New Princesses, New Door, New Fate

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Should I continue writing this?

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  1. AnimeGirl104 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Oh I hate that teacher!>_<
    He has a bigger ego than Riku....
     
  2. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    Spoiler*writing this on the top of my head so this won't be the exact text*: Sora runs hyper from the coffee he drank and ran out the window since her was so hyper. He was laughing insanely. His robes wre caught on some ointy metal and was caught by it over and over until he landed on the floor, still laughing. Eden and Valerie looked outside as with bot annoyment and shock that Sora fell, laughing his head off. Hagrid, bless him, was there. The big half giant helped the poor guy out by bringing im inside to the hospital wing.
     
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    Oh the poor Neko!*worried eyes*
     
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    ....wait,what about that potion?what was it called.....It'd be cool if that potion like,temporarily turned Sora into Riku.X3
    (You know Sora must've snagged a hair from Riku somehow...)
     
  5. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    I'm not using Polyjuice! Then I'd have to make EVERYBODY drink it... That means you and me.
     
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    Special Chapter 2: The Dairy Journals of Combined Unknown Twins
    February 20 2007,
    We’re doing much better here than I thought. Valerie seems fine, and so does Sora, I’ve seen a victim, but I forgot what his name was. I just hope those pipes don’t go through Gryffindor Tower. It’ll be a long year, and I don’t think any of us should use the Polyjuice Potion, especially on Valerie or Sora. As we’ve said to Dumbledore, we were “blessed” by the staff of wisdom. Val and I know about the Slytherins heir and their beast. It’s not very hard to figure out, really. The symbol of Slytherin is a snake, in other words, a venomous basilisk. We need to see Moaning Mertile, even though she does moan a lot, I bet I could try to calm her down. Hopefully, I’ll get her to stop moaning for five seconds, but if not, I’ll deal with the moaning and just ask the questions. I hope the next victim isn’t going to be us…
    Eden
    Worried me… Nyuh,
    I am really worried right now; I heard that there was a victim of Gryffindor found petrified somewhere in the castle… What if I’m the next one?! I’m only thirteen! I’ve never even had my first kiss yet! But maybe that’s why I know Oneechan, because she’ll protect me and Sora when we’re in danger. She’s been nonstop going through a lot of books, and I wonder what she’s looking up… Probably how to stop a horcrux… But didn’t she say she read all the books? Then she should know how… But she can’t wield Gryffindor’s sword, only Harry, and possibly Sora. I just hope we get that private lesson soon…
    Valerie

    Special Chapter, and if you forgot what the disclaimer is, then look back, cause you should know it by now.
     
  7. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    I guess that explains why people are so worried about the basilisk.
     
  8. AnimeGirl104 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Interesting...I'm still serious though...you should make Sora try out the polyjuice potion.XD
     
  9. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    Thank you very much, I should thank my Language Arts teacher for helping me become a great writer, as well as my friends! I just hope this becomes really popular.
     
  10. Haseo Knight of Light

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    I wish I had your writing skills. But sadly, I couldn't write a story to save my life. Or atleast a story for school.
     
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    Sorry this took so long! But here it is! If ou don't know the disclaimer, see the other chaters. You should know by now -.-;;

    Chapter 8: E.A.M and Le Coffee
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    Eden, Valerie, and Sora still wondered where Dumbledore had aquired all of those regal magical items in his with the paintings of past headmasters. I wonder how much munny I can get if I sold one of these things... Maybe enough to buy a Gummi Ship! And it'll be a really good one, too! Not likethe one I used to be on with D-- Sora had stoped in mid thought, Donald, Goofy, man... I miss you guys.... His thoughts were easily seen on his face, Valerie and Eden gave Sora a warm hug to comfort him. A tear of Sora's had splashed onto the carpet,"We know you miss Donald and Goofy, and we will see them one day. When we know how, we will go to Disney Castle. Don't think of us as replacements, we're just holding the loose ends, so someone can tie them up again." Valerie said. Wow.... Valerie does have her moments when she sunds smart. Eden thought. Dumbledore spoke up, not wanting to be forgotten, "You all seem tired, why not try some refreshments?" Sora looked over to where Dumbledore pointed. A tray of sandwiches and three mugs where sitting on a table. The girl's let g of im, and let him go to the nmug and take a sip. He almost dreaded trying the bitter smelling liquid. Ater a long moment that lasted forever, the mug in Sora's hand started to shake and it then slipped out of his hand. Sora went wild.
    Sora was jumping all over the place, knocking over all sorts of things. "Wingardian Leviousa!" Eden and Valerie whipped out their wands to save the items. Dumbledore mearly sighed. he sound of broken glass filled everyone's ears, Eden and Valerie rushed to the now broken window, hearing that sound of Sora's insane laughing. His robe was caught on the same sort of metal trident Neville was caught on in his first flying lesson, and the robe wa tearing and edging cloder to the ground. The fall would surely give him a broken arm or leg. He fell to the ground, twitching and laughing in unknown joy. Hagrid, oh you undersized giant, bless him, was walking by. He saw poor Sora and picked him up to the hospital wing to be healed. Valerie and Eden bowed before they left quickly without haste. Dumbledore casted a Reparo spell upon the window and went back to his desk.
    "I wonder how long it will be, before they come..." Dumbledore smiled as he felt the presence of one from another world, but not any world. "It has been awhile since I have been here, is it because of them?" A girl appeared from seemingly nowhere, and gave a slight chuckle. "It has been awhile, Albus, last I saw, you were dead!" her voice seemed kind, friendly, and playful. "Well, you now write that I am alive, so it shall be." Be sure that you are able to take that responsibility of holding the universe in that book." The girl kept a tight hold on her checkered notebook. "By the way, where did you ever get that coat?" The hood of a deep blue Orginization XIII coat was hiding the girl's face. "Filched it from Roxas-kun, and made it m own. See?" She showed her back and pointed to the onitials E.A.M. "Anyway, I gotta go, got bussiness to take care of..." and she was gone. "I do hope she knows that they will all know one day...." "No they won't!" E.A.M.'s voice rang within his ears sounding like a the child she truly is.
    "And so the three friends are clueless, and as I watch over them, as I end this chapter, another chapter blossoms and gives pride to all to see." E.A.M. was writing in her notebook with a blue mechanical pencil that she had taken from her pocket. "I can't wait to se your powers blossom, we'll see each other soon. But when you see me, please, please don't fight me. You'll lose that battle before it begins, faster then a heartbeat."
     
  12. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    Chapter 9 is here! It takes a lot longer now... But I haven't forgotten about my story!

    Chapter 9: Meet the House Elf, and the Ghost! A New Mystery!
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    Valerie and Eden were looking over Sora as he slept off his hyperness and caffeine from the coffee. "I watch you, fast asleep... All I fear, means nothing." she silently sang Sanctuary. Eden decided to join along. " In you and I, there's a new land. Angels in flight..." Eden took the liberty of singing backwards. A sickening snap was heard, then a dull groan escaped from Sora. He opened the calm, yet tired, Sapphire eyes. He shined one of of his trademark smiles. "Alright, which one of you casted Curaga?" he sounded more tired then ever.
    "Neither of us did...." Valerie said, looking at Eden. "We merely sang..." Eden said, saying fact. "But... Did Miss Pomfrey give you something?" she was thinking of the black, thick, Skelejuice liquid. Sora shook his head no. " I came a few minutes ago... But I do have a sling." Indeed he did. A white satin sling helped his arm stay in a healing position.
    Eden started to think about the impossible. "Maybe when me and Val-sama sang, the song gave off a healing power." Silence had struck, only the sound of Madam Pomfrey tending to petrified students was heard, mostly Gryffindors. "No, you're crazy!" Valerie and Sora were laughing as if Eden had told them a good joke. "It's possible... We thought we would meet Sora, but here he is... Laughing in our faces." Silence again. Valerie and Sora looked at each other to see if there was something to prove her wrong. Nothing...
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    I'm dividing this chapter to about 3 parts... or 2.... because I've written so much and I'm tired right now...
     
  13. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    I definetly loled at this part when your character sang Sanctuary.
     
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    Chapter 9: Meet The House Elf! And the Ghost! Part 2
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    "Are you sure?" Valerie, Eden, and Sora were talking about how Sora's wound was healed during the singing of the two Princesses. Sora was giving his adorable baby tone.
    "Positive..." Eden said, giving her Luxord like pose. She seemed to be deep in thought again. "Y'know, if you're fine, we should be heading to the common room." Sora got out of bed and sighed, taking the sling off and setting it on the bed. "C'mon, we'll go together." Eden held her hand for Sora to use as a balance. Sora had a flashback and smiled, but turned down the offer. But he did give her a hug for kindness. The trio left the hospitol wing with a red faced Eden, a pouting Valerie, and a grinning Sora.
    "Eden, are you sure this is the way to the common room?" Sora asked, they were in a corridor that Sora had never passed.
    "We're taking a side stop." Eden answered, her Luxord like pose still intact, her eyes staying away from Sora.
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    XP Ha ha! I torture you cause I'm lazy. I'll probably finish the rest when I come home from school tomorrow.
     
  15. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    Thank you! Umm a bit longer and a bit more action would be better but this is okay. Good job!. :3
     
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    I'm doing the rest now.
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    Chapter 9: Meet the House Elf! And The Ghost! Part 3
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    "To where?" Sora asked as the trio of Eden, Valerie, and Sora were walking down the corridor, close to a bathroom.
    "The bathroom, we're meeting someone there." Eden said simply, making sure her eyes and Sora's eyes remain apart. Valerie got out of her fantasy world and groaned, she knew what bathroom they were going to. Finally,for what seemed to Sora, an hour passed by and the trio entered a prohibited girl's bathroom. "C'mon Sora, there's nothing to be afraid of in here..." Eden murmured as she dragged Sora in.
    The bathroom was damp, cold, dark, moldy, dead.... And a haunting aura was felt. The cries of a girl were heard, coming from one of the stalls. "Get out!" a shrill voice, the girl's of course, ringed within the trio's ears.
    "Hello? Are you Meritle, by any chance?" Eden asked.
    "Oh..." A ghost girl came from the stalls. She had glasses and curly hair, though her tears stained the glasses. She had a transparent appearance, but seemed a bluish white. "You came here to make fun of Moany Mertile!"
    "No no no! Actually... We wanted to ask you a few things... Is that okay with you?" Valerie asked.
    "Like what?" Mertile seemed to be on the verge of crying again.
    " About how you died.... It could give us clues on how to destroy Slytherin's Beast." Eden said. Mertile's mouth now hung open, and Sora could have sworn she had seen her smile.
    "You know about... About--" Mertile stuttered, but Eden interrupted with a slight cough.
    "Yes we do, but... We'll have to leave or else McGonagoll will yell at us." Mertile understood and nodded. The trio left and Valerie burst out in smiles.
    " Oneechan! You're a living legend! You got Mertile to SMILE! Do you know how AWESOME that is?!" she screamed. Eden blushed.
    The time was now 10:00 p.m. when Eden and Valerie started to write in their journals. After that, they fell asleep. A soothing lullaby was heard in their ears.
    "Sing a song unto the world
    Rising high the clouds unfurl,
    Fan the planes into the past,
    Here now
    Our lives will last.
    We'll never know the times of pain...
    Fall Down
    Fall Down
    Falls the rain
    Our lives won't be plain...
    " E.A.M. had put her pencil down and sighed. "Done with Chapter 9... Now I better type up that special soon... And I still have to finish chapter 10."
     
  17. AnimeGirl104 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    *chuckles at the last line*Besides that,Nice.
    Ack!But you got that song stuck in my head now!
     
  18. AnimeGirl104 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Good....
    I still want you to make Sora take the polyjuice potion.I don't care who's hair he takes...XD
     
  19. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    Okay, I know you've all been waiting, but thing is, I've been writing already up to Chapter 11~! But today is a special Journal chappie.

    Special CHapter: The Diarys of Two and Anew
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    Big Day,
    No Basilisk so far and that's all we need. Though Sora had a caffine, Hagrid helped him get to the Hospital Wing. I've seriously got to thank him next time I see him! Oneechan might've went loco when she said we had healing powers in our songs... Yeah right!... But that was kind of weird how Sora was healed as we sang. But we met Dobby the House Elf! Bad part... He kinda went Saix berserk and started beating himself up. Sora made sure he couldn't reach anything, while me and Oneechan held him down. I might send Nikolle an owl, for some laughs. She'd probably go nuts to see an owl deliver mail to her. All-in-all, no Voldermort, no horcrux, and no Basilisk... Moldybutt. HA HA! I crack myself up... Well then, Good night! Sweet dreams Onigiri!
    Valerie​
    Febuary 20, 2007
    All is well here... But that doesn't make me stop worrying. I have been gathering more info on the Basilisk, but that's all I can do to help Harry and Sora. But man! Defense Against the Dark Arts is basically crap! Harry could teach better then that! I could even do better! I'm not all stuck up and pompus like Prof. What's his name... But oh! I wish I could tell HIM how I feel... Now I wish that when I hug Sora, he becomes a little kitty cat.
    Eden​
    Entry 1
    Just using something to keep a record of things. It would be easier if Jiminy was here, but we'll probably see him and the others when we get a Gummi ship. Now this is sounding a bit like a diary... ButI'm feeling right at home, as well as Eden and Valerie. It kinda remids me of Destiny Islands... Valerie is like Kairi and Eden's like Riku a bit... Or a lot... But it's still nice to get a blast from the past every once in a while.
    Sora Jiyataro​
     
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    XD
    Sora's the only one using his last name.XD
    But besides that Nice job!^-^