My Sanity

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  1. JapAnimeFanatic Twilight Town Denizen

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    I'm trying to fly with broken wings.
    Wings loosly tied together
    by the threads of my heart.
    These threads are breaking
    from absense of love
    and replacement of fear.
    I've been left alone
    by people that once loved me
    and people who chose death.
    My heart has been emptied of love
    and care
    and has been replaced
    with coldness and fear.
    ~Now i have only a few threads left.
    my brother,
    my friends,
    my lover,
    and my sanity.
    If one of the people i cherrish is lost,
    surely my sanity will be lost soon after.
    Show me mercy and
    let me keep these little threads i have left.
    For my heart can't bear another loss.
    Please allow me to fly on these tattered wings
    just a little longer,
    and watch me fly higher then before
    for my finale​
    this was a stressful week for me and during class i wrote this to vent out so i wouldnt scream or burst out crying during class. it along with a few other things helped me keep my sanity during this week so this is an important poem.
     
  2. sinister King's Apprentice

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    i would fix your wings and make you fly forever...
    that was beautiful by the way...
     
  3. JapAnimeFanatic Twilight Town Denizen

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    thank you ^^ for both of the things that you said
     
  4. sinister King's Apprentice

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    can i make you feel better in class somehow miss?
     
  5. JapAnimeFanatic Twilight Town Denizen

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    lol, nah, i'm fine now, just had a stressful week. i'm fine now but thank you ^^
     
  6. sinister King's Apprentice

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    please keep making more creations miss!
     
  7. Tora-chan Traverse Town Homebody

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    This is so beautiful. Glad you're feeling better too :)
     
  8. Trigger hewwo uwu

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    Its amazing how pain and sadness can make some of the best poetry.

    Great job, continue writting