My true love

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Devil's Angel, Feb 8, 2008.

  1. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Guy's point of view

    I see your glistening eyes
    My love please come
    Help me go through the pain
    From a broken heart
    Take my hand

    I will hold onto you
    I will never let go
    Let me be
    The one to love you
    Forever and ever

    I will be standing here
    Waiting for you
    My love
    I want to lift you off your feet
    I will give your heart enough love

    Girl's point of view

    I am afraid
    That those words
    Coming from those true lips
    Are lies
    The lies that can break
    My aching heart

    Don't let my teardrops fall
    From my empty eyes
    Be true to me
    Please take this pain
    My hands are cold

    Warm them with your hug
    Kiss me to lighten my soul
    Don't bring me fear
    My heart has just mended
    My lover take me away

    Anyone's view

    Don't let me die
    With this broken heart

    Let me live
    Until I can hear my heartbeat.

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    A poem I made for all those new couples for

    VALENTINE'S DAY!
     
  2. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    aww... it's so beautiful... <3 I found absolutely nothing wrong with it... *sigh* I love your work... good job and keep it up! ^.^
     
  3. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Thank you *hugs* yur the best ^^ I just need to find more inspiration even though there is like love everywhere.