Digital Art No.Flow.Joe

if you can find the text you get my riku manga tag

 

It's really hard to see, but it's under his arm right?

I like the colors and everything, but a different text color would be a lot better. Also do you mind telling what it says?

 

The text is on the left side of the body and says,

"<3 me"

It's a pretty nice sig, the dimmensions are just a little bulky for the height.

Edit: Ahh, but I said what it was, Knuckles ;D

 

you got where it was but where is the critique

also got where it was, but not what it says, and i will try to fix

 

I see it, under his armpit.

Its hard to make out but its something MB I think, I can hardly see it.

I like it btw although the white in the top left is a little too much in my opinion

 

It's cute, but the text in /font/ choice should be switched to help fit the tag better. Then the focal can use some sharpening, or a bit of a light source to distract the eye from all of that ice going on.

 

V2: sharpend

 

Better, and the text is to the left of his body, and says "Come" lol.

Could use some color variation and maybe experiment with the font choice.

 

V3-Darkend IDK if better or worse

 

V2 is definetly better than V3, it lacks light so V2 is the better one out of the three.

 

Stick with V.2 it was better.
This one looks like it's almost gone gray, and is the text gone on this one?