My Poem of Love

Love is like the sun's rays
Winding through hills and valleys
The gentle arc of it reaching into your heart
Twisting itself gently around your mind's chambers
It is has no need of words
It is captured in a dream
Where love takes flight
Resting its wings in your gaze
The answer is always there
With love, loss, death
Every time, miracles are found
Endurance and affection, created
Reminiscent and memories, never forgotten
It flows to the end of time
Being a sanctuary of hope and peace
Where a delicate wind blows
And love softly cradles you ​

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Yep, it's another free-verse poem about love, a much happier, shorter one (hope you'll like this one this time, Last of the Organization? lol). XD Hope you enjoyed it. :)​

 

Deep. Wow, that almost brought a tear to my eye.

 

Awesome Nymph i give it a 10

 

Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it. :) I'm surprised it almost brought a tear to your eye though...but I'm happy to see that you enjoyed it!

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! :) :glomp:

 

I see.....don't tell me you did this one just because of me lol.....pretty good length....good descriptions......liked how you just talked about love as a separate abstract force....instead of a person or a couple in love.....and yes I find the atmosphere more pleasing on this one....but write about what you want Nymph....who am I to stop you right lol?....

 

oh... my... gosh...

that was awesome! :D it was so beautiful... i almost cried too... lol

good job! keep it up! XD

 

lol Well, don't worry, I just wanted to write this one because I felt like it. XD And I'm glad you liked it. :D :glomp: Unfortunately...most of my other poems are pretty...emotional, and almost depressing. :sweatdrop:

Thanks, I'm so glad you liked it!! :)

 

I don't really mind emotional poems.....but if the whole thing is based on a sad feeling or thought.....I just don't enjoy reading sad stuff like that....I can....but would rather not if I can....

 

I can't even get through emotional stuff like that... it was a good poem, but i couldn't finish it because it was a bit too painful... but you're really good at writing so keep it up! :)

 

I just thought my heart soared to the sky. Very good Nymph! :D

 

totally cute XD

 

Unfortunately...most of my poetry has sadness in them...I always write like that, I don't know why. :sweatdrop:

I'm sorry about that, but I'm glad you liked it, and I appreciate you tried...so, thanks!! :glomp:

Thanks! :) :glomp:

Thanks! :)

 

awww i dont get glomped well the im gonna GLOMP YOU :glomp:

 

:sweatdrop: Ooh, of course...:glomp: :glomp: And since you liked my poem so much...*major :glomp:*

 

You are lucky, because I almost feeled nothing, the poem is depressing, but I been so much depressed that the only thing I feel was a small pain.