New Princesses, New Door, New Fate

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Should I continue writing this?

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  1. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    Well... 1. I don't know you're last name, and no way in Hell! Am I shoing mine or ever wanting yours.
     
  2. AnimeGirl104 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    and I thought you hated Riku, yet Sora compared you to Riku....
    Irony....XD
     
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    ^^;; Sorry everyone, because of yesterday's Database error, I couldn't post the new chapter.... I'm really sorry about that. But it's due date was changed to today. It looks short in my notebook, so sorry if it is...

    CHapter 10: Another Petrified Student!? And Someone We Know?!
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    Morning came again, but the groans of two people dulled it... Again. Valerie and Hermione tried to get Eden's lazy butt dressed and ready for class... It'd be alot easier if she could speak two syllables. Ron, Harry, and Neville tried their best to wake Sora up.
    After the morning was done, Eden decided to go to the bathroom, to freshen herself up. Valere waited outside the hall.... In case she got lost getting her way back.
    Eden was washing her and her face after taking her glasses off. She was humming a cute little tone, to pass the time away. She didn't hear anything until she looked in the mirror to see....
    Valerie was starting to get worried, since it doesn't take that long to go to the bathroom to freshen up. She entered in, and almost sceamed at the site of Eden's petrified body on the floor. SHe kneeled against it, her tears dropping and rolling off the stone like body. "Why can't this be a dream? This has to be a dream!" Since Sora was blissfully unaware of the event, because he was enjoying breakfast with Harry, Ron, and Hermione. Because of this, Valerie was the one to drag Eden to the Hospital wing.
    It was lunch time, that's how it felt to Valerie's poor stomach. " Uta o, Uta ou, Daichi no uta wo.... Koko made ikou, Sora ni, abite." she had finished an entire Japanese song... But nothing happened.
    Sora rushed in, with Harry following.
    "What happened? How? WHy?!" Sora was freaking out.
    Valerie wiped her waterfalls as best as she could, and explained. "A basilisk. They say if you look straight into it's eyes, you die.... But if you look at it's eyes through a reflection... You're petrified."
    Sora growled and for a second, you could swear his eyes were red.
    " But there is a way to save her." Time froze as a voice called out. Only Valerie and Sora were the ones moving.
    " WHo's there?" they both asked.
    E.A.M stepped out of nowhere, her hood up still. " I am the Writer, but you may call me E.A.M. if you wish." she bowed politely and smirked through her hood. "Since I am the reason you two and my Eden are here, then I can restore my little Eden to a healthy state.
    "But..." Valerie knew that life wasn't always free... Equivelant Exchange was probably one of the est things she learned from anime.
    "My my, you catch on quickly... Okay then, meet me in the Owelry. I'll have my little Eden there at midnight, at the time you should be there. Until I see you again, buh-bye!" and E.A.M vansihed as time was back in motion.
    "Sora... Valerie... Can you explain to me why you're doing that?" Harry asked, bewildered.
    " No reason..." was both Sora's and Valerie's untrue answers.
     
  4. AnimeGirl104 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Niiiice!
    Besides the fact of Eden being petrified,of course.
     
  5. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    Don't worry, she'll return to her normal state... After the battle that isn't needed. I would've brought her back anyway... But Sora had to be a bit stupid and decide a battle... It'll be hard for him to get out of Anti Form...
     
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    Who would you think has the power to take out Anti Form, without Sora willingly and forcebly taking it out? Why do you think he wants to fight?
     
  7. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    *sighs* You're clueless....
    Anyway, here's the new chapter! I'm not done with Part two... Because it'll be hard to write, and I've gotta come up with some drama and stuff...

    Chapter 11: The Battle Part 1
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    Valerie was pacing in the common room of Gryffindor's Tower, and Sora was sitting in the comfy chair by the fire. " Valerie... I'm sorry, but that girl... E.A.M... She could be more dangerous then the heartless, Sephiroth, and The Orginization put togethor... I'm not sure what she would want, though...."Valerie and Sora had already figured that the deal would be a trade. "But our real pronblem is that how are we going to be in the Owlrey by midnight?"
    " Simple... We ask Dumbledore." Valerie said, knowing Dumbledore was good.
    "But now how can we fully trust him? He might be keeping something from us that we should know about!"
    "But why wold he lie?" Valerie thought it was ipossible for the old man to be cruel.
    "E.A.M.... Why would she want the three of us?"
    "And why would she call Oneechan 'My Eden'?"
    " Does anything make sense anymore?"
    "Nope..."
    Sora sighed as he got up from his chair and went out of Gryffindor's Tower alone, "Sora!" Valerie ran after him, so that he'd never be petrified, as she bumped into him, they met up with Harry Potter.
    " So what are you two lovebirds doing at the time?" Valerie and Sora blushed a tiny bit, then Valerie had to blurt out.
    "Hey, Harry, do you have something that'll help us get to the Owlrey by Midnight?"
    "VAL!" Sora quickly shut her up by puttig his hand over her mouth. Harry smiled and shook his head no, then pushed thetwo back into the common room.
    "I'll let you borrow the invisibility cloak, but you owe me!"

    It was soon 10 to 12, Sora and Valeriehad to take a quick check to the Hospital wing to see Eden gone from her bed. "E.A.M. must've gotten her." Sora whispered. Valerie hushed Sora, since she could have sworn she heard Filch's cat. After a few minutes, Valerie noticed a full moon glowing brilliantly in the cloudless night. The Owlrey looked as if it stood taller, but the doors were un faithfully locked. Sora whipped hs wand to unlock the door with a simple charm. "Alhomora..." The door quietly unlocked as they both headed inside. E.A.M. had her hood up still, but was standing with her checkered notebook and pencil by her side. Eden was also there, un-petrified, but in a trance like state.
    "Alright, now that you're here, here's what I want you to do--" E.A.M. was starteding to already get to the point.
    "Wait! Let's make the deal to a perspective that either of us can win against. I say we have a battle. If I win, you give Eden back and leave us out of your sick will..."
    " Okay, and if I win... You get my Eden, and you shall bend to my will, creating the best story I could ever imagine!" E.A.M. and Sora shook hands and the scenery suddenly changed. A computerized Destiny Islands was now around them, but it looked real none the less. "I made the battle feild somethng we know and love, so we'd have even chances. Now choose your weapon!"Sora summoned his Keyblade, while E.A.M. kept her notebook and pencil. Valerei watched worridly on the Seaside Shack, with Eden next to her in the trance.
    The Battle began as Sora took the first move by charging at the Writer, but she jumped away, causing him to miss. E.A.M. took the next move by writing in her notebook, causing Sora to clutch his heart in pre agonizing pain. Darkness was seeping out of his body as the beast inside of him took over. His hands turned to black claws, his skin, hair, and clothes, blacker then space... His yellow Heartless eyes lay upon E.A.M. Sora was no more... Only Anti Sora was here.
    " Now, Anti Sora! Give me one hell of a show!"
     
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    Here's the next part of the chapter! Sorry for the long wait! Warning, chapter rated PG-13 for blood.
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    Chapter 11: The Battle part2
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    Anti-Sora growled at his challenger, then lunged to rip away her beating heart. E.A.M stepped aside and watched Sora become more of a beast. She kept writing within her notebook, a bright light now erupted from Sora's chest. E.A.M. covered her eyes to not become blind.
    There, floating above the ground by two inches was our favorite brunette... Sora with his almost fully materialized Final Form clothes. Valerie and Eden had merged with Sora, to give him his unimaginable power. " I am no toy, Sora Seravos Jiyataro... I AM Master of the Keyblade!"
    E.A.M. smirked. "Sora... You fail to realize that every moment, since you taken your first breath... ou were used a toy, weapon, or shield... That is all I know about your life."
    " I AM NOBODY'S TOY!" Sora's veins pulsed as he glided smoothly and quickly towards E.A.M. to strike the final blow, to end all the madness.
    " My power is my words, my words are my mind... You are my love, and no one can eat that out of my heart." E.A.M. was mumbling to herself, while dissappearing and reappered in the air. Sora looked blankly at her... How was it possible for anyone to dodge Final Form's power?
    E.A.M. clapped her hands togethor and opened them. Orange and Blue dust obsorbed themselves into Sora, and his clothes were changed into a combo of Blue and Orange. Sora was now struggling with all emotions and Valerie and Eden were now at their limit. "What did you do?!"
    "I did nothing, Valerie and Eden can't keep their limit. Between Final Form and this new form, tey are being pushed over their limit..." E.A.M. cringed and shook slightly, perhaps scared at the fact Sora was coughing blood, and his eyes were pouring waterfalls of pain. He only had enough time before another blood coughing fit to say....
    "Why?! Why are you hurting everyone?!"
    "Sora... SORA!!" E.A.M rushed over to his side, her hood finally down to reveal herself....
    She was Eden.​
     
  9. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    So sorry! Please forgive my long put off with this! I'll post tomorrow, and I have plenty of chapters ahead! But gomen, I also have a tournament deadline for my match. It's by Dec 5th... This'll be tough, and next week I'll be visiting my dad in California.
     
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    Chapter 12: The Peace Within The Injured
    ~~Sora's Point of View~~
    "Ugh...My head. Where am I?" Faded visions, I couldn't see a thing. I could see light, dark, and colors moving...That's all I could see.
    "Sora?" Familier voices...
    "Valerie?"
    " Good, he's awake. He looks like he's suffering from cuncussion. He'll probably walk again by tomorrow."
    "Eden?" The sounds, the voices... it's all... so...tiring....
    "SORA!" The two silly girls, they're calling... me....
    ~~End of Sora's Point of Veiw~~
    A white room, soft gentle music played withn the air.
    I've heard this music before. I always heard it when I was around Namine. Sora was walking around on the airy light. Pages of stories were strewn across the floor for a path. Sora, being our kind brunette, picked up each sheet of paper. Time stopped without the sound of the pencil... Time moved foward again as the pencil started writing against the cold paper.
    Sora had picked up about 20 sheets of paper to find some large and small sheets, as well as index cards and sheets of paper that had drawing and sometimes names. The last notebook page which was a larger one was the most oddest of all. The paper was writing everything that was happening to him, without and pen or pencil.
    ~To be continued, tomorrow~~
     
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    Bad news that had happened awhile ago.... I had lost my notebook which kept all my stories, including the chapter finisher to the recent, and several ahead. So until I find it, I'll either redo it, or find the notebook.