My Pasture

A poem that i wrote a few months ago, hope you like and comments are always welcome

Trauma and turmoil ravage my world,
Yet, my pasture lays hidden away,
Ushering me to return someday.

Water dances around my tiny kayak,
Leading me on , guiding me forward.
The oars rhythmically dance along with salmon and otters,
Both need not fear the world.
For their home,
Formed by tears of Heaven protect these lives,
Secluded forests promenade my journey
Down the road to my pasture.

The gates unfold, bringing me before the frozen giants.
Breath’s held, casting a calming silence,
Disbelief that this world remains untouched,
As countries battle for supremacy.
Frozen memories float about me,
Falling like crystal tears from the giants eyes.
White lightning juts around these marvels
As more jewels enter the world.

Stepping onto the misty coast, my mind clears.
Eagles soar high above, wildlife sings aloud,
I’ve entered my pasture.
Above me stars burn like rubies,
Glistening amongst the mysterious dance of the Aurora Borealis.
The land of the midnight sun lies far away,
I shan’t be gone long, and next time, you shall come too.



Peace

 

Wow this is good...I can almost picture it...great job. :)

 

Thank you kindly :)

 

Yes, your word choice and just everything gives a great picture.

Wowyou'resuchagreatwriter.

Continue to write poems, you're really good at it.

I like this one, I think, the best so far.
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This is one of my favorite poems as well, thank you for enjoying this!

 

XD

It's funny to say thank you for enjoying, becuase it's usually the opposite.

But to continue the trend, I'll say you're welcome, And add that I really like the 3rd verse of the poem.
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