Hmm. This sig would be epic if the stock were just a little bit clearer/sharper/not-so-blurry. It's probably the way the original stock was, so I guess I can't suggest a way to fix it. Otherwise, add more colors. Needs more light blues and yellows. For text... hmm... I'd leave text out. And for the heck of it, add some splatter-brush layer masks for more foreground effects. Could definitely use some.
yep thats how the stock was, http://i269.photobucket.com/albums/jj77/joker678/103.jpg i will get on that tommorow, i gotta go to sleep now will edit with the sig v2.