My Story With Your Character(s) In It

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  1. Wisdom Form Guy Hollow Bastion Committee

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    I'll join.

    Name:Master Austin
    Age:17
    gender:Male
    Appearance:Black hair,Cool power vest,power shoes,and a cool face(like auron's)
    Persona:He was just an average boy on Earth until an evil force came and destroyed Earth.He was to travel in space,learning all powers and meeting new people.
    Desired Role in this fanfic:Good guy helping all universes.
    Die at the end(yes or no):No
     
  2. rexmildd15 Merlin's Housekeeper

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  3. Roxaspartanti King's Apprentice

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    Nyum nyum wheres my guy.... man he'll be cool.ooh!i got an idea!Get him to apear when they fight a large group and finishing them. He'll clap....mwhaha
     
  4. Darkcloud Word of advice: Let the wookie win. He's Chuck N

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    Very mysterious so far. Souleaters...Riku's first weapon as an enemy name...makes me ponder...please don't make us wait long...
     
  5. Near-to-Tears Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Do whatever with her, just kill her at the end >D

    Name: Skyla
    Age: 19
    gender: Female
    Appearance:http://i144.photobucket.com/albums/r177/spacespirit/charries in a story/anime-2.jpg
    Persona: Upbeat and cheerful most of the time, tends to make bad jokes at inappropriate times.
    Desired Role in this fanfic: A person who went on a journey simmilar to Riku's, however: Her's was an unsusscessful one. She doesn't wish Riku the same fate.
    Die at the end(yes or no): Yes
     
  6. The Fifth Element Traverse Town Homebody

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    X.X wow so many replies....ok well here is the next chapter

    CHAPTER 4

    Sora just stood...facing the ocean, unable to do anything. He was shocked. Just when he and Riku had gotten back from a 3 year journey them would have to set out on another one.....and who knows how long this one would take.

    Riku was handling it better but that was no small task. He gripped his chest.It seems that all I am is darkness, he thought bitterly. Shaking the thoughts off, he turned to face Sora.

    "We need to leave the island...if those creatures are after us then they should follow when we leave," said Riku. He stared off at the ocean, eyes unfocused and his voice heavy with tiredness. He spoke in a way that one of his age shouldn't. A voice that had seen and heard more than his years should.

    Sora just nodded numbly and turned. "I've found enough gummi pieces for two ships. I'll find out what these creatures are and you...."

    "I will rid myself of this darkness once and for all,' said Riku, his voice didn't waver at all. They turned and walked back to the cave where Sora had put the ships, not intending to tell the girls what they were doing, or where they were going.

    A few hours later the gummi ships were ready ad they got into each of them. As the powerful engines started up, the trees around them all but flattened. The ships rose up into the air and were gone. The pilots thought they had left their friends behind in safety. But did they?
     
  7. gerlert_fav2005 Traverse Town Homebody

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    ;) Nice. I was expecting Sora and Riku to do that! Leave without even saying anything.
    *tsk**tsk* Keep up with the work!
     
  8. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    *gasp* how could they?! How could they just... just LEAVE like that?! And they THINK they'll be safe! O_o what's gonna happen?! I wanna know! XD

    lol... great job with the story so far! I luv it! :3
     
  9. The Fifth Element Traverse Town Homebody

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    ((wow lol the next chapter is gonna be here soon and it will be today))
     
  10. The Fifth Element Traverse Town Homebody

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    oh...poo!!!!!

    sorry I had to say something.....I'm having*dramatic music* writer's block
     
  11. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    aww... noez... T-T

    I've had it for at least 3 weeks... I'm gonna go write somthing to try and get out of it ... I have 2 stories I need to work on >.<

    but u just take ur time :)
     
  12. Darkcloud Word of advice: Let the wookie win. He's Chuck N

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    Hey, let us know if there's anything more we can do to help! We're all in it (sort of), so that means we want to make it as good as possible!
     
  13. Roxaspartanti King's Apprentice

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    Nyumnyum make longer chapters. I am also at a hard time at doing so.
     
  14. The Fifth Element Traverse Town Homebody

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    YES!!!! ITS OVER!!!! here is the next chapter and yes it is very long



    CHAPTER 5 part 1/3

    Riku flew steadily upward, finally breaking through the atmosphere. He sighed as he looked out around at the beautiful stars. Out on the road again. Does everyone have to depend on us. Why can't there be another hero.

    He was quite alarmed when he heard a muffled bang. He jumped slightly before setting ship on auto. Turning, he summoned his keyblade before making his way back to the holding compartment. The compartment looked as it always did but something told Riku that it wasn't. There was someone in here.....no...two people. He crept forward quietly until he reached a couple of boxes of food that were toppled over. Cautiously, he reached out and pushed one to the side.

    "Abex!!!"

    He grabbed her hand and pulled her out. She stumbled but he supported her. Slightly angered that she had come but more concerned that she was hurt, He grabbed her by her shoulders and looked her square in the eye.

    "Why did you come," he asked, doing well in keeping the irritation out of his voice.

    "We were worried about you," she said, rubbed her wrist slightly where she had landed on it.

    Noticing her, he said," You're probably going to need a brace for that and- Wait 'we'? Who is we?" he asked.

    Suddenly there was movement in the back of the ship. Allison stepped out from behind a stack of boxes. "Yes, we," she said calmly. Taking another step forward, she turned toward Riku. Laying a hand on his shoulder, she gave a ghost of a smile. "We're in it together now," she said serenely, evenly.

    Riku sighed. He nodded once and agreed," Alright fine. Its no safer on the island than it is here. Well Abex, we should get that brace so-" Suddenly there was a violent lurch that threw them to the ground. Rku jumped forward, into the cockpit.

    "Its no good. The engine has shut down, we're being sucked into a planet's atmosphere!!Hold on!!!"

    They all grabbed a hold of each other and braced themselves. Abex squeezed her eyes shut and Allison's were wide. Riku stared grimly out toward the incoming planet. What is this planet.
     
  15. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    *squeal* it's getting so intense! I can't wait to see what happens! good job! XD
     
  16. Garxena Hollow Bastion Committee

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    eee! i'm so glad that i could get on early so that i could read this! it's good! ^^
     
  17. The Fifth Element Traverse Town Homebody

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    Bad news. I'm gonna be going on a trip today so I'm not sure if I will be able to post much.

    CHAPTER 5 part 2/3

    The first thing Riku was conscious of was that he was laying down. His cheek pressed against the rough dirt and sparse grass. He flicked his tail in annoyance. Wait a second. He wasn't supposed to have a tail. His eyes shot open and he was astounded at the bright colors that bombarded him. Vivid blues and shocking greens. It took a minute to adjust to this new form of seeing. Shakily he stood up but fell again.

    "Oh yeah, four legs," he meowed.

    Carefully, and not without some difficulty, he managed to get into his paws. He turned his head to inspect himself. He was as he had suspected.....a cat. His fur was silver with some black smudges and his paws had black all around them. Where's everyone else? And are they cats too? He stretched and padded off into the forest, in search of his friends.


    sorry its so short, I gotta go pack
     
  18. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    aww... okay... we'll be waiting for you to get back ^-^

    I should probably go work on my writing... >_>


    aww... neko! <3
     
  19. Darkcloud Word of advice: Let the wookie win. He's Chuck N

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    Riku in the Pride Lands...should be interesting...please don't keep us waiting long ^^.
     
  20. The Fifth Element Traverse Town Homebody

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    not the pride lands...hehe here is the last little bit

    DISCLAIMER: I do not own the idea or story plot of Warriors!!!


    CHAPTER 5 part 3/3


    As Riku padded through the underbrush, he caught a scent. He laid his ears back. He didn't like this smell. Suddenly a group of cats bounded through the under growth. A dark, almost black, cat knocked Riku over, pinning him down.

    "Easy Darkstripe," meowed another cat. This one was completely white, and from the looks of him, old too. He stepped forward and bent down to eye level with Riku. "Whats your name? Do you belong to a clan?" he asked. This one was softer, nicer but Riku could tell that he held much authority over the other cat.

    "Are you a rough?" pipped a younger looking cat. This one was white too. Only his fur was more fluffy.

    "Shh Cloudtail," said Darkstripe," He could be dangerous. Whitestorm, what should we do with him?" Darkstripe turned to the older cat.

    Whitestorm sighed. "Bring him before Firestar I suppose. Come on lets go."


    Whew sorry on vacation, gotta go bye I promise the chapters will get longer when I get back
     
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