Well this is a new drawing I did a few weeks ago.She took me a couple of days to draw but I was able to finish her.Not sure how many of you saw my other drawing of a guy named Kentaro Matsumoto.Like I said in that thread,this girl is also from the same story that Kentaro is from.Her name is Kaori Hitsugaya. http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r77/vma_92/HPIM0897.jpg She wasn't meant to look up but I left it like that because I thought it looked better than what I first thought. lol I had a little trouble with her crest necklace but I was able to get it.Its not perfect but better than any other way it first came out. I would appreciate CnC,please.
IMO The head is too large for the body and the eyes need to be a little less big... Her facial proportions are off balanced towards her cheeks. I like the idea of this person you're drawing.. Better than what i can do... <3
I think that the shoulders should be wider than the head, but from what I can see, its a great job as to now!!
I especially love the eyes and hair + expression!! It emphasises her character in so many ways... And gives us a perspective to her personality!
Ooo~ how lovely! <33 You all can create and draw animé characters so much better than I can. Dx Ok, love, I really like this drawing. She is gorgeous! And I honestly love the expression in her eyes as well. But you're having the same problems you had with Kentaro. Yes, just like Kentaro, it's her right cheek. She seems to be missing her mandible when it comes to that, meaning her jaw bone is missing. All you need to do to fix up her lovely little face is to add in the mandible, emphasizing her face structure little more vividly. Now, I cannot help but feel that the lips are bit awkward. Well, not really, but it just doesn't seem to be going along with her expression, if you know what I mean. Her expression in her eyes are a little lost, while her lips kind of say “omg!â€. O.o So just fix that up. Her hair... well I like the style, but add more natural flow to it. You've given her the volume a head full of hair needs, but the strands seem to sort of droop down somehow. Maybe a little bit of volume added to the bangs would be good too. There's nothing all that wrong with her hair, to which I can actually point out to you and rant about it, but the ONLY thing I will and constantly rant about is the lack of flow. 8D Proportions. As other's have said... The head is too big for the body. He shoulders need to be slender and bigger. Compare your own head to your shoulders and see the difference, and how far they extend from the neck. Well, love, then that is all. ^_^- Except for these four things, it's a very lovely picture indeed. Keep up the good work and continue posting your works. ;) I'll look forward to them. Oh, and practice shading. I know you can do it... I know you have the skill for it. You're a painter after all. ;)
Wow.That's the longest CnC I've ever had XD thanks.I'll work on it.I haven't drawn for a while so I'm kind of rusty,I think.I know two people that are better than me but they deny it *coughPyrocough* and someone else XD But thanks again for comments.
