Mylachia's Story Chapter 1

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Did you think Kairi was the mom in my fanfic?

  1. Yes, it was so obvious!

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  1. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    Kind of...my favorite shows are on tomorrow night so...no time...Thursday I'm celebrating my g'parents anniversary...Friday...no school...that might workk...
     
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    Oh, my gosh! Hurry!! Post the next chapter, quick, before I die from the suspense!!!!!:eek: This is sooo cool!!:D
     
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    Ok...didn't know it was that good...lol....I probably won't be able to post it til Sunday night....

    *gets hit*

    No hitting the author!!!!
     
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    I can't wait for it tonight.
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    Awww it ain't on D:

    Who hit you?
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    Please don't shoot me!!:eek: I SWEAR it wasn't me! I would NEVER hit her!! She makes the most awesome stories ever! She's too cool! Help me, khchick55!:eek: Anyway, I'll stop now. Just put your gun down and find the real culprit, iPraise. LOL.:)

    Aww, Sunday? Well, that's okay. Just don't leave everyone hanging forever like you did with Chapter 7!:D Keep up the good work!
     
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    Mylachia's Story Chapter 8

    Hey guys, it’s finally up!!! *silence* Aww, come on!!! *applause* Yay!!! :D

    Anyways, this chapter is mostly explanations and such, and it’s long, so there isn’t really much action. And sorry guys, no cliff hanger like my previous chapters. I also want to say I threw one little theory out there about the chasers, so don’t take it seriously...unless you want to. So, without further ado....here’s the next chapter!!!


    Chapter 8

    By the time Mylachia had come back to the table, almost everybody was gone. A few men were still at the bar and the only other people she saw where Magdalena and Devyn. Magdalena had a smirk on her face with her arms crossed. Devyn’s face was more calm and welcoming. Mylachia then walked up to Devyn and said “Let’s go.” She just glanced at Magdalena, who still had that smirk. She then whispered in Magdalena’s ear, “I need to talk to you...about my brother.”

    “Yeah, whatever.” Magdalena said as she walked towards the door to the outside. Mylachia too started to walk towards the door when she felt a hand touch her shoulder. She looked behind her to see Devyn, with a concerned look on his face. He then walked in front of her to get a full view of her.

    “Ya okay, Myla?” Devyn asked as he put his arm around her shoulders. Mylachia just glanced at him and gave him a little grin.

    “Yeah, I’m fine.” Mylachia then quickly ran ahead of him, making him release his grip around her. “Come on, we have to go.” She then ran out the door with Devyn right behind her.

    “Hey, what took you guys so long?” Magdalena said as she took off her leather jacket, revealing her bare arms and shoulders. “Sure is hot out, ain’t it?” She then moved her hair from in front of her right eye revealing her mysterious, dark brown eyes “All, right. So, what now?” Magdalena said as she tied her jacket around her waist.

    Mylachia looked around the town to see if she can see any life at all. She then noticed that a store still had it’s lights on and a man was standing behind the counter. “Well, I guess we go get supplies...”

    “But, we don’t have any munny.” Devyn interrupted. “How are we going to get supplies if we don’t have any munny?” Magdalena then shook her head and chuckled.

    “Here.” She then snapped her fingers and help her hand open. A few seconds later, a brown bag appeared in her hand. She tossed it up and caught it by the string that closed it shut. “Use this,” she said as she threw it to Devyn. He caught it and untied it to reveal at least 5000 munny.

    “How’d you get this?” He said as he put the bag in his pocket.

    “I have my ways. Just a little trick of mine. You’ll see more...don’t worry.” She said as she turned around and started to walk towards the store.

    “Magdalena...” Mylachia started to say.

    “Just call me Mag.” She said this with a firm voice as she stopped in her tracks.

    “Fine. Mag, let Devyn go. I need to talk you.” Mylachia then walked up to Mag and beckoned Devyn to follow. Devyn did as he was told. He walked up to Mylachia and gave a stern glance towards Magdalena. Then he continued to walk towards the store. “So...tell me again, how do you know my brother?”

    Magdalena just gave a little chuckle and then she put her thumb and index finger underneath her lips. “Like I said, I didn’t really know him...not until his death.” Magdalena then untied her jacket from around her waist and put it back on. Mylachia watched her every move, making sure that she didn’t make any sudden movements. She then noticed a metal object in an inner-pocket of her jacket.

    “What’s that? Mylachia said as she pointed at the object. Magdalena looked at Mylachia with a confused look, then she looked at the area that Myalchia was pointed towards. She gave a little smirk as she reached for the object. As she pulled it out, Mylachia could clearly see what it was. It was a sleek, black gun. “Why on earth do you have a gun?” Mylachia said as she crossed her arms.

    “Oh this old thing?” Magdalena said as she tossed gun from her left hand to the her right. “Don’t even remember bringing it.” She then held out the gun to Mylachia. Mylachia just stared down at the object and then looked at Mag. “Take it Myla. It’s yours. I don’t need it anymore.” Mylachia hesitated to take the gun, but she finally gave in and took it from Mag’s hand.

    “Really?” Mylachia then tried to find a place to put the gun, but found none. “Maybe I should get a holster....actually, I think I should give this to Devyn.” Mylachia said as she tightened her grip on the object.

    “Whatever pleases you...now back to the subject of your brother.” Magdalena then crossed her arms and sighed. “I was always on the sidelines, watching your brother grow stronger and stronger with his heart and body. Do you know how he really was killed?” Mylachia shook her head. She wanted to know with all her heart, she wanted to know what cruel person could actually kill her brother. “His chaser got him.”

    “His...what? Was someone stalking him?” Mylachia asked she felt her left hand form in to a fist.

    Magdalena just chuckled at her answer. “No. A chaser is similar to a heartless and a nobody. It’s part of someone. The heartless contains the heart of the person, the nobody contains the body of the person. The chaser, contains the mind.” She could tell that Mylachia was gathering up all the information as if it was a jigsaw puzzle. “Anyways, his chaser, Samor, was a part of Squadron X, now Squadron IX. He was sent on one and only mission. To kill Sora, so that he would be the keyweilder. That’s what the Squadron wanted, so he tried his best. He succeeded, he killed Sora with a keyblade through the heart. He died almost instantly. At least, w-they’re pretty sure it was Sora. No, they’re sure it was Sora who was killed.”

    Mylachia could feel tears going down her cheeks. She instantly rubbed them away. She then looked down and rubbed her boot against the sand as if she was thinking. “Samor....why does that sound familiar?”

    “I could possibly tell you why.” Mylachia looked up in curiosity. “Samor is an anagram of your brother’s name, added with an ‘m’. Sora plus ‘m’ equals Samor. In order to be a part of Squadron 9, the leader puts in an ‘m’ in your original name, so you have a new identity. Strangely, though, after your brother was killed, Samor went missing. They haven’t been able to find him, since.”

    “I see...” Mylachia then saw someone coming back from the store. It was Devyn. She quickly ran to his side. “Devyn, hi.” She then noticed that he had a few supplies. “So..what do you have there?”

    “Well, I...where’d you get that?” He looked at the gun at Mylachia’s hand, then back at Mylachia.

    “Oh this? Mag gave it to me. But...you can have it, since you don’t have a weapon.” She then opened up one of Devyn’s jean pockets, and put the gun in there.

    “Uh...thanks...anyways. I got a back pack to put all the food water and the remaining money into. I guess we’ll take turns carrying it from time to time.” He then put the backpack on his shoulders and grinned. “I guess I’ll be first.”

    “I guess we’re all set.” Magdalena said as she walked towards the group.

    “She’s coming too?” Devyn said under his breath. He then felt an object hit his shoulder. He looked to see that it was Mylachia’s fist. “I take it she’s coming.” Mylachia just shook her head and proceeded to go foward.

    “Come on, guys. It’s getting late. We better find somewhere to stay.” Mylachia stated as she pursued to walk towards the desert.

    “That man said that since his kids left for college, he has two extra bedrooms and we’re welcome to stay the night.” Devyn said as he ran in front of Mylachia. “What do you say Myla?”

    She thought for a moment over the request. “Well, you think we could trust him?”

    “Trust him? He gave me a discount on all the items I bought. That’s why I have so much munny left! Come on Myla...we could actually get a good rest.”

    “Fine.” Mylachia walked towards the store. She soon realized that it was also a house for she saw the owner sitting on a couch, drinking out of a mug. “Come on Mag, don’t you want some rest?”

    “I’ll be in a sec. You guys go in.” Magdalena then put her fingers up against her ear and she gave a little nod. She then ran down the nearest alleyway.

    “I don’t trust her...” Devyn stated. He then turned the doorknob and walked inside the store.

    It was a nice, organized store. Everything had it’s place. There were two aisles for food, oneanother for drinks, and another for miscellaneous items. She walked down the aisle and looked around. She noticed a gun belt, with a holster attached. She picked it up and rubbed her fingers against it. It was smooth leather. “Devyn, you should get this. So you have a place to put your gun.”

    Devyn walked over and carefully eyed the object. He then shook his head. “Not a good idea. See this?” He pointed to a tiny tear on the top of the belt. “It could easily break...”

    “Then get that leather repair kit.” She pointed to a box, which was red and yellow.

    “I guess...hey Marv?” Devyn called out. He walked out of the aisle and towards the man that was sitting on the couch. Mylachia followed him, trying to figure out what he was up to. As she got closer to the man, she could make out his features. He had on a white flannel shirt and a red tie around his neck. He had a green apron tied around his waist, and underneath that he wore black pants. He also had black shoes and he had his hair brushed to the right side of his face. He also had a small mouth, and beady eyes, which were hidden by thin, rectangular glasses.

    “Marv, how much are these?” Devyn gave the man the belt and leather repair. Marv looked up at Devyn and then Mylachia, then back at the items that were handed to him.

    “You know what? I’mma give them to ya...I has enough money as it is.” He handed the items back to Devyn and looked at Mylachia. “Ya got a nice catch there, don’cha Devyn?”

    Devyn just gave a little smirk as he opened the box of leather repair. “Guess I do.” He then put the repair on top of the tear and let it dry. “Remember when you said you had a couple of rooms out to spare? Mind if me and my friends use them?”

    “There’s another one of ya? I guess so...not like anyone is gonna visit me any time soon...follow me.” He turned around and started to walk up the stairs. Mylachia started to follow when she heard the door in the front of the store open. She turned around to see Magdalena quietly closing the door.

    “Hey roomie...come on, he’s showing us which rooms are ours.”

    “Yeah, I’m coming.” Magdalena then walked towards Mylachia and walked up the stairs. “I’m beat, aren’t you?”

    “Yup.” Mylachia then walked up the stairs to see which room was hers.
     
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    THIS IS REALLY GOOD!
    I loved it!
     
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    Wow I'm impressed. Got to edit mine....
     
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    COOLNESS!!! Now we know more about the story!!!! Awesomeness!!!!
     
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    Thank you!!! Glad you liked it!!! :D
     
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    Sweetness! :D



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    ugh... I need to go work on my story. AH!
    ::gets mobbed by readers::

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    :D

    Glad you liked it...

    Ugh...I didn't do it...

    But, do continue...I luv yours! :D
     
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    This is really good! *applauds* One thing that I keep noticing that bugs me though, you've been typing something wrong in most or all of your chapters. The word "it's" is a contraction of "it is." You don't use it for the possessive thing. For example, you don't say, "The cat licked it's paw," because that would mean "The cat licked it is paw." The possessive one is just like "its." There's no apostrophe. I know that many people argue, "But you always have an apostrophe for a possessive word!" Not so. You don't say stuff like "your's" and "their's." That's just not how it works. So yeah.
    I'm not trying to show off or make you mad, I'm just a grammar freak.:) *notices a typo* GOSHDANGIT!!! *hits self* LOL!
     
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    I do that?!? 0.o
    Oh gosh, my communications teacher would kill me....
    I didn't even notice that, thanks!
     
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    You're welcome! Glad I could help!:D
     
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    Yes I <3 your story. lol... thanks.
    I haven't been typing much
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    But I've been thinking of more ideas... and I'm thinking they are all going to like it.
    ::laughs evily::
     
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    Psst....Imma let you guys in on something....

    Mylachia's gonna obtain a new keyblade in the next chapter...ya wanna see the drawing now, or later?