. MoOoOoOoving on.... The sig's all right, but can be improved. The stock could be brought out better. I'll have to second what HB said, about the smudge tool thing.
The text could use the most work, mostly appearance. Don't really know why you smudged around his neck. Lessen the smudging around that area. 5/10