Traditional Art New drawing but not new style

If you saw the pictures I posted before...this is one that I drew yesterday because I was bored xD But I tried to focus on doing a way different drawing then I usually do. So what do you think???

Akarui
http://s49.photobucket.com/albums/f269/xxrentedheart/?action=view&current=lastscan-25.jpg

 

ummmm lets see.... the head is a little too skinny....its bunched up in a way and the neck is a little too thin.try working on proportions but i think the shading is very good

 

^.^ thanks I tried my best on the shading xD Yeah I agree with you ill try to fix it later, thanks

 

I agree. She seems a bit lanky. But great job on the shadding.:) :) :) :) :)

 

lol, When I said "You should go for different poses" I was implying something a little more 'dynamic' or something in action, but it's still good to see that you're breaking out of that set mold for your concept art.