My Sister

those are nice namessssss

 

yah if they wheren't ours

 

ouch... harsh....

 

O wow thats so nice :D
Great job its a very kind poem :D

 

Thank you she is the only person who keeps me happy I wouldnt be here if it wasnt for her

 

Aww, that's so sweet...great job. :) Although in the second verse, I think you mean to say 'when I'm mad' instead of 'when I mad'...or may use 'angry' instead of 'mad'...either way is fine. Overall, awesome poem! :glomp:

 

thanks and opps

but coming from you that means a lot thanks again

 

Anytime. *hugs* I can't wait to see any other works from you~!!

 

I personally hate it, sorry Hitna, but I only like sad and depressing poems, because is how is the life, sad and depressing, still is good putting apart that I didn´t feel nothing for the poem, and that I hate a little my both sisters.

 

that is because you are emo....sorry but that is how you act you know you should really lighten up life is just too short

 

I am not emo, is just, I been depressed, and I couldn´t find the reason.

 

Sorry well I wish that I could help but I can not

 

i really enjoy your poem and it's heart felt honesty

 

yay glad you liked it

 

I did some corrections for you nad erase the r please. ^^

 

I have a sister too.

But I'm not sure I think this much of her.

I'm glad you and your sister can have enough of a bond for you to write a poem about her. Good job.
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