Mylachia's Story Chapter 1

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Did you think Kairi was the mom in my fanfic?

  1. Yes, it was so obvious!

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  2. No, I think you said those things to decieve us...

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  1. Invader Jack Twilight Town Denizen

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    Sweet! I do want to know what happens to Mylachia and her mom!:D
     
  2. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Thank you *takes tissue*
    *abnormally large noise comes from small girl* *sniff* Yeah, I'm good now.

    Self: Thanks *hands wet tissue out*
    You: Uhhh... no thanks *runs away*
    Self: *shrugs* ok...

    HAHA no j/k
    I've written tons of these "self" things.... I could put a thread out of them.....LOL
     
  3. Fork These violent delights have violent ends

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    Ok, the idea you had about the mom was sooooooooooo much better than kairi being the mom. I mean so many people thought it was Kairi, but you shot us down with that. :D

    Really awesome story KhChick. Bah, I was I had atleast 1/10 of your talent. -_-
    My fan-fics just suck.

    And you touched me (Uhmm, I mean in my heart) with this story. Which proves how good you are. I mean ME. I'm like emotionally dead.
    Hell I wouldn't be surprised if I discover one day that i'm a Nobody.xD
     
  4. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    I'm glad you liked it Forsaken.....and you are talented!!!!

    I can't believe how many people believed the mom WASN'T Kairi after all, in the last section a lot people said it was her....

    And you're not a nobody!!! You're a somebody!!! I'm glad you really liked it!!!
     
  5. twilit_shadow King's Apprentice

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    Oh my gosh...This is so FREAKIN COOL!!!! I'm trying really hard not to hyperventalate over it all.... I NEED MORE!!!!
     
  6. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    AND YOU WILL GET MORE!!!! I promise!
     
  7. Kingdom Glory Banned

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    w-wait...Kairi is Sora's mom?
    O.o
     
  8. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    um...no....where'd you get that idea?

    Oh, the poll? No, people were just discussing in my last fanfic that Kairi was Mylachia's mom....
     
  9. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    Mylachia's Story Chapter 5

    Hey guys! Sorry this took so long to put up, I was really busy this week. I know it's not as good and as long as my previous chapters, but this practically all I needed for this chapter. Tell me what you think!

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    Chapter 5

    Her mother quickly got up out of her chair, turned around, and punched one of the heartless, which knocked into another one, causing both of them to disappear. Her mother then kicked another one in it’s chest, causing to fall backward. The heartless quickly got up and grew, almost twice it’s original size, about 4 feet. It then lunged at Mylachia’s mother and started attacking, causing bruises on her face and the rest of her body. Her mother screamed in pain from what was happening to her.

    “Mom!” Mylachia then threw her hand down, summoning the keyblade. She ran to the creature and slammed the keyblade on top of it, causing it to disappear. “Yeah, and good riddance!” Mylachia yelled. After a few seconds, she heard a deep, painful groan coming from the floor. She looked down to see her lying on the floor, her eyes closed. “Mom!!”

    Mylachia knelt down and picked her mother up, leaning her against the cabinet. Her mother tried to open her eyes but they kept on closing. “My-Mylachia...” She stuttered.

    “Mom, what? What is it?” Mylachia asked her mother while moving the hair of her mother’s face.

    “G-go...find...Cedric and Devyn...keep them safe.” Mylachia’s mother closed her eyes for some rest. She was still breathing which made Mylachia feel better. She lifted her mother’s arm over her shoulder and picked her up, bringing her to the couch in the living room.

    “You’ll be safe, Mom. Don’t worry.” Mylachia kissed her mom on the forehead and ran upstairs to her brother’s bedroom. She stopped before she opened the door though, because she heard voices from within.

    “Are you sure this will take me to my dad?” Cedric said in a little, quiet voice.

    “Yes...” Mylachia recognized the voice. It belonged to the man that talked to her in her dreams! So I wasn’t imagining it... “This portal will lead you to your father, Cedric. Just tell me, what’s your sister’s name?”

    They’re using my brother against me!!! Cedric hesitated, wondering if he should tell them. “Her name is–

    “Cedric!!!” Mylachia screamed while she pounded on the door. “Don’t tell them!!! I’m coming in, Cedric, don’t worry!” Mylachia kicked the door open with her right foot. She looked in the corner of the room to see two figures in brown cloaks standing in front of a black portal with purple lines in the center of it. The one standing on the right was very muscular and his cloak was form-fitting around his arms and chest. The other one was skinny, yet muscular. His arms were crossed and his head was cocked to left, as if he was observing Mylachia. Both of their hoods covered their heads and faces.

    “Ah, I see you’ve come to save your brother.” The man on the right said. “It’s not going to work.” He then lifted his left hand as if it was a signal. Right after he had done this, the other one grabbed Cedric, on hand around the boys waist and the other on top of his mouth. He picked him up and walked into the portal.

    “NO!!!!” Mylachia ran towards the portal but as soon as she got within one inch of it, the portal sealed. Mylachia looked down at the floor than at the man. “What do you want from me?” Mylachia asked, with anger in her voice.

    “I sense anger. That’s good. That will cause more hearts to draw near Kingdom Hearts.” The man then lifted his left arm and faced the palm of his hand towards the wall towards the portal. “Here’s a way to find your brother. It’s nowhere near him, but you’ll be close.”

    Mylachia stepped towards the portal, uncertain of where it would lead to. She wondered why this man was willing to help to her, or maybe he was decieving her, either way, she has no reason to stay here.

    “Oh and don’t worry, we’re sure to take care of your boyfriend...”

    Her eyes widened as he said this. “Devyn!” As soon as she said his name, she was pushed into the portal. She was falling through darkness, seeing nothing but black. Within a half a second she found herself face-down in sand.

    She slowly got up to look around to see where she was. It seemed like she was in a desert. She saw cactuses, rocks and a few scorpions in the sand. She looked towards the horizon seeing a few buildings in the distance. She got up on her feet and turned around in a complete circle, to see if she could see anything else. All she saw was sand and more sand, then she saw the city again.

    “Where...am I?”Mylachia said quietly rubbing her head, which hurt from the fall. She then heard a footstep behind her.

    “Maybe I can help you with that.”


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    So what do ya think? And speak the truth!!!!
     
  10. twilit_shadow King's Apprentice

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    So....Many....Theories.....In.......Head.....Will......Explode!!!!! Amazin as always!!! Want....More........
     
  11. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    You'll get more, don't worry. I have all day tomorrow to work on the next section, and it's going to be a good one, don't worry. :D

    pm me your theories, I want to know how your brain actually works with my confusing fanfics.
     
  12. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Yet again nicely done. ::goes off to work on own fic::
     
  13. Fork These violent delights have violent ends

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    Woa, I guess you weren't kidding when you said you were trying to confuse us. O.o
    Awesome as always!I'm only sad it ended so quickly...
     
  14. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    Thanks! Tell me when the next section is up! :D

    So you did get confused, huh? It worked!!! I mean...uh...I'm glad you liked it!!

    I'm sorry it ended so quickly too, but I got out what I needed to say. :D
     
  15. Fork These violent delights have violent ends

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    No I didn't get confused what I meant was that you weren't kidding when you said you were trying to confuse us. It didn't work on me!
    Now if you'll excuse me I'm going to take an asprine.
     
  16. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    Darn, I thought I confused you...oh well...

    I'm starting the 6th chapter!!!
     
  17. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Thanks! Tell me when the next section is up
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    I don't if you read it, but chapter 4 is up. Chapter five may be out in a bit...
     
  18. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    Mylachia's Story Chapter 6

    All right guys, I've been working on this all day! It's kind of a medium sized chapter in my opinion and I think it's pretty good. Tell me what you think!

    Chapter 6

    Mylachia turned around to see a tall, slender girl standing a couple feet behind her. By the way she was dressed, Mylachia could figure she was either 17 or 18 years of age. She wore a short, black and red skirt with red sneakers, She also wore a black, leather jacket with a red midriff underneath it. She was also wearing a black choker with a weird symbol attacked to it. It looked like a sideways heart, with three spikes coming out of the top. Her hair was a pale blonde, and one section of her hair covered her eyes. That section was pure black. She also had bright, red eyes. Her hands were on her hips and she was tapping her left foot in the sand. “So,” the girl started. “Who are you and where are you from?”

    “Um...Mylachia.” Mylachia stuttered. She didn’t know if it was a good time to mention where she was from. She didn’t even know this woman. “Uh...where am I?” Mylachia questioned.

    The woman crossed her arms and started to walk towards Mylachia. “Don’t you know?” Mylachia just lightly shook her head in response. “Hmm...I see.” The woman walked around Mylachia, as if she was examing her. This made Mylachia feel very uncomfortable.

    “What are you doing?” Mylachia said while trying to push her away. To her surprise though, the girl did a backflip avoiding Mylachia’s attack.

    “Seeing if you’re fit enough for a fight.” As she said this, a gunblade appeared in her hand. The handle and gun part was a sleek black and you could she the girl’s reflection in it. The blade was sleek silver and it was looked like it could pierce your heart in one stroke.

    Mylachia’s jaw dropped when she saw the weapon being clutched by the girl’s hand. “W-hat? You want to fight me?” The other girl just nodded and lifted up her blade, preparing for battle. “Fine.” Mylachia then threw her arm down and in her hand appeared the keyblade. “Then so be it!” The other girl smiled when she saw the keyblade.

    Mylachia lunged toward the girl aiming the keyblade at the girl’s chest, but she easily dodged it. Then girl swept her blade at Mylachia’s ankles, but Mylachia jumped over them and to the side, easily avoiding it. The girl then brought her gunblade towards Mylachia’s throat and tried to slash it, but Mylachia jumped backward, dodging the deadly attack.

    “You know, you’re not as good as your brother.” The girl said while shooting lasers out of the gun. She then ran foward and swept her keyblade at Mylachia’s shoulder.

    “You knew my brother?!” Mylachia said as she hit the girl in the back of her knee, causing her to fall foward. She then put her keyblade on top of her shoulder, as if saying, I win.

    The girl rolled her eyes as she stood up. “Yeah, I knew him. Sora was pretty cute, too.” The girl then beckoned her gunblade away, as did Mylachia with her keyblade. “Name’s Magdalena.” She held her hand out to Mylachia and Mylachia shook it. Magdalena then sat herself on the ground, with her legs crossed. She then put her hands out behind her, as if trying to support herself up. “You know...” Magdalena said as she was taking a breath. “You’re not half bad.” Mylachia then sat next to her and just looked at her.

    “How did you know...” She started to say. Magdalena looked at her, with her hair covering her right eye. “...that Sora was my brother?” Magdalena just chuckled at her question. For some reason, the chuckle reminded Mylachia of someone, but she couldn’t put her finger on it.

    “The way you fought.” Magdalena then stood up and looked towards the town to the far right. “It’s exactly how your brother fought.” Magdalena then looked down at Mylachia and extended her hand down, so Mylachia could grab hold. Mylachia did this with a smile on her face. She then rubbed the sand of her legs and skirt and looked towards the town.

    “Where are we anyway?” Mylachia questioned. Magdalena chuckled again. Where have I heard that before? It sounds so familiar...

    “We’re at Alkamore. We’re in the desert region. There’s still a town, as you can see, and a forest, right after the town.” Magdalena then looked at Mylachia. “Come on. We need to get supplies. This is going to be a long journey...”

    “How did you know I was on a journey?” Mylachia interrupted. Magdalena smirked at her remark.

    “Well it’s not everyday that a key weilder just weilds her weapon just for fun. And besides, it’s not like I appeared here by chance.” Magdalena started to walk towards the town. Mylachia was dumbfounded by what Magdalena had just said. She knew I was coming? Who told her? Mylachia then ran to Magdalena’s side, walking towards the town.

    ~*~​

    As soon as they got in town, Mylachia sat down on the nearest bench. She was tired from all the walking she just did. Wonder if Sora was ever this tired...

    “Hey.” Mylachia looked up to Magdalena standing over her. “There’s a bar over there. You should get something to eat and drink.”

    Mylachia just grinned at her remark. “I would but, one, I don’t drink. And two, I’m too young to drink...”

    “Oh, no it’s not that kind of bar. They have soda and orange juice and stuff like that. We just call it bar because...” Magdalena paused before she continued. Mylachia heard a faint buzzing, but she couldn’t decide on which direction it was coming from. Magdalena had a strange on look on her face, as if she was confused. “Um...I have to go. The bar is over there.” She pointed to an old, painted building. It’s sign was halfway off of it’s post and it was so rusted that Mylachia couldn’t tell what the name of the bar is. “I’ll meet you there!” Magdalena then ran down the street and into a alley, away from the sunlight.

    “All right...see you there.” Mylachia then turned on her heels then went to the bar. She looked around before she entered. She saw no one. This looks like a ghost town. As she went inside, she found out why it appeared to be one. There were people everywhere. Someone was standing by the jukebox in the back, two men were sitting at a table arm-wrestling, three kids were running around playing tag, and the rest were either eating or drinking. As Mylachia walked in, everything turned silent as everyone looked at her. This gave her an uneasy feeling, and she quickly ran to a table. Oh, what a lovely town...

    ~*~​

    We now come to Magdalena who is alone in a dark alleyway. She is holding her fingers on top of her ears as if she was listening to something. She started to pace around, wondering what to say.

    “Ok, ok, I got it.” You can faintly hear noises coming from her ear. “Yeah, I get it.” She then put her hand on a wall and shook her head. “No, no one was with her, she was all alone.” More noises were heard and Magdalena put her hand on her head as if in stress. “Yeah, it’s the same girl, I’m sure of it.” The noises were louder than ever now and she heard them distinctly.

    “Did you get her name?” Magdalena heard some noises behind her and turned around, but saw no one.

    “Yeah her name’s Mylachia. I have to go, bye.” After she had said this, a hand was placed on her shoulder, she quickly spun her leg around, causing the person to fall. She stood over a boy who was about 15, with shaggy brown hair. “What do you want, punk? Trying to lay one on me? Do you know who I am?” Magdalena then summoned her gunblade and put the blade next to the boy’s throat. “What do you have to say for yourself, kid?”

    The boy cleared his throat and spoke. “Y-you know Mylachia?”

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    So, what'dya think? And be truthful!!

    I also want to hear your theories, so please, post them here!
     
  19. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Loves it!
    hmmm...shaggy brown hair...15....::thinks::
    Nah it couldn't be S-...could it? :confused:
     
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    Wheeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!! Sora's back!!!!! I think......