It's good but the render sticks out and so does the text it is a bit plain but I think it's awesome nice job.
Slightly erotic sig. oh lawl Anyway, needs more blending most of all. And some more color other than red and yellow hues.
First looks better. The color works better. Add some more foreground effects though. I'm thinking some sprayed stroke filters.
1st.Meh kinda the same 2nd.very awesome I love the lighting on this one the lightning streaks don't really fit in but they still look pretty cool also the render doesn't blend in though.
It's very very red, and that's a bit not appealing to the eyes. Tone that down just a bit. Try using some smudging to add extra effects to. Or you could look at some tutorials, those always help me.