My newest. I really like it, though I'm a little iffy on the text thought :\ CnC? v2 v3- This is how it was originally supposed to come out from the tut.
The text needs some major work. Maybe set it to Overlay...? I'm not really understanding the render here. Is that big yellow gap apart of him? I like the splatter effect, bu you should lower the opacity a bit. They look too slapped on. The right and left side really doesn't match, but they are done very well. Sorry I can't be of more help, I'm getting tired, lol. EDIT: Version 2 is defiantly the best.
Um...what is it? I can't tell what the render/stock is. It's completely random to me. The text needs some serious work. 4/10 Sorry, pal.
I'm gonna have to agree with Raito here, I don't really know what the focus of this is apart from a huge, yellow chasm.
Ok, I redid the first two according to what Misty said and came up with these. Lowered the opacity on the splatter, and messed with the text. v2 btw, the big yellow 'chasm' is a part of the render's helmet. and that's his gun to the right. What I was going for was a calm left side, and just chaotic right side. I don't feel like explaining the rest. This is the render: here
Wow, much better than the other in my opinion, your getting much. It has fairly good flow to it, my eyes are being drawn around good to get everything. The lighting in this was also very well done. I say resize the render/stock and I think that is it. Looks awesome good job.
ok,the color scheme is well done,and your brought your light to your focal like its supposed to be.text,dont set your text to overlay the whole time.but if ya are lower the opacity a bit so it looks a bit better.Effects,i love the effects you used on this tag,You blended in your render well,with the effects on his left side.i like the second vs1 you did.i like the color you used for it.although i would suggest a few blue photo filters at low opacity and than a couple more warm ones.what i like to do is image>apply image than i go to invert.and set that to a good blending option and than lower the opacity so it looks good and has some extra color.I say this is one hell of a good tag,and your getting way better NRA.keep up the good work.
Commenting on the first one, I have to say the text placement needs some work and so does the backround since it doesnt really flow well with the character in the sig. This one is alot better in my eyes. The text really made me like it a whole lot better. Nice work.
I like V3 alot. It stands out, and the render is actually very nicely placed. The splatter could be better, such as making it so they're all like.... circles..... not half little circles. IMO, you should take the slatter on the left out. Nice job.
