Mylachia's Story Chapter 1

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Did you think Kairi was the mom in my fanfic?

  1. Yes, it was so obvious!

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  1. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    WOW! This is getting really good! :D Great story so far! :D
     
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    Thanks!!! I'm studying and working on the 4th chapter at the same time...mostly working on the 4th chapter...:D
     
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    OOOOOOh I likes it!
    I like the way you express their actions

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    thanks!!! That means a lot!!
     
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    Mylachia's Story Chapter 4

    All right! The next chapter is up!!! It took me a while to do it....please tell me what you think! Oh, and it's a biggie this time!

    Chapter 4

    When Mylachia woke up, it was late in the afternoon. The sun was high up in the sky and it’s rays shone into her room. She then remembered that her mother wanted to talk to her about...What...what was it again...a key...blade...a keyblade? Mylachia slowly got up and looked out her window. She noticed something strange, there were huge, black clouds over the ocean, coming towards her home. She also noticed the trees and bushes blowing in the wind. The strange part of that was, the trees were blowing towards the storm, not away. That’s weird. She turned around and got out of bed. She ran to her closet and picked out her tight, red tank-top, which had a yellow bottom sewed on to it. She also wore her black shorts, her red, tie-died half skirt, and her black boots. She quickly combed her hair and ran downstairs to find her mother sitting at the kitchen table, drinking her coffee.

    “Mom!” Mylachia said after a few seconds. She ran up to the kitchen table and sat in the seat next to her. “Ummm...” She hesitated, because she didn’t know if her mother wanted to talk about the dream she had last night. “So what exactly is...a keyblade?”

    “A keyblade...is a weapon...a weapon that is destined to unlock Kingdom Hearts and to destroy the darkness that tries to consume it.” Her mother took another sip from her coffee and looked down at the stain on the table. “You remember how you’ve only seen you’re father a few times, right?”

    Mylachia just looked at her mother with curiosity in her eyes. “Yeah, what of it?”

    “Well, shortly after Cedric was born he was called off on another mission, a mission that could cause him death. Since he lost his heart to the darkness, another keyblade wielder was born...” She hesitated to finish her statement, but seeing the wonder in her daughter’s eyes made her continue. “Your brother.”

    “My brother? My brother, Sora? Sora was a keyblade wielder? How come I was never told of this? I only thought he was a soldier for the king...” Mylachia looked at her mother with confusion in her eyes, wondering why she no one had told her this before.

    “For many reasons...he obtained the power when he was only 13...you were 8...there were a lot of things you didn’t know...” Her mother scratched her head and continued on. “Remember when we had to leave Destiny Islands all of a sudden?”

    Mylachia’s face went blank when her mother mentioned that. How could I forget...it was awful...

    ~*~FLASHBACK~*~[.center]

    “Mom, what are those things?” Mylachia asked while she looked out the window to see black, dark creatures destroying and devouring everything in their path.

    Her mother ran into her room and dragged her away from the window. “I told you not to look out there!” She said this as she ran into the next room to retrieve the toddler. She came back into the room, grabbed Mylachia’s hand, and ran as fast as she could to the next room.

    “Mom, what are we doing?” Mylachia asked her mother as she put her hand on the wall. “And what were those things?”

    “We don’t have enough time to talk about it now.” As she said thism a bigm black hole came on the wall where her mother’s hand used to be. She picked up Cedric and then grabbed Mylachia’s hand. “Come on, we’re leaving!”

    Mylachia struggled to get out of her mother’s grip, but couldn’t succeed. “B-but, what about Sora?!” She screamed at the top of her lungs.

    Her mother quickly looked out the window to see a bright, white flash coming from the tiny island off the shore. She grinned when she saw it. “It seems that he found his own way out.” She then looked down at Mylachia and tugged her forward. “Come on. We have to go in together...one...two...three!”

    ~*~​

    “How could I not forget it, mom?” Mylachia put her hands on her face and let out a deep sigh. “I worried about Sora every day...and I wondered where dad was...”

    “So did I...and know, I’m going to have to think about that of you.” Her mother grinned and hugged Mylachia tightly. As she ran her fingers through her daughter’s orange hair she said “I know I’ll be proud of you.” She then released her grip on her daughter and looked her straight in the eye. “And you will come back, just like Sora did.”

    Mylachia grinned shortly after her mom said that, but as quick as the grin appeared, it disappeared. The reason why is because shortly after he returned, he had to go. Mylachia just came back to the island about a week before Sora came home, because her mother believed that all darkness had ceased. It turns out they were wrong.

    ~*~Flashback~*~​

    “Sora!” Mylachia ran out to her older brother to see him with a tall, muscular boy with silver, shag-like hair and a girl with auburn, shag-like hair. Mylachia held something in her hands, a piece of wood. “Sora! Mom says it’s time to come in for dinner!” Sora turned around with sadness in his eyes and knelt down to Mylachia’s eye level. “Sora...what’s wrong?”

    Sora rubbed his head, even with the spikes in his way, and down the side of his face. “Um...Mylachia...I don’t know how to explain this...” He looked at her to see that tears were forming in her eyes. It pained him to see her in pain, but he had to tell her. “..I have to go.”

    “Oh, well as soon as you come back...”

    “Mylachia, it’s not that simple. The king sent me a letter and it says that the darkness is trying to take over Kingdom Hearts, once again and it’s up to me, Riku, and Kairi to stop it...”

    “Problem is...it’s Xehanort this time...and this could mean big trouble...” Riku, the other boy said. He was soon hit on the head by the girl.”OW!!!! What was that for?” The other girl glared at him, then she looked down at the girl with the tears in her eyes. She came down to eye level with Mylachia.

    “I’m sorry, sweetie, but Sora, Riku and I have to go...we don’t have any choice...I’m sure you understand.”

    Mylachia could only stare at her brother, tears streaming down her face. “B-but...but..”

    “Mylachia...” Sora said as he put his hands on her shoulders. “If I had a choice, I would stay here, rather than fight the darkness...but I don’t have a choice. I have to do this..”

    Mylachia just kept on crying and she tried to wipe the tears off her face. “Fine...see you in a few years.” She threw down the piece of wood into the sand and ran towards her home.

    “Mylachia!” Sora called out to his sister, but she didn’t respond. He looked down at the piece of wood to see something scribbled on it. It said “To the best brother ever” and it had a little drawing of two stick figures holding hands watching the sunset. “I’m sorry.”

    ~*~​

    “Mom, I’m going to have to learn a lot before I go on my journey, don’t I?” Mylachia asked her mother after thinking a couple of minutes.

    “Homey, you can never learn enough, you learn something new each day, that’s what Sora learned. He learned about pain, sadness, love, reunion, and death.”

    The word ‘death’ struck Mylachia like an arrow through the heart. She hated that word and she hated that she had to experience it when she was 12.

    ~*~ FLASHBACK~*~​

    In all her life, Mylachia never felt so much sadness, so much greif, so much...pain. It sickened her to be there, the whole entire time it seemed as if she had been shot by a bullet through the head. She wanted to leave, and yet, she wanted to stay.

    “Tonight, is a night that all of us share our sadness and pain.” A man, who stood at the front of the room, stated. He was wearing a black suit, a red tie, and a white shirt. He had sleek, black hair and he wore circular glasses, which just framed his beady eyes. Every one was in a chapel which had a red carpet, red draperies which covered all the windows, and lilies in ever corner of the room. Mylachia was sitting in a pew next between Kairi and her mother, who was holding the sleeping 6-year old. Riku sat next Kairi with his arm around Kairi’s shoulders. Mylachia looked towards the ground as the man continued on with his speech. “For over the past week, or whenever this incident occurred, we have lost a young, brave soul to the darkness.” After he said this, he stood behind long, rectangular box, a coffin. “That soul belonged to Sora, the key wielder of light. His heart must have been strong if he held such great and immense power. Even though he is no longer with us, his love and memory will still be in our hearts.”

    The man came out from behind the coffin and gave a gesture for people to come up and to put their hands on the coffin, as in remembrance of Sora. Kairi, who was followed by Riku, were the first ones to go up to their belated friend. “You were a great friend, Sora, I will never forget you.” Kairi said, in tears. She quickly went back to the seat to hide her tears from the rest of the congregation. Riku ran to her side, trying to comfort her, and telling her ‘He’s still there in our hearts, he won’t be forgotten.’ Mylachia’s mother was the next to go up, but she just stood there and didn;t say anything. She felt that there were no words that could describe the love that she held for her son. She went back to her seat and quietly cried.

    After everyone, except for Mylachia, had gone up to say their last words, the man came back up front and said, “Sora, key wielder of light, you will never be forgotten,” After he had said this, he went to Mylachia. She just kept staring at the ground, trying to avoid the man’s glare. “I’m sorry.” He said, trying to make her feel better.

    At that, Mylachia lost it. The speech was bad enough, but to have someone come up to you and say ‘I’m sorry’ just made Mylachia feel worse. She ran up to the coffin and put her arms on top of it, as is she was hugging it. “N-no...I won’t let you go!” She started crying and screaming, making a big fool of herself, but she didn’t care. She didn’t want to accept the fact her brother was...dead.

    Mylachia’s mother, who was followed by Cedric, came up to Mylachia and put her arms around her daughter’s waist. She then put her mouth next to her ear and whispered, “Time to go.” She then kissed Mylachia on the cheek, grabbed her and Cedric’s hands, and started to lead them home.

    ~*~​

    Mylachia looked up at her mother with tears streaming down her face. Her mother put her hand on top of Mylachia’s, trying to comfort her. Mylachia then saw a black portal, that came out of nowhere, behind her mother. Creatures started to come out of it, closing in on their victim.

    “MOM!!!”

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    I told you it was long...:D Please tell me what you think!
    And I'm sooo sorry about Sora, it wasn't going to work with him in it...I tried everything....
    random person: You didn't try hard enough!!!! *throws objects at me*
    I said I was sorry!!!!! Anyways, after I'm done with this fanfic, I'm going to write one about Sora, Riku and Kairi, so don't get sad just yet...​
     
  8. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    ..........:( ..............Sora is dead in this story. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! *sniff* Ok I had my moment... all done. It's very good so far, even if Sora is dead. *pouts*
     
  9. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    It was going to be either way if Kairi was the mom or not, I'm sorry....and also for my sequel with nobodies and stuff, it wouldn't have worked out if he was a daddy.

    I am glad you liked it! *gives tissue* You gonna be okay?
     
  10. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    so sad, but very well writen.... *runs off to find out where the first chapters where*
     
  11. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    Oh and I am going to write a story about Sora, Riku, and Kairi after I'm done with this fanfic, so we haven't lost all hope, right?

    thanks

    Just click the "khchick55 productions" in my sig and it will bring you to my archive. :D
     
  12. Marluxia XIII Moogle Assistant

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    whoa that was really good and it seems like it will happen in kingdom hearts 3 but yeah overall really good job (would be cool if it did happen)
     
  13. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    I know, wouldn't it? That's be sooo weird if it did...


    Thanks for your comment! :D
     
  14. Sorafan60 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I love it so much. You just about made me cry with all those fan fics, and sora's death. Just awesome, descriptions and everything, as most of your chapters are!!!! ^_^
     
  15. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    *cries* Thats ok, Sora will live on in our hearts!!!

    Demyx: but what if we dont have hearts?

    Me: Shut up and pretend like you have one!!!!

    Great story! *claps*
     
  16. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

    Thank you!!! I'm glad you liked it!!!

    And Demyx, like she said, pretend you have one and be sad!!!!
     
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    GAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!! Sora's...dead???? *sobs* And geez man, poor Kairi!!! Do you know how extremely crushed I'd be if my boyfriend died?!?!?! Holy crap!!!!! And then another guy holding you in his arms trying to comfort you...that would just make you more sad because you'd wish it was your boyfriend holding you instead of some other guy! Oh my gosh!!! And no, I didn't think the mom was Kairi. Man, that was some good fanfic, but SO SAD!!!!!
     
  18. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    Sorry about Sora, but I am writing a fanfic about him, Riku, and Kairi...as soon as I'm done with this one, or it's sequel....
    Wow...lost of details there....I know what you mean, poor Kairi!!!!! I felt so bad for her when I wrote that part!!!! *cries* Anyways, I'm glad you liked it!!!!!
     
  19. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    when do you think the next one will be out?
     
  20. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    I don't know, I just finished this one today....I'll be working on it in study hall and all my free time so, maybe Friday, Saturday or Sunday?