Bleach! Cool. Well the lightning could be in a better place. Maybe the other way. Coming from the right. And the left side where its just black could have some text or more effects. So I say 8/10.
Well, let's see... I can see how you tried to create flow with the lines, but it isn't really working with this render. It's really... Bland. Just a smoky effect, render, and some lines. (C4d?) The girl's face is much too white (Burn tool to fix that) I'm not really in love with the colors either. Try to use more than one layer for coloring. Right now it just looks like a yellow-ish to green Gradient Map. The text needs work as well.
Take put the render. Period. Cause, seriously, it's not doing much for the sig. And, create a clipping mask over the text, so it matches.
I think it's seriously good...but that's me being a noob. I agree though...the text could be blended a bit more, and it's kinda missing something...y'know?
The render is just like BAM, you need to either blend it in better or put some more effects around it. Also, blend the text it's also very BAM.
Well, I wanted the text to stick out in this sig, I tried blending it and it turned out horrible. The render I personally think is blended enough for this type of sig.
I agree with that. The blend of the sig fits the render. I like it. It's simple but yet elegant. But the font could change. GJ ^^
Here's a good way to fiddle with text: Move the text to an interesting part of the sig (It won't stay here). Hide the layer and Apply Image. (I think that's what it's called in Photoshop) Bring the text to the top of the layers stack and Alpha to Select it. Invert the selection, then clear/erase it. Move the text back to its original position.