Digital Art My tags are {not} "Eh"

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Chevalier, Jun 4, 2010.

  1. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    I like it. My tags are not "eh", just minimalist sometimes. I like using textures sometimes. It doesn't mean I've stopped doing "good" tags. I'm not changing anything, but do critique, I do take things into consideration. KHV awards nominations are up. Totallydirectindirectlulz <3

    CnC? Comments? Thoughts?
     
  2. Misty gimme kiss

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    I really like this, actually. Normally I'd ***** about the rule of thirds but it's not bothering me in here. I love that the light is so dominating, yet you still retain some detail in there. The lightening-esque lines are pretty sick, too.

    I'm not crazy about the text, though. I think it's composed and placed nicely, but it feels a bit slapped on.
     
  3. JedininjaZC Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Your text has a few mistakes.
    For one you need to do is fix the cut out of the word "Duty" in your sig, and maybe find a better color for it as well. Also a different font might be better than the cursive font you picked.

    I love how you substained such detail in the man's face.
    It is very thrilling to see the lightning on his neck; however it is hard to notice with the large burden of light to the right.
     
  4. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    Thank you, both. I appreciate your comments greatly. I'll consider what you both said.

    The text says "beauty" not duty, but yeah, it's an stylistic thing not wanting to put the whole text. I did try blending it better, didn't work.

    I like the cursive there, actually. I didn't once think it was wrong there. Also, the "burden" you say, is what gives flow and flair, I wanted that to be a part of him, that's why I worked with Dodge & Burn, so it would give realism, and you noticed which makes me happy that someone took notice of.