Naruto a lost story

I want you guys out there to tell me how i can fix my story. Thanks. now the story beings.

As we all now know the story of a boy named Naruto was born with the nine tailed fox. And Sasuke's brother Itachi killed his family, right? Well you were worng. This is about a girl who saved her family.

Sasuke walked down the to the kicten to greet his mom and dad.''Moring.'' he said.''Good moring, Sasuke'' Mom said.''Are you ready for school?'' his dad said. Sasuke noded. He was always ready for school. Then Itachi wakes up. He is not the type to mess with. ''Big brother, I was wondering if you help me with the sharingan? I know you are better at it.'' he asked. At first Itachi did'nt anwser. Then he said,''Sorry, Sasuke.''Itachi.''You always say 'Sorry Sasuke'. And you never help me.''he said.

''Hey, Alex wake up.''Mother said.''Zzzz....''Alex was still asleep.''Man, that girl will never sleep in again.''Father said.''AAAAAHHHH!!!!!!''Alex yelled.''I'm soooo late.''

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''Not again. She always wakes up that way.''Mother said. Itachi heard and said''Alex you know your friend is goig to kill you.'' Alex didn't care. She ran the stiars not caring if she fell off.''Big sis? Can you help me? Big brother won't help me.''Sasuke said.''Maybe later because I'm very late.'' Alex said. She got up abd ran in to the door.''Alex!''Father said.''Oww.....Sasuke do not be me.......''Alex said. Then side the door open and wakled out.

 

its gets better
Sasuke saw Alex and left for school. He was happy that someone id going to help him for once. Alex got home before Sasuke did.''*sigh* What a long day. Oww my nose still hurts. Huh. Ahhh. Itachi, why are you home?'' Itachi said not a word than grab his sword and attack Alex. Sasuke was raning home, then saw that his whole family was killed.''W....What happend here?'' He ran to the house. Alex was still fighting Itachi and said''Why are you doing this?'' He still said nothing.

 

''Alex......Mom.......Dad.......''Sasuke said.''Sasuke, get out of here.''Alex said trying to get Itachi to stop.''Alex what happend?''Sasuke said.''Don't asked just do it. Ahhhhh............''Alex said when she was hit.''Sasuke, Do you fear me?''Itachi said. Sasuke ran away form him without knowing.''Foolish little brother. You can't run away from me.''Itachi said.''Why did you do this? Why?''Sasuke said crying. Itachi said nothing. Then out of nowhere Alex jumps on top of Itachi and to Sasuke''Run. Run and save your life. If you want to kill him, you need to get stronger.''Alex said.''Little sister, you think you can stop me?''Itachi said.''Maybe not, but I still can stop you.''Alex said. Sasuke got up and ran away as fast as his legs can take him.

 

g2g this is the last one for today and you don't mind bad words, right?

Itachi tried to get Alex off of him but couldn't do it. So he grabed his sword and killed her.''You can't.....kill...me......that.......easy!''Alex said as her vocie fainted.''You could never kill me, Alex.''Itachi said. 4 years later, Sasuke was 12 years old. He was with Naruto, Sakura.

 

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Sasuke saw that there was a new student in the class. But he didn't care. ''Hey, whos the new kid?'' Someone said. Alex didn't say anything. She just walked to her desk and sat down. ''Sasuke! Oh he's soooo cute!'' the girls said in the class. Naruto sat next to him without realising it. ''I don't get it. Why are the girls falling for him?'' Naruto thought. ''Naruto, get out of Sauske's face!'' Ino yelled. Then Alex asked a guy that was behind Naruto to push him into Sauske. So he did and Naruto kissed Sasuke. ''Wha.....What the hell.? Naruto you are soooo dead.'' Sakura yelled.

 

chapter 7

Alex took a picture of they. Then she moved Sakura on top of Sasuke and made Naruto hit himself. Then Sasuke saw Sakura on him. "Wait I thought it was Naruto on top of me? She must have hit him when I fell off the seat."Sasuke thought. Sakura got up and then Ino and the other girls saw her and got angery. "Sakura you pighead. I'm the only one to give Sasuke his first kiss." Ino said. The three were confued. "What the hell happened here?" Naurto yelled. Alex got up and went back to her seat. "Hey new girl. Who really kissed Sasuke?" Ino ased Alex. She didn't answer. "Hey I'm talking to you."Ino yelled as she got her arm and pushed her down the stairs. "Ino, you shouldn't push people down the stairs like that."Sakura said. Alex got up and walked to Ino and said"sakura is the one who kissed Sasuke. I have a picture." Then she showed Ino and the other girls the picture.

 

Thanks ^.^

Ino saw and was more angry. "If you don't like the turth, then leave." Alex said. "She acts like my sister. Wait she's dead. But what if..." Sasuke thought. Ino didn't say a word. "Why are you a=soo rude." a girl said. "Because its in my nature." Alex said when she sat next to the three. "Wow, your good." Naruto said. "Thanks" Alex was happy. Then Iruka walked in. He read ever sqaud. "Sqaud 7 will be Sasuke, Naruto, Sakura, and Alex. You will meet you jouin after lunch." "Hey Sakura do you want to have luch with me?" Naruto asked. "Why?" "Come on give him a chance." Alex whisbered. "She nods. "Okay I will." Salura said. They they sat down and ate their lunch. "Alex come here." Sasuke said. "What?" "Do you how what happened to the uchiha family?" Alex was shocked to hear this. "No. Sorry."

 

"Are you sure cause you act like my sister?" Alex shook her head. "I got to go." She got up and took a walk. "Hey Ino, look. Is that the girl you were talking about?" Choji said. "Yea thats her. Little pest." Ino said. Then at that moment she transfromed back to real self as a 17 year old girl. Who is the leader of the ANBU Black OP. "Look is that her." Choji said. "Look at the syombl. Isn't the for Uchiha." "Yea she is a Uchiha. Alex Uchiha." Ino said. "We got to go tell Sasuke." Then an ANBU Black OP appers brhind them and grabs Ino. 'Don't tell anyone or esle you will die a painful death.

 

Sasuke was still looking for Naruto and his brother. Alex was already there just trying not to get catch. "Naruto please come out we need to talk to you." Itachi said. naruto walked out of his room to the hallway. Then Sasuke finds them. "Itachi I will kill you here and now." Sasuke said as he ran to Itachi. "Go away you not inerst me at the momnet." Itachi said. "Itachi how many times do I have to tell you, not to hurt Sasuke like that." Alex said. "Who is that?" Kismae said. "My, my little sister you look so much older. But it a pitt that I have to kill you." Itachi said as he ran after Alex. Alex loves it when he chase her. "Catch me if you can sucker."

 

Yea there are.

"Quit running and fight." Itachi said. Alex lead him to a field with no one around. "Who's running." Alex said. "Sasike are you okay?" Naruto said when he ran to him. "Was that my sister?" Sasuke said. "Enough with this reuion. Naruto you're going with us." Kismae said when running to naruto. "Over my dead body" Sasuke said as his charka become stronger then normal. "Sasuke, you are learning how to protect your close friends. that is how I became strong to protect Sakura." Naruto said. "Ready? I never thought of that before." Sauke said when he was fighting Kismae.

 

While Alex and Itachi were fighting, Sasuke was too busy protecting Naruto. "How doid you surive?" Itachi said. "Why should I tell." Alex said. Itachi was getting very mad.

 

ooc: what is this reputation for. the Scale

itachi was not handing back this time, now he was going his all to kill her this time. "whoa, ahh, man this is hard now." Alex said when she was blocking all the attack he was doing. "You can stop me." "Yes I can. I did it before. I can do it again." Sasuke was getting wounded badly, nut all he cared was Naruto.

 

ooc:yea that

Itachi was still fighting Alex. "you gotten stronger shince the last time I saw you." "Well duh. Of corse I have. How do you think I became the ANBU leader? Huh? Huh!" Itachi grabed her sword and slached her in the back. she fell to the ground. "Itachi please don't do this again. If you use that jutsu again next time you use it you will die." But Itachi didn't care. "Are you done yet little boy. Your not strong enough to defest me." Kismae said.

 

ooc:I see.

Itcahi ran off to find his little brother. Kismae get his sword and was ready to kill Sasuke. "Sasuke get up!" Naruto yelled to him. Thenhe attack him. But he wasn't dead. Sasuke looked up and saw Alex who jumped right in front of him before the sword hit him. "Alex why did you do it." Sasuke said with tears going down his face. "Because you still have.....a mission....to protect Naruto. You need to make sure he dose not....go with Itachi..." her voice faded. "You! You will pay with your life." Sasuke said as he became stronger then the four Hokage.

 

Kismae was in deep troble. Sasuke came at him full charge. And then he killed Kisame in a bink of an eye. Itachi saw and went back to headquters. Naruto saw and walked to Sasuke. "Are you alright?" he said as he walked up. Sasuke fell into his arms. Then Guy came in and brought them to the hospital. Sasuke woke up and saw Naruto asleep in the chair next to him. He smiled and went back to sleep.

 

When they were both awake, they started to talk. "Hey Naruto, do you like Sakura or me?" Sasuke asked. "Oh no. Not good. I like Sakura better. But Sasuke is very cool. Hmm...." He thought. Then said "You. After the way you protected me. i think you are very strong."

 

to be honest that discusion kinda creeped me out a little >> lol ^^ I'm going to invite heartsof13 to read this =D

 

ooc:You think it is going in that dirtion. No. Naruto likes him as a friend. A new person os going to read it. Finally.

Sakura walked in and saw Sasuke in the bed and Naruto asleep in the chair. 'Naruto's so cute when he is asleep." she thought. "Sakura?" "oh I'm sorry. Did I wake you" Sakura said. "No. I was already awake. Do you know were Alex is?" Sasuke said. "Who?" Alex said when she walked in.

 

"Alex your still here. How can you still be alive?" Sasuke said. "Well lets see. *flash back* When I was attack by Kismae, I was able to make a clone and it get attack instead." Alex said. "You...your his sister right?" Sarkua said. She nods. Naruto woke up and saw the three. "Afternoon, Naruto." Alex said in a gentle voice. "When did you get here, Sarkua?" Naruto said in soft voice. "A while ago. Are you feeling alright?" she asked. "I think so." Naruto said. "Naruto I want you to meet Alex. Alex is my older sister who some how stayed alive when Itachi killed the family." "Glad to meet you Naruto. And I have a gift for you, Sasuke." There was a knock on the door. "Enter." Alex said.