Digital Art Need some pointers!

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Noroz, Apr 5, 2011.

  1. Noroz I Wish Happiness Always Be With You

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    Hey guys, I'm a bit stuck right now, it's not finished yet, but this is what I have so far

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    Suggestions?

    I know the light in the middle is strange and also the C4D in front of Sora's head.
     
  2. Kubo Kingdom Keeper

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    I like it... neat. What bugs me though is Kairi's side, where the background doesn't fit completely with her... I think it would be better if the background there was smoother, like it is on Sora's side.
     
  3. Noroz I Wish Happiness Always Be With You

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    Yeah, I think I might be doing some smudge and maybe throw in some C4D with low opacity and overlay or soft light... Thanks :)

    Keep on coming with suggestions people!
     
  4. Daxa~ #stalker

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    I liiiike it!!!
    Yeah the background on Kairis side doesnt fit in with her.....but it still looks good xD
    The light on Sora is a bit dark...like maybe lighten it up a bit?
    But it is super beautiful :D
     
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    Multi stock tags are very tricky... I suggest focusing on one at a time.
    Trust me, you'll probably be able to finish this yourself if you make two separate tags instead of a jumbled one :)
     
  6. Noroz I Wish Happiness Always Be With You

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    Yeah, I thought of that, but it's actually the same render, only I duplicated it and moved it to the edge, Kairi and Sora are originally sitting back to back. I probably will change it though.