Naruto: The Dark Trial

SPOILER ALERT!

Story​

The Akatsuki have risen Pain. With his power, they begin to hunt the Jinchuuriki once again. The Hokage states that it's just a rumor, but the citizens and Ninjas say different. The Hidden Village of the Sand go on high alert, and squads from all over the land were sent out to investigate this. Most of them never returned. A wounded came back, and reported to the Hokage that the Akatsuki have risen Pain, and they are hunting the Jinchuuriki. The Hokage sends a few squads to stop them once again.

Rules​

-No Powerplaying.
-No Godmodding. I'M SERIOUS.
-Use proper grammar. I don't care if this is the Internet. My thread, my rules.
-Keep Jutsus to a limit.
-No "survivors of dead clans". It's overrated.
-Listen to your Squad's leaders.
-Post "The Akatsuki Return" so that I know you've read all the rules.
-I use a "three strikes, you're out!" rule, meaning if you break these rules three times, I"m forcing your character death. Not a good way for a Shinobi to die, right?
-Ignore rule #7.

OC Forms​

Username:
Name:
Gender:
Personality:
Appearance:
Bio:
Rank:
Side[Allies or Akatsuki]:
Clan[Ignore this if you're on the Akatsuki's side]:
Jutsus/Affinities:
Weapons[If any]:

Accepted OCs:
Username: The Graceful Assassin
Name: Ickaigo Uematzu
Gender: Male
Age: 40
Personality: He is very nice to his squad-mates. He orders them around a lot, and always takes charge. He enjoys his time every time he goes off of missions.
Bio: He once fought the Akatsuki when he was first named Shinobi. He used to have a brother, but he perished under Pain's might.
Rank: Jonin
Village: Village Hidden in the Leaves
Appearance: http://i499.photobucket.com/albums/rr353/superninja07/Anime/thumb_flex-1208028841495360_file.jpg
Side[Allies or Akatsuki]: Allies
Clan[Ignore this if you're on the Akatsuki's side]: Nara
Jutsus/Affinities: Shadow Clone, Fire-Style FireBall, Earth Style Head Hunter, Wind Style Wind-Blade, Substitution, and Transformation.
Weapons[If any]: Kunai, Exploding notes, and Shurikens.

Other​

When RP starts, report to your squad's leaders. Start out where your squad's village is, which is where leaders will be.

Squads​

Squad #1:
Leader: Ickaigo Uematzu-Nara (The Graceful Assassin)
Member: Yoichi Yamanaka-Nara (Bubble Master Califa)
Member:
Member:

Squad #2:
Leader:
Member:
Member:
Member:

Squad #3:
Leader:
Member:
Member:
Member:

Squad #4:
Leader:
Member:
Member:
Member:

 

Don't you mean "Ignore rule 7"?

Username: xXRhian+RoxasXx
Name: Tomoko (male name), Asahina (real name)
Gender: Female
Personality: Quiet and keeps to herself but she is very loyal. She's pretending to be a guy.
Appearance: um...
Bio: She was taken in by Akatsuki and he's the only one who knows she is a girl, not male. Being his loyal servant, she trained under him.
Rank: ?
Side: Akatsuki
Jutsus/Affinities: She can go into the Spirit world and enter other people's/animal's bodies and take control.
Weapons: A katakana

 

there it and may I be leader of squad #3

 

You didn't read all the rules.

It has potential, but they're some things wrong I'll point out. First, there are only seven ninja swordsman. Weapons are like Kunai or Shurikens, not swords. Second, I'm not sure if the Jutsu you chose exists. I might be wrong, though. Choose more than one. And the Akatsuki are a group, not a person. If you need help, consult this guide: http://www.leafninja.com/

 

Username: daxma
Name: Killer Bee/ Kirabi Yotsuki
Gender: Male
Personality: see http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Killer_Bee
Appearance: see http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Killer_Bee
Bio: see http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Killer_Bee
Rank: Jounin
Side[Allies or Akatsuki]: Allies
Clan[Ignore this if you're on the Akatsuki's side]: Yotsuki
Jutsus/Affinities: see http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Killer_Bee
Weapons[If any]: see http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Killer_Bee

 

It exists. (from mini ninjas.... -facepalm-) I can change it if you tell me more?

I didn't know that! -changes- Here, better?

Username: xXRhian+RoxasXx
Name: Tomoko (male name), Asahina (real name)
Gender: Female
Personality: Quiet and keeps to herself but she is very loyal. She's pretending to be a guy.
Appearance: um...
Bio: She was taken in by The Atasuki but even they don't know that she's female.
Rank: ?
Side: Akatsuki
Jutsus/Affinities: She can go into the Spirit world and enter other people's/animal's bodies and take control. (if I can)
Weapons: A Kunai

 

List of Jutsus: http://leafninja.com/ninjutsu.php
Better, but rank and appearence are still missing. Use proper jutsu, a rank and appearence, and you're in. By the way, kunai are throwing knives.

 

[Well lets hope I did this well...I'll take being a member of team 1 if thats ok]

Username: Bubble Master Califa

Name: Yoichi Yamanaka-Nara

Gender: Male

Personality: Let's imagine something between unique and strange with a sprinkle of intellect. He's odd but he's quite chatty and friendly once he grows to know people. He prefers the handle of a pen over a kunai but when provoked can be quite an apathetic killer.

Appearance:
Well sorta like Alex james in this pic (The hair and body type): http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd145/Bubble_Master_Califa/RP Stuff/424116353_c6ec3ca93b.jpg

With this Jacket, scarf and sunglasses (The scarf is usually worn around his neck in except in climates with extreme weather like hot, cold or rain and the glasses are hidden in them except for battle and those climates because they've got goggles hidden beneath the first layer of spectacles like Gaga's shades in the paparazzi pic): http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/...ifa/RP Stuff/GagaJacketandScarfwithshades.jpg

And the eye make-up here without the tear marks unless we go to Amegakure then that happens: http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd145/Bubble_Master_Califa/RP Stuff/TheFamemonster.jpg

And as a Yamanaka he loves flowers but has heyfever so he has a synthetic flower corsage on his wrist a bit like this thing on her head but wayyyy smaller: http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd145/Bubble_Master_Califa/RP Stuff/lady-gaga-alejandro.jpg

To imagine the rest it'll just be black skinny jeans with about five belts slung on him with unique buckles (like the main one has a real zippo lighter as the buckle and the rest are like guns, cards, the theatre face and a flower) with ankle high punkish boots with laces.

Bio: Well he's an illegitimate love child of Inoichi Yamanaka's older sister Matsuko and a man who ahem *abused her* from Sai's clan [but his heritage is unknown except it reflects in his artistry skill used in battle and hobbies]. He was raised with love and gained a kind stepfather from the Nara family when he was 12 and adopted the surname to his own determined to keep his roots [ironically he's not blonde like all the Yamanaka's]. His abilities at the mind possesion and confusion jutsu are mediocre as his talent lies in genjutsu based on writing characters[kanji] and make-up [its so good it can be used to reate/keep a transformation justu permanent until cancelled by him]. He has high chakra control and was personally taught by Shizune how to do healing jutsu and some of her poison skills. (Has a history of poor romances so is single and unhappy but coping)

Rank: Chunin for 2 years now.

Side[Allies or Akatsuki]: Allies

Clan[Ignore this if you're on the Akatsuki's side]: Yamanaka

Jutsus/Affinities: All basic academy skills, Mind possession and mind confusion jutsu, Several genjutsu [some old, some new but nothing overbearing, more defensive than offensive], mystical palm technique [not very talented at, still learning it], Poison removal technique, Poison mist technique and prepared needle shot.

Weapons[If any]: Plenty of Senbon [hidden on him and many poison treated], Some shuriken, a kunai and his favourite little bull whip, [his make-up kit of 100 shades is a weapon as it could take only a few strokes to craft genjutsu]

 

I approve.