My Story With Your Character(s) In It

Ok well I will post the first chapter when I get some replies.(The story is about Riku and he figured out that he still has darkness in him and must go on a journey to rid himself of it)

Here is the template
Name:
Age:
gender:
Appearance:
Persona:
Desired Role in this fanfic:
Die at the end(yes or no):

 

Very interestiny... I've never seen anybody do something like this... We just post a character, right? >>

Name: Abexecca
Age: 16
gender: Female
Appearance: Long, black pigtails and a dark green headband. Hazel eyes. Dark green skirt and a light gray tank top. Black boots.
Personality: however you want.
Desired Role in this fanfic: Riku's best friend who he has a crush on.
Die at the end(yes or no): yes.

This okay...?

 

((awesome and now here is chapter one ^_^))

Riku sat on the dock of the island, letting the wind come off the sea and into his face. Sighing he closed his eyes, drinking it all in. Suddenly his ears twitched and he sat up. Thinking he had heard someone, he pulled his legs up and on to the dock. Standing, he looked behind him. Nothing was there except his boat, which was gently bobbing up and down in the shallow water. He heard the noise again and this time was determined to figure out what it was. He edged up to the end of the dock and lay down flat on his stomach. Grabbing the ends of the pier, he swung his head under there. His eyes widened as his lips met someone else's. His eyes adjusted and he saw Abex, her eyes were as wide as his and there was a blush on her cheeks. Quickly he pulled up and dropped down under the pier. His feet sent droplets of water flying as he landed.

"Hey Abex, I'm sorry, I didn't know and...," he trailed off uncomfortably and put a hand behind his neck.

Abex seemed still stunned but she recovered quickly," N-No its o-ok," she stammered, still beet red.

Quite uncomfortable, Riku looked around for anything that could change the subject. Without warning he took off down the beach, hair swept back and eyes glittering. Another letter from the king?He had seen a glint of what he had presumed as glass, floating in the water near the islet. Abex wondered what the youth could be doing but had no time to think because Riku had reached the letter and was yelling for her, arms flailing and mouth open. She grinned and splashed to shore before jogging over to him.

"Another letter from the king?" she asked puzzled, and sat down with Riku.

"Thats what I thought at first but look," he said, pointing out a symbol on the parchment inside the bottle.

It was a strange symbol that neither of them had seen before. As Riku puzzled over it, his ears twitched again.

"Hey, was that the whistle," he asked, tearing his eyes from the unopened message to look up.

"Yeah, I think so. Lets go," Abex said.
Quickly they stood and made for the other side of the island, running fast and hard. Riku still clutched the forgotten bottle in his hand.

 

hahaha... OMG that was so funny! I luv it so far! =D Can't wait to see more of it! ^.^

 

well I need more people to join so we can get this rolling so tell your friends please

 

Name:Allison
Age:16
gender:Female
Appearance:
Persona:She is very sweet.Although she may seem fragile she is very strong.She has a brave heart.
Desired Role in this fanfic:She is a good friend of Kairi and Riku.Sora has a very very small crush on her(very small)
Die at the end(yes or no):No

If you need her weapon just ask me ok.:)

 

Oooh! Riku! I'm in! XD

Name: Yuna
Age: 17
gender: Female
Appearance: *attachment*
Persona: Not very trusting of people, but when she sees Riku her trust is put solely in him. She has a tendency to push herself too far in battle.
Desired Role in this fanfic: She has Darkness within her own heart and when she meets up with Riku she decides to go with him to find her path.
Die at the end(yes or no): Depends on how close she and Riku get ^.~

 

((you guys...er...possibly girls(oh that was awkward:sweatdrop:) rock))


CHAPTER 2 Part 1

Riku ran off of the beach toward the docks but turned and headed inward. Abex followed close behind. When Riku reached the smooth stone wall he jumped. Catching the edge of the hole, he pulled himself upward, into the cave*. As soon as he was in it, he turned and bent down, ready to help Abex up but she had already jumped and caught the ledge. She pulled upward and landed gracefully on the floor. She shot a grin at Riku before crouching and crawling forward. Riku followed. As the crawled through the cave that would take them to the other side of the island, Riku reflected on how much they had grown. He remembered when they could walk through this same tunnel and have to jump to touch the ceiling. He was brought out of the past when a bright light flooded the stone floor, signaling the end of the tunnel. He stopped as he watched Abex shoot out and forward, landing on a tall stone pillar that was used as a stepping stone by the kids who came here. She quickly jumped from the stone onto the sand below, so Riku could get to the stone. He jumped and landed on the ground, not even using the stone.

"Show off," muttered Abex as they jogged to the broken bridge.

They climbed the stairs and jumped onto the bridge. From here they had an unobstructed view of the sandy place that was the group's meeting ground. What they saw horrified them. Strange white creatures were swarming their friends who were already there.

"Allison, Yuna, Kairi!!!" Abex yelled each of there names but the girls didn't move from the ground.

"We have to help them," said Riku, summoning Way To Dawn.

Abex stared at him in wonder, cuffing him on his head. "You idiot of course!!" She looked around for a weapon and her eyes came to rest of a metal pipe about as tall as she was. She grabbed it and ran forward, Riku close behind.

*: ok you know there are two ways to get to the other end of the island and I used the other one, not the door

Notes:
-ok well I am seriously tired tonight and thats all my brain could think up so part 2 comes tomorrow.^_^

 

Alright, I've gotta admit, this has piqued my interest, so...

Name: Xalcoud
Age: 24
gender: Male
Appearance: Face of Cloud Strife, but hair is sliver and hangs down in spikes (look at my sig)
Persona: Serious by nature, but also makes wisecracks, especially in battle, but since his voice is monotone, no one can tell very well if he's joking or not.
Desired Role in this fanfic: Cloud Strife's nobody; has amnesia and is trying to understand who he is and what his powers are, exactly.
Die at the end(yes or no): Would rather like to see him go back to being Cloud, but if the story is good...

 

I like it! Once again, great job and I can't wait to see more! :3

 

Can we expect to see the next chapter soon? (Please say yes, please say yes!)

 

Ok.These type of stories are gettin popular.
Name: Zaxen
age:19
gender: boy
appearance: another organization member, this guy has white short hair like luxords, and his eyes are thin and mysterious,with markings on his face like scars across his eye.
role:a person who is trying to put the darkness into riku (evil!!!)
die or not: riku!go kill that guy!
weapon:(must add dis info) he holds large gigantic claws that come out of his gloves unexpectedly, like he punches, and they come out...(ouch!) err...yeah.

 

Hope it's not too late to join.


Name: Mexony
Age: 12
gender: Female
Appearance: Brown hair, brown eyes, bandage on cheek, striped socks, tan skin, black coat.
Persona: I'm evil and evil heehee, shy and quiet but an abuser. ( I feel like the bad type)
Desired Role in this fanfic: To be evil
Die at the end(yes or no): Yes

 

you are in and *trumpets sound* Here is part two of chapter 2 and just because I'm happy today, I'm gonna give you chapter 3 today as well ^_^ here we go


CHAPTER 2 Part 2


Abex jumped the last section of broken bridge, and landed on the soft sand. She dashed forward and whacked a creature, using the pipe like a bat. Riku jumped a little further and ended up opposite to her.

"Start from the ends and work your way to the middle," he said as he sllashed one creature after another.

Abex slashed all of the creatures around her and took a step forward. They fought off creatures, growing closer and closer to each other, finally they were fighting back to back. As Riku brought his blade down and Abex thrust hers there was a sound and both their eyes shot up. Sora had jumped in the fight and was slashing like a madman toward them. In no time all the creatures were gone. Abex, Riku, and Sora stood with their hands on their knees, panting hard. Sora was the first to move, running towards Kairi and the others. He slid to a stop and went to his knees.

"Guys!! You gotta wake up!!," he said, shaking Kairi.

Abex slapped him on the head. "idiot, don't move them, we'll just have to wait until they wake up."

They all sat down beside their friends, waiting anxiously for signs that they were ok.

 

Haha I like that XD she slapped him on the head... lol XP

 

*getting excited* Again! Slap him again! Harder, harder! Again! Slap him again! Make him suffer!...Sorry, got carried away for a second.

 

I don't know whether to laugh or be scared (jk) ok here is chapter 3 like I promised!!

CHAPTER 3


"Hey, guys, Yuna's waking up!!" Riku said as he watched Yuna stir and open her eyes.

Immediately, Sora leaned over her, bombarding her with questions. "What happened?Are you ok? What were those creatures? Where did they come fr-" Sora was stopped by Abex who had grabbed the back of his shirt and was hauling him backwards.

"Give her some room to breath!!Jeez, do I have to tell you everything!" She said, clearly exasperated.

Riku chuckled but then adopted a more serious expression. He knelt down beside Yuna and helped her up.

"Never without chivalry are you," she said sarcastically as he helped her up.

Riku grinned. "Well you're ok obviously," he said grinning.

"Hey, Allison's waking up too!!" Abex rushed to her friends side and supported her. "Hey, are you ok?"

As the girls awakened and they made sure they were ok, the story was told and the group began to wonder where the white creatures came from and what they were.

"Not nobodies," Sora said as he remembered them from his last adventure.

"Obviously not Heartless," said Riku, remembering his time in the dark realm.

As the discussion continued Abex remembered something. "Oh Riku," she said, and stood up," The letter!!" She rushed over to the forgotten bottle that lay near the end of the platform. Picking it up and dusting the sand off, she brought it back and handed it to Sora. "We found it on the beach right before they sounded the whistle." They watched as Sora unfolded it and began to read.

Riku,

I hope you get this, it would not do well for it to fall into the wrong hands. The following information may be surprising and may even anger you but I assure you I am telling you only the truth.

Sora paused and looked at Riku. "Go ahead, the group can hear it," he said.Sora nodded and continued reading.

Riku, I regret to inform you that darkness still resides in your heart. To be completely washed clean of this darkness you must commit the ultimate act of self sacrifice. You must go on a quest to find yourself. I cannot write any more in the event that this is being read by enemies.

Now Sora, I need you to listen. You may or may not have encountered the white creatures that now roam this universe. We call them Souleaters. They are made of pure light. Normally you wouldn't think of them as being bad but when you destroyed all of those heartless on your last adventure you upset the natural balance of light and dark. Now to reset the balance, you must fight for the darkness. This is all I can say for now. I widh both of you the best of luck in your quests.

- A friend

Riku and Sora were both stunned and the rest of the group wondered what they would do.

"Come on girls, lets give them time to think," said Allison, reading Riku's posture immediately.

They all walked through the door into the shack, leaving Riku alone with Sora.

 

oh... mah... gosh... souleaters...? doesn't sound like something that'd be made of light... XD

lol I can't help but love the way you make Abex treat Sora... it's hysterical! XD

keep up teh great work! :3

 

Hmm...I'll join!

Name:Emily
Age: (>> <<)I guess 16 O.O
gender:Female
Appearance: (My siggy!)
Persona:She is more of a quiet person,but depends on the moment.
Desired Role in this fanfic: I guess you can put her as a friend from a long time ago who,I don't know how,meets up with them.
Die at the end(yes or no):However you want it! ;)

 

thanks and you are in whew there are alot of people joining but I won't ever turn you down or stop taking people!!! I'm working on chapter 4 so hang on and don't hurt me >.<