Need story feedback!

I REALLY NEED story feed back on Yume's wish...if I don't get at least 2 more replies...I'm not gonna post the next chapter. THAT'S RIGHT PEOPLE!! I ALREADY GOT THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! >D BUT,I won't post it untill I get at least 2 more replies. The more you comment, the more I write!

 

what's wrong with you!?

this is the worst thing you could do to your fan-fic.

now , it just seems like youre cheaply trying to make your fan-fic popular.

you shouldn't be making stories , if you think they are about people commenting on it.

if they don't comment, well...can't do anything about it can you?

if youre that desperate,i'll read it and comment.

but i feel ive lost most interest just by reading this post.

 

Quoted for truth! This is nothing more than shameless self-promotion.

 

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DON'T BLAME ME!! I just wanna know how people feel about my story! Do they like it? Do they hate it? I just want to know!!!

 

If you are truely wanting critiques, ask the writer's family or writer's corner to take a look at your work.

If you want someone to tear it to pieces, give me a few days.

 

You shouldn't do this. If your story is good, it'll get replies. If it isn't it won't. You just gotta have patience. Someone will come across it eventually. I was worried about the same thing when I first posted my story here, but then lots of people replied and now it's pretty popular xD

Note to self - Post epilogue already damn it!

 

that didn't take me two days and you've got a brutally honest response in your thread.

 

That reply was indeed honest Shades.. if a little brutal *hides under rock*

 

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I guess I was being kinda persistent about the whole reply thing... GOMENASAI!!!! I'm too pushy for my own good!!! :(