New Member #13 Chapter 1

New Member #13

I really don't make sense.....hope you like it.



Another Organization normal day,only with a new member.
Everyone was in the kitchen sitting down at the table.
Until Xemnas came in the Kitchen."Morning...everyone."
Everyone looked at Xemnas."I want to introduce you to a new
member Roxas,number 13. Come in here Roxas."
Roxas came into the kitchen shyly.
"Everyone introduce yourself...or else.."
Xigbar waved "Hey names Xigbar!"
"Xaldin..." "Hey my name is Vexen." Roxas nodded,trying yo remember.
"Lexaeus." "Zexion..member 6." Saix walked to Roxas."I'm Saix."
Axel got up and walked towards Roxas and took his hand.
"My name is Axel, Got It Memorized?"He said shaking his hand."
Demyx waved."Demyx here!"
Well then after everyone introduce themselves to Roxas, Roxas felt comftorable
around the Organization now.Except with Larxene(she was rude)


~Roxas's Room~


Roxas was all alone in his room lying on his bed.Looking out the window.
"Number 13...The new member."
After a knock went on his door. "It's me Axel!Can i come in?"
"Oh..come in."
The knob turned,and the door opened.
Axel put his hands into his pocket. "Getting used to the Organization yet?"
Roxas shook his head."Not actually...sure."
"Oh ok...no worries...you'll get used to the Organization soon."
Roxas smiled.
"yeah your right."
Roxas then got the feeling, he and Axel would be Best-Friends.
Well atleast he though they two would be Best-Friends.






I'll make another one.....i don't know when but i hope you enjoyed it. And sorry
if it was short.

 

Nice start! May I make a suggestion or two?

First of all, nice idea, but could use a lot more detail.

Like, instead of just making Xaldin say: "Xaldin", you could do this:

Xaldin turned towards the new member. He smiled slightly.
"Xaldin." he said in a deep tone.

If you use more detail, your stories will be longer, and people will feel like they are more 'there' in the story. You get what I'm saying?

Also, I suggest typing in Word Perfect, Microsoft Word, etc., and then copy and pasting the story into a thread.

I do this, and I find I make less grammer mistakes and spelling mistakes :)

Nevertheless, the story seems interesting, and I hope my critisism hasn't discouraged you in any way :)

I look forward to reading more from you :D

 

New Member #13 Chapter 2

Yeah i guess i made the second chapter earlier..Anyways hope u like it.



The Next day already in the Organization.Everyone was in the living room watching some tv. Roxas came down the stairs looking at everyone just sitting there watching tv.Axel turned his head "Hey Roxas!" Roxas nodded and smiled.
Everyone turned around and then looked back at the tv.
Luxord got up "Anyone want to go in the basement to play some pool?"
"I do!" Xaldin and Marluxia. Zexion chuckled. "Since theres nothing to do."
Luxord stared at Zexion. "What was that Zexion?" "Nothing." Luxord shrugged,and walked out of the living room with Xaldin and Marluxia.
Axel patted the seat.Guess he was telling Roxas to come sit beside him.
Roxas walked to the sofa and sat down. "So Roxas...Getting used to the Organization yet?" Roxas shrugged "Little bit." "K" Larxene came into the
living and yanked the control out of Xigbar's hand. "Yoink!I'm watching tv now!"
Xigbar sat up from lying down on the sofa."Hey I was watching!" Larxene shook her head "No you weren't.You were lying down on the sofa sleeping!" Xigbar got mad and grabbed the control."No i wasn't!" Larxene got up and jumped on Xigbar.
Roxas got alittle scared watching Xigbar and Larxene fight over a silly old remote.
Axel laughed."Haha there they go again fighting for the remote."
After Xemnas came into the living room crossing his arms."STOP what your doing!"
The two stopped fighting.
Xemnas walked up to them and grabbed the remote "No ones watching anymore tv!Until you two apologize!" Larxene got up and walked out the living room.
Xigbar had his mouth open as in he couldn't believe it."B-B-But i was watching tv! Larxene started it!!" Xemnas pointed at the stairs.Xigbar got up and walked up the stairs, leaving the living room. Xemnas put the remote in his pocket and walked out the livining room. "Does this usually happen..Axel?"
Axel nodded." Yeap happens all the time well not usually all the time but sometimes." Roxas put his hand on his chin. "You think Xigbars alright?" Axel shrugged. "Don't know until we find out.....so do you want to go find out?"
Roxas nodded.
The two got up and walked out the living room.



~Xigbar's Room~

When the two arrived at Xigbar's door, Axel slowly opened the door.
"Hey Xigbar..can we come in?"
Xigbar had his head on the pillow and his body lying down on the bed.
"Well you already opened the door so might as well come in."
Axel rolled his eyes and walked to Xigbar's bed, so did Roxas.
Xigbar slammed the wall."It's not fair me and Larxene always fight over the remote and who gets in trouble?ME!(and also Larxene...) Axel frowned.
"Well it's not your fault because, Larxene grabbed the remote away from you."
Xigbar nodded. and pointed at the door. "Sorry but i want to be alone so you 2 can leave." Axel understood but not Roxas. Why did he want us out? He doesn't like me?Or he doesnt like me and Axel?
Axel patted Xigbar's back and walked out the door.
Roxas stood there looking at Xigbar.After he walked out the door and closed the door.
"Hey Axel! Wait up!" Axel stopped . "Man your slow." Roxas shook his head
"Slow?hey who you calling slow?I demand a match." Roxas slapped his face
What on hearts am i saying?A match with Axel?I'm crazy!I know he'll win because he's been fighting for like since he joined the organization and i just came yesterday! Axel smiled "Alright a match it is hehe....Let's say...5:00 pm?"
Roxas nodded in suffering. "sure sure 5 o'clock wont forget!" Axel waved and walked away. Roxas stood there."What am i doing..."

~Kitchen~

Roxas was in the kitchen sitting at the table.Having a sandwich.(dunno what sandwich...) Demyx came in the kitchen and smiled at Roxas."I heard you and Axel were going to have a match at 5 o'clock." Roxas put his sandwich down.
"But he didn't tell me where to have the match."
Demyx smiled."Well can't be anywhere but waaayyy downstairs.The Stadium no worries i'll take you to the Stadium." Roxas smiled "Thanks"
Roxas then grabbed his sandwich and took a bite, thinking.
Well Now i know where the match is being held at but....im wondering..who will win me or Axel?If Axel wins he'll be bragging or something. And if I win Axel will get mad at me and me and him won't be friends anymore.


How....
am I
going to do this
should i lose....?

Or should i win...?



Yeap thats chapter 2 hoped you liked it:D

 

Ok, no offense, but everyone is using my story line!! :D :) :(

Hey, it's not your fault kid. I just had a fanfic come out a while ago with the EXACT same story. I find it funny, don't worry, I have no reason to be mad anyway.

ANYWAY, yeah, the story line is good. Do what Axels#1fangirl said about the detail and microsoft word, that's what I usually do. Keep it up.

 

Better a lot better! :D

Nice story so far. If I won't be bricked, may I make just one more suggestion?

Everything is sorta mashed together. It's sorta hard to read.

For example, say Roxas is saying: "Hi how are you?" And Axel is saying "Fine." You would write it like this:

Roxas walked up to Axel. "Hi how are you?" Axel looked at him. "Fine." he smiled.

You should write it like this:

Roxas walked up to Axel.
"Hi how are you?" he said. Axel looked at him.
"Fine." He said, smiling.

It's a lot easier to read, and looks neater :)

I'm sorry if it seems I'm really critical. I just think your story is fabulous, and I'd want someone to critize my work (which it has been, and I write a lot better now :))

I like your story a lot, and once again I hope I didn't discourage you in anyway...

 

New Member #13 Chapter 3

Yeah...im starting......*looks at keyboards* not sure if im doing the story right but
hey im me......anyways hope you like chapter 3.



It was close to 5 o'clock, Roxas was walking in the hallways still thinking.
"If i win he'll get mad, if he wins he'll brag and stuff"
Then a hand went Roxas's shoulder.It was Demyx...
"Welp.It's four thirdy and we should go to the stadium."
Roxas was confused....
"Stadium...now?But it's no even 5 o'clock yet."
Demyx nodded and smiled slightly.
" I know but...we can get ready before the fight."
"Oh...ok then lets go to the stadium."
Roxas walked to the end of the hall and stopped,then turned to Demyx.
" um....wheres the stadium?"
Demyx laughed.
"Don't worry..follow me!"

~Stadium~

Demyx and Roxas arrived at the Stadium.
It was onlt those two in the Stadium, no on else but them
"Wow" Roxas said in suprised.
It's...It's BIG!"
"Yeah it's a big stadium...which you'll be fighting in with Axel."
"Right..."
Demyx looked at Roxas, looking at his face.
"Uh..Is something wrong?"
Roxas shook his head. I don't want him to know he'll laugh at me.
"Ok."
~5:00p.m~

Every member was in the stadium behind bars.(so they wont get hurt...)
Larxene walked passed Roxas annoyed." You gonna lose kid. dont get
your hopes."
Roxas didn't like Larxene's attitude.
She's always being mean.It's like she doesn't even care.
"i do have my hopes up."
WHAT AM I SAYING!!!?? Did i just say that?Please don't tell me i just said
that. Oh god..she's gonna mess me up. Larxene turned around.
"What..was..that?"
Roxas gulped.What am i going to say?
i can't say the same thing,it'll only make things work...
and i just noticed i'm sweating..aww man.
"N-Nothing."
Larxene gave Roxas the bad look, and walked away.
That was close....

After Xemnas walked to the middle of the stadium,taking out
a piece of paper are crumbled up.
"Ahem..."
Everyone was talking, not listening to Xemnas.
Xemnas doesn't like that when that happens
"AHEM!!!"
Everyone stopped talking and looked at Xemnas.
"Welcome to the stadium."
Marluxia crossed his arms annoyed.
"Yeah we know!"
Xemnas looked at Marluxia
Eyes to eye
"Just for the Marluxia you'll be cleaning the whole castle."
"aww man."
Xemnas than looked back at his crumbled paper...reading.
"Anyways today we're going to see a fight..and yah-dee-yah."
"Here we have Axel at our left!"
Axel waved and smiled.
"And on our Right our new member...Roxas!"
Roxas smiled.
Then Xemnas went behind the bars.
And took out his whistle.(he had a whistle!?)
Xemnas took and deep breath and blew into the whistle.
Axel smiled at Roxas, Roxas ignored him...
Ok Roxas..starting the fight...must focus ust fo-
Axel had made his first move..
Ouch,fire..man he's got to be more careful.
Roxas ran towards Axel getting ready to throw his keyblades at him.
Axel knew wha his plan was, throwing the keyblades.
He then jumped to dodge the attack.
"Hehe just as i suspected."
But...thats not it.
The Keyblades followed Axel.
"what!?"
When Roxas threw his keyblades at Axel to keep him busy.
Roxas ran behind and jumped.
Then he kicked Axel, causing him to fall.
Axel got up and threw his flurry flames (if thats what it's called)
at Roxas. Roxas quickly dodged the attack,forming the fire to hit the wall.
"Miss!"
"What do you mean "miss? oh your not missing anything.!"
"Huh?"
The fire came back at Roxas behind his back.
Ouch what kind of attack is that?
Roxas then thought for a second.
Hehe i got a plan.
Roxas threw one of his keyblades(Oathkeeper) at Axel.
Then he threw the other on at Axel.
Great now once he dodges the first keyblade the other keyblade will
hit him.
Axel jumped over the First keyblade and snickered.
Until the other keyblade hit his face.
*whooosh*
Axel went flying and then landed on the floor.
"Wow your good. but not for long!"
Roxas got his other keyblade back.
But the other one...Where was it?
While Axel was making a mega fire attack the keyblade came behind him
out of nowhere
*BANG*
Axel fell don to the ground lying down.
The battle was over
Roxas gasped,he couldn't believe it.
He just defeated Axel in a match.
Aww man what did i just do?Did i win?
Now me and him won't be friends at all!
If i had lost no of this would have never happened but NOO...
I just had to win didnt I?
Xemnas walked to the middle on the stadium again.
"And the winner is....Roxas!"
Everyone cheered for Roxas(except for Larxene...she doesnt like Roxas.)
Axel got up from the ground, and walked up to Roxas.
"Your not slow afterall haha..good game."
Axel said taking his hand out to shake Roxas's hand.
"Wha-?"
Ok..what just happened here?I thought he would get mad at me.
And look he's handing his hand out to me causing to shake my hand.
Woah,not what i planned but i'll take it!
Roxas took his hand out and grabbed Axel's hand causing to
shake hands.
"Good game to you too."
Axel then put his head around Roxas's neck
And gave him a nuggy.
The two laughed.
"Hey how bout we go get some icecream..as a reward!?"
Roxas smiled and laughed.
"Yeah lets go."


I think this is a new friend ship starting.

me and Axel being friends.

Guess this all worked out pretty well.




Hoped you liked it...i was really tired that time making this story
but hey
i like stories and writing em..
:D

I made a real mistake on the poll


that poll question was supposed to be on Chapter 4
*bangs head*

the chapter 3 poll question was

Who will win


Roxas

Axel

Both

None

 

You're not allowed to have polls any more :(

But nice chapter! And great job! It looks really good! :D

 

New Member #13 Chapter 4

Yeah Chapter 4 is finally out.Hope you like it:D


Axel and Roxas walked out the Stadium together.
"You were quite a challenge Axel."
Axel laughed.
"quite a challenge?haha when i saw you fighting
you were suffering."
Roxas smiled slightly.
"So where are we going?"
"Twilight Town..they have good icecream there."
Roxas nodded.
Twilight Town...I've been there before..haven't I?


~Twilight Town~

The two have arrived to TwilightTown.
Hmmm...this place..i know i've been here before.
"You can wait here i'll go order the icecream."
Roxas went,and sat down on the bench waiting for
Axel.New Friendship.....thats cool,and maybe
I might fit in more with the Organization.
Roxas smiles.
Axel walked up to Roxas holding the sea-salt icecream.
"Here Roxas."
Roxas was stuck with the smile
Guess...He was frozen.
Axel sat down on the bench beside Roxas.
"Roxas???"
Axel waved his hand in Roxas's face.
"Helllloooo?"
Roxas was still there being frozen, and smiling.
Axel got fedup,and slapped him on the back of his head.
"ROXAS?"
"Woh!" Roxas rubbed the back on his head..Geeezzz
he didnt mean to hit me on the back of my head.
"Here's your icecream."
"Thanks."
"No Problem."
Roxas took the icecream from Axel,that he was handing to him.
"Today was fun Roxas..but...but im still kinda sad about Xigbar."
"Huh?"
Roxas was confused at first he talks about the fight,then hits my head
now this?This is getting confused. I think...
"He was really sad he and Larxene never get along.at all."
All Roxas could do was stay silent.But Roxas wanted to say something
to Axel, but the words couldn't come out.
Well I can say this...Why is Larxene so mean?I mean why can't she be
nice for a change?And i've only known her for like 2 days...well almost 2
days.
"Roxas?"
"Huh?"
"Were you listening?"
Listening?Axel was talking?To me?
"N-N-No.."
All Axel could do was laugh.
I don't understand..why is he laughing?
"Ok then.."
"Hey how'bout we go back to the castle and check on Xigbar and Larxene?"
"yeah."
The two got up and threw the popsicle stick int he garbage
that was right by the bench.
Axel and Roxas went walking out of Twilight Town.

~Home~

"Guy's we're home."
Everyone looked at Axel.
"Yeah we know-we know."
Axel put his hand on his hip.
Axel could tell he was looking like a fool putting his hand on his hip.
"Well Larxene...you bored?"
She put her hand over her head.
"Well yeah im bored there no tv."
Roxas laughed.
Larxene gave Roxas the eye.
"What are you laughing about blondey?"
Roxas stopped laughing.
Did she just call me blondey?
"Nothing but just incase..your a blondey two!"
Axel punched Roxas's arm,in a bad sign.
"What!?You better start running!"
Axel put his hand infront of Roxas.
"Aww come'on Larxene he was just having some
fun.whats wrong with that?"
Larxene didn't say a word,but left the living room.
"axel th-"
"It's ok....I know how to handle Larxene.She like an easy baking
cake!"
Roxas smiled.
"Um...should we go check on Xigbar..Axel?"
"yeah we should."
So Axel and Roxas walked out the living room, into the hallway.
Room#2~Xigbars room.
When they arrived at Xigbar's dorm Axel took a deep breath.
Getting ready to go in Xigbar's room hearing all in complaints.
Before Axel could even knock on the door,the two heard 2 voices.
"Rox-"
"Shh...i think...Xigbar and...Larxene are talking to eachother."
The two put there ears by the door,hearing on what they're
saying.

~Other side of the door~

"Ok Ok...so it's my fault for getting us two in trouble.."
Xigbar laughed.
"Yeah your fault alright...not mines."
Larxene took her fist out.
"Why you..."
Xigbar put a hault.
"Ok...i'm sorry...for the fault thingy...or whatever."
Larxene took a breath and looked straight to Xigbar.
"Listen we should apologize to eachother ...but.."
"But what?"
"But when we say sorry to eachother we cannot get along."
Xigbar nodded.
"Your right..so truce?"
"Truce."
Xigbar sighed and so did Larxene.
"I'm sorry Xigbar."
"I'm sorry Larxene."
Larxene smiled deviously.
"Now we need to go tell Xemnas that
we said sorry to eachother."
The two nodded and opened the corridor.Then disappeared.

~Other side of the door~

Roxas and Axel smiled.
"They're gone"
"Well Roxas,that went well."
It was getting late so time for bed.
"Well time to hit the sack."
"You mean hays?"
Axel laughed.
"Samething."
Axel walked away waving.


Wow.....I guess me and Axel well i think Axel is getting
the feeling that me and him would be friends.

But wait....Are we friends yet?


That's Chapter 4 Hoped you enjoyed it.:)

 

New Member #13 Chapter 5

I think the other chapter i did was good:D welp i hope you like this
one.



It was the next day in the Organzation.
~Roxas's Room~

Roxas opened his eyes slightly,then open wide.
He rubbed the two of eye.
"So quiet....and too quiet.."
Roxas turned the clock to him and looked at
the time.
"What!?only 3:00am?"
Roxas turned the clock back over and lied down on his bed.
It's so early...and too early.
Then Roxas heard the door knob turning.
Roxas gasped,and whispered to himself.
"Aww if it's Xemnas im in trouble!"
Roxas quickly pulled his blanket and put it on top of him.
Then after Roxas pretended he was sleeping.
Anways..The door opened.
All Roxas could hear was tiptoeing.
Then he heard the clock fall.
That's my clock i got it for my 13th birthday...well what a
waste of money.
Then the tiptoeing faded.
Roxas took the blanket off and looked around the room.
"Theres..no one."
Roxas got up and walked to his door.
He then opened the door and peeped his head out
in the hallway.
He then saw Axel walked through the hallway heading to his room.
"Axel?"
Axel was startled.
Axel turned around to look at Roxas.
"You scared me there Roxas.."
"Sorry..but what are you doing up so early?"
Axel was beginning to sweat..think of an excuse.
"Uh...um...i was...taking...a wash..room break."
Roxas nodded.
"But...what are you doing up so early?"
Uh-oh now he's asking me...think Roxas think...Think
of an excuse...but if i think of an excuse
I'd be lying to him and later on the day
he'll find out
and he'll never forgive me...
"Uh..Welll i can't sleep."
Axel walked over to Roxas.
"do you want to have a drink?"
"ok."
I don't know what..but didnt he just used the washroom
and he's taking a drink now!?
The two walked down the Hall.Heading
for the kitchen.
I wonder why is he inviting me to a drink?Maybe he's going to tell me that
me and him are friends!
No no that dumb..you can't just ask people to be their friend.

~Kitchen~

Roxas took a seat and put his head on the table.
Axel walked to the fridge looking for some juice.(Mango juice)
"So why are we taking a drink?"
Axel took out the mango juice and placed it on the counter.
"Well i always take drinks in the middle of the night.
so since i saw you awake i decided to invite you to a drink."
"Oh."
Axel grabbed the cups and placed them on the table and the mango
juice.
"Pour yourself."
Pour yourself?Now that just sounded rude..im getting the feeling
he doesnt want to be my friend.And if he's not going to be my friend.
Then im going to have to find another friend.
"Uh Roxas..here the mango juice is right there."
Roxas got up from his seat.
"Um..im not thirsty anymore..bye"
Roxas walked away.
Axel was confused.
Why didn't he want to take a drink.
Was is what i said or did i do something to him yesterday that
got him offended.
Roxas went to hit room and shut the door.
I need to get some sleep and starting tomorrow...er..today
im going to go find a new friend thats NOT like Axel.
But....

~Morning~

Everyone was in the Living watching tv while they eat.
"Hey Roxas."
Axel said waving.
Roxas ignored Axel and went to go sit beside
Zexion.
"Morning Zexion."
Zexion put his book down and looked at Roxas
annoyed.
"Morning..to u 2"
Axel frowned.
Maybe i did do something to Roxas,
he's ignoring him.
I should apologize to him so all of this would stop.
Zexion got up and walked off.
Roxas got up too and followed Zexion.

"Zexion wait up!"


That the end of Chapter 5
sorry if it was not long...
yeah anyways hoped you liked it:):D

 

Do you mind if I just make one tiny suggestion?

Well when you write stories, it's better to use complete words. I don't know if that was a mistake out of habit or if it's just a peeve of mine but seeing people use chat speak in stories it a bit bothersome.

please don't be discouraged :)

Other than that great story!

Keep up the good work!

 

New Member #13 Chapter6

Well yeah..suggestions........dunno y...but i'll take it
i don't mind.
unless...its not to much
anyways enjoy chapter6.Roxas finding a new friend besides Axel.
man what the hearts he doing?



Back where we were Zexion left the living
and Roxas left the living room also
"Zexion!Wait up!"
Zexion stopped and turned around.
"Um..ok i waited.."
Then Zexion turned around and continued to walk.
Roxas followed Zexion.
Oh boy oh boy...me and Zexion are going
to be great friends!
We both...well nothing in common for now but.
i'll find out soon enough.
"What kind of book it that?"
"My spell book."
Roxas seemed suprised.
Zexion then took out his book and opened it,beginning to read.
Roxas didn't know what kind of spells were in that book.(obviously)
While they were walking down the hall Roxas leaned over to take
alittle peep.
Zexion immidiantly closed the book.(sorry for spelling)
"Sorry but..you can't look in this book."
"Why?"
Zexion sighed in annoyance.
"Because."
Just then Roxas was about to say Because why?
But he didn't want to go too far.
Otherwise he would get Zexion mad.
"Roxas...not to hurt you or anything..but
you don't need to follow me,just to be my friend."
Roxas froze.
What!?
How did he know,I was wanting to be his friend?!
"Roxas..snapp out of it!"
Roxas just stoof there,then after he made his move.
"Um..how-"
Zexion smiled, and pointed at his book.
"My Spell Book."
The after Zexion walked away down the hall.
Woah...that was way freaky...well theres no hopes
to be Zexions Best bud now..might as well try...
Xemnas!


~Xemnas's office~

OK..i arrived at Xemnas's office...now..."
He knocked on door.
What am I doing?
Is this the dumbest thing or what?
"Come in...if you dare hehe."
Roxas was puzzled by his words?
"Dare?but i only came to just-"
"im just joking...now im not joking anymore
come in."
Roxas turned the knob slowly and pushed the door opened.
Xemnas was sitting on his big chair.
Woah...what a big chair...I wonder how much is was..$?
"Sit down..if you came in here to talk to me."
Roxas nodded slowly.
Man this is like detention..or...the principal getting
ready to exspell you.(then again mybad for my typing.)
As Roxas was sitting down Xemnas turned his chair around
facing the window.
"You need?"
"Uh..well...i want to be your....friend?"
All Xemnas could do was laugh with tears.
"Be your friend!?Haha your dismissed!"
Uh..what just happened...?
As soon as i leave this door i must forget what just happend
in there.
Roxas got up slowly and walked out the office.
"Close the door!"
Roxas was startled.
Man pushover...or..bossyman.
I don't know which.
Roxas closed the door and walked away.


~Luxord's Room~


"Ok...Next is Luxord.
all i have to do is ask him to be my friend
but..nah nevermind."
Roxas knocked on the door hard enough
so Luxord could here.
Because all Roxas could here was shooting.
"Who is it?"
"It's me the mailman...what do you think?
it's Roxas!"
"Because of that you'll pay me 20 munny
and you'll pay me 5 munny to come into
my room."
Well theres no other choice.
Roxas digged in his pockets to make sure
he had munny,and enough munny.
Luxord opened the door slightly and hand his hand out.
Waiting for the munny.
"25 munny Roxas.."
Roxas placed the munny on Luxord hand.
"HeHe."
Luxord then pulled his hand back in and closed the door.
WHAT!?
Rip off!
He just took my munny..thats the last time im getting ripped off
like the old days....
Then the door opend.
"Come in now,or you'll pay more munny."
Roxas quickly walked in the room.
He then looked around the room in sudden suprised.
Munny bags,a coin beanbag!
Wow...
"Ok you can stop looking around my room...
and yes i did alittle decorating if you didnt know.
and also..would you like to play some "Metal of Honor?"
Roxas then looked at Luxord and nodded.
Wow..what a room,
i only have a picture of me and a clock and closet...and bed...
Man i need to get some more stuff to my room.
Luxord then passed the control to him and offered him to sit
on the coin beanbag.
"Thanks."
"Don't go thanking me just yet...who ever wins gets 100 munny...deal?"
"Ok..how many rounds?"
"Dunno..unless one of us get tired of playing haha."

~An Hour later~

"I give up!"
Roxas said getting ready to leave the room.
"Aww why?"
"Your winning each round and i lost 5000 munny!"
"hehe you can get the munny back..if..if you do my
chores nextweek."
Roxas gritted his teeth together.
"Get real."
Roxas then turned knob until Luxord
snapped his fingers.
For his attention.
"Um...i don't get "real"."
"Remember..im a nobody."
Roxas couldn't believe the words from Luxord's lip.
After Roxas went through the door and slammed it as hard as he can.
Was the an insult!?Or a come back!?
I don't know but i see that Luxord's the guy that is the same as....No wait...
Im starting all of this..
I'm so desperate to find friends that i forgot....
Axel's the one whos my friend.

Axel...

Me...

Friends....


Well that was kinda confusing to me..and i hope i did this story right....
and yeah.
Almost close to Chapter 10
just 4 chapters away and im finished my first story:D

 

New Member #13 Chapter 7

Well this is chapter 7.
Enjoy.


It was the next day in the Organization.
Roxas woke up early getting dressed up.
It was his turn to make breakfast.
"Ok...im ready..no to the kitchen!"
Then a bang went on his wall.
Perhaps Roxas yelled that out..to loud...

~Kitchen~

Roxas went to the fridge looking for some eggs.
"Oh your kidding me..no more eggs."
He rolled his eyes and sighed unhappily.
Now what should i make?
I only have 1 hoour to make breakfast for all the members, so
i better hurry!
Roxas quickly went on to cooking.
Boy this is hard.
It was a mess in the kitchen.
There then Roxas went back and forth from the table to the kitchen,
table to kitchen.
"Whew..im beat."
The clock then moved it's hand to the 8.
Roxas then looked up and looked at the time.
" 8 o'clock perfect timing."
Then all you can hear was the footsteps walking
towards the kitchen.
Roxas gasped in sudden suprised.
"Oh..man...i didn't clean...darn
how could i miss that!?"
Before anyone entered the kitchen, Roxas quickly rushed and blocked the door.
Um..what plan, what plan...oh!
"Sit in the living room,you can eat there,il serve you."
Xemnas crossed his arms and raised his left eye brow.
"Why? Why do we have to go eat in the living room?hmm?"
Roxas started to panic, thinking of an excuse.
"Well because,we always eat at the kitchen table,so why
not the living room?"
Xemnas still had his arms crossed.
Then he un-crossed them and pushed Roxas from blocking the way.
He then walked in and looked around.
"What a mess...Roxas,your not going to have any breakfast...
instead your going to clean the kitchen until there are no marks!"
Axel put his hand on Xemnas's shoulder.
"But..Xemnas isn't that kinda harsh?"
Xemnas grabbed Axels hand and took it off his shoulder.
"He should have learned 2 days ago..he's with the Organization now
..and should get the hang of it by now.Right Roxas?"
Roxas shrugged.
"Well actually-"
Xemnas interrupted Roxas.
"Good...now everyone except for Roxas go get your plates and go to the
living room to eat there."
Everyone nodded and went straight for their plates and then to the living room.
As Axel was passing by Roxas...he felt sorry for Roxas..
He then looked away and kept on walking.

~thirdy minutes later~

Roxas was still scrubbing the floor,with a sponge.
Everyone then walked into the kitchen,full.
"Boy that was good thanks Roxas!"
Roxas tried to smile at Xigbar.
Xigbar, then left the kitchen.leaving his do the work.
Then after everyone came into the kitchen and dropped there plates gently into
the sink.
When Axel put his plate in the sink he looked at Roxas.
"Um do you want any help?"
Roxas looked up and smiled.
"su-"
"No you won't help Axel,Roxas shall do his order i gave him.
alone!"
Axel's fist closed.(the sign of anger)
"But i want to help him!"
Xemnas crossed his arms.
"Fine you can help...but...not with him..you'll be cleaning Vexen's
lab room,until it's spick and spean....clean.."
Axel frowned and ran out the kitchen.
Roxas's eye were getting all watery.
Xemnas then left the kitchen,leaving Roxas all alone.
Then a tear came down to Roxas's cheek.
"It's not fair...it would have been nice if Axel did help..but thanks
to Xemnas,he can't help me anymore."
Roxas wiped his tears off and went back to work.


If Xemnas doesn't want me to hang with Axel.
Then i shouldn't hang with Axel.
We can't be friends.
Only enemies...
Is this a bad thing?
I think it is.
But...
I think it's the best for both of us and Xemnas.



~Living Room~

Roxas was lying down on the sofa all bored.
Then Axel came, and sat down beside him.
"Still upset?"
"Go away..or get out."
Axel couldn't believe the words that were coming out
of Roxas's mouth.
"What?What did i do to you?"
Roxas didn't answer.
"Roxas!I'm talking to you! What did i do to you!?"
There was still no answer.
Axel got all fired up and grabbed Roxas's hood from behind.and pulled
him up.
Roxas then tried to get Axel's hands off him.
"Hey!!Let go...of Me!!!"
"First you let go of me!"
The terror begins.

Axel
Roxas
Fighting
no...it can't...be.



I hoped you liked it:)
Next Chapter don't know when it will come out but yeah:D