New Organization

Oh I wonder what surprise.

 

My surprise!

Now you can read it all at once!
Two people sat on tall chairs in their black cloaks, one man and one woman. "Go get her, Axel." The female commanded. "Why should I, Larxene?" the man demanded and slid back his hood to reveal spiky, flame-red hair and pointy tattooed triangles underneath striking green eyes. "Because, I will hurt your precious sweetie if you don't." The woman replied threateningly. "Fine, I'll go get her. Sorry." The man crossed his arms and dissappeared.

The woman pulled off her hood and fixed the eye-popping yellow antennae sticking out of her screamingly yellow hair. Her bright blue eyes fixed on a girl walking in. "Axel, are you here?" The girl called. "Sorry to rain on your parade, sweet cheeks, but your sweet little teddy bear has left you for Kaxori!" Larxene taunted. "No he hasn't you pig!" The girl responded. "Of course, I haven't given you proof!" Larxene reminded herself and lifted her arm. A bubble appeared in the middle of the room, inside it showed a scene that the girl did not want to believe...
Axel and Kaxori were kissing in Axel's room at night. "Mmm..This just...Doesn't feel right...Mmm..." Axel mumbled between kisses. "What if...Zoe...Or Crixonne...catches us?" He continued. "Well...They haven't...Yet..." Kaxori replied, her long hair blowing in the wind coming through a nearby window.

The girl just stood watching her dearest friend. "That's right. You see them Zoe? Axel has no want for you OR Crix, he never did!" Larxene lied. The girl ran out of the room crying. "How wonderful it would have felt to break that poor girls heart if I had one." Larxene smiled and praised herself.
"I found Axel looking for me?" A feminine voice crashed Larxene's train of thought. "Yes, Kaxori. I need you to take this to Crixonne." Larxene said, disgusted and handed Kaxori a glass jar holding a light with black flowing steadily out of it. "Who's heart is this?" Kaxori asked, sad to see another broken heart. "Axel's little friend Zoe's. Just get it to Crix, Fighter of Angels." Larxene commanded. Kax nodded and left with Zoe's heart.

"Daxent." LArxene called. "Yes Larxene?" A voice replied, afraid of what the leader might want. "How many new members have you collected today?" Larxene questioned. "Um...One?" Daxent stepped cautiously into the room with his purple cello. "WHAT???" Larxene screamed. Daxent yelped and ran into a corner. "It's a girl, her name is Mexony. She controls sand and earth." He told her while hiding with his cello over him. A girl appeared in the room. She had a dark tan and long dark brown hair. There was a bandage on her cheek and her feet were bare. "You must be Mexony...Welcome." Larxene liked the looks of the girl.

 

ooooh! Shweet:D I liked the suprise, looked really good. I also thought it was funny when Larxene yelled for some reason:) Keep going it's really interesting

 

Okay, tonight I'll get more. :)

 

very good =D
i forgot if i mentioned, my orgy title is The Angel's Silent Song
=D

 

Cool, I like it so far :D

 

End day 1. Begin day2

"The Sand Pound, The Angel's Silent Song, The Melodius Gauntlet, The Fighter of Angels, The Flurry of Dancing Flames and The Bullet of Fate, today we meet!" Larxene called as she walked into the Organization's meeting room. One by one Mexony, Crixonne, Daxent, Kaxori, Axel and Zoe appeared in seperate chairs. "We must discuss our...names." Larxene explained as she took her seat and pulled out her knives. Daxent visualized his purple cello, Kaxori's gunblade appeared in her hand, Axel summoned his chakrams, Crixtook out her staff, Mexony pulled her fist hanger *don't really know what one is* out of a pocket on the backside of her cloak and Zoe brought out her guns. "We don't like that subject, Larxene." Kaxori said angirly.
sorry, didn't have much time. more later.

 

It was short, yet it was perfect! I loved it when every member took out something:D Keep up the good work.

 

nickname, name and gender: The violent musician is the nickname, name is Kratos, and the gender is a boy.
fave color*: None
weapon*: any instrument you could think of. A harmonica makes him control sand, a violin controls water, drums control earth, flute controls fire, guitar controls wind, chimes control sound, etc,
personality: Just like zexion, and is perfectly a heartless. Quiet, and is very unmoving to anything. He follows orders, and doesn't really like to escort to violence.
history: A nobody which was created from a dead musician, and a dead organization member, Zexion and Mozart.
family*: None.
friends*: None.
special stuff*: Instruments...?
looks like: Sadly, I do not have a pic for this, so I will just tell you the picture. He looks identical to Zexion, except his hair is white, and his eyes are blue (are zexions eyes blue?) He has a ponytail that is ahnging down to his knees, and he has one white pearl earing on his right ear.

Try making my character into this story.

 

thankies much! I apreaciate the comments!

He'll definetely make an appearance! :D

 

waiting...just waiting...doododododo!! waiting..

 

u r not going 2 even try r u :type:

 

"Kaori, Dante, Corinne, Meony, Lea, Zoe...Ralene. Our names are important to our plan." "What plan?!?" Axel yelled out. "The one I'm working on." Larxene siad in fury, "Also, Zoe does not have a noname." "Easy work, Larxene. And don't call me that EVER again...Kaori is not me anymore..." Kaxori muttered. "Daxent, would you take Kaxori and GET TO WORK ON GETTING MORE MEMBERS???" Larxene yelled in frustration. "B-B-But..." Daxent stammered. "NOW." She screamed. "Calm down, Larxene. It's not the end of the world." Axel coaxed as Daxent grabbed Kaxori and slipped out the door. '

Once again, sorry it's not a lot...

 

hmm..... :locked2:

 

nickname: The Dark Razor, name: Nexious, gender:Male
Fav. Color: Black
weaopon: Razors, Razor edged anything, mini buzzsaws, ect./teleporting
personaliy: Evil(of course), serious, but you can get a chuckle out of him every now and then. Very smart, likes to hack computers.
history: Was created out of a stunt man who died in a buzzsaw accident.
family: none
friends: Axels new friend.
Special Stuff: Is very good at dangerous stunts.
Looks Like: short black hair, the black cloak, scar on his cheek(most likely from a razor accident), grey-ish blue eyes, tall, but not too tall.

I hope he makes it into the story.

 

thanx i though that u were done with it

 

Nope, not yet. PS: I'm still working on getting it organized, that's why I haven't gotten more.

 

Cood have told me that

 

zip it hon