My own story but you included

lol, yeah thats true!

 

We better stop spamming :sleepy:

 

has it finished =[ i wanted to be in it no fun

 

no its not over and yeah we should stop spamming *stops*

 

I'm sorry.I'm no longer accepting characters.The story is almost over.But do you like it so far?

 

I do! When is the next part of the chapter coming out?! :]

 

I'm still working on it.I need to write it but I can't because of school and such.I'll try and post when ever I can.

 

Ok take as much time as you need to! I wont rush you!

 

Chapter 9-The Battle Begins Part 8

Jaaku knew Roxanne was there. He began to laugh.
“I knew you’d come.†said Jaaku laughing.
Roxanne didn’t respond. She just held her gunblade tightly in her hand.
“Don’t be a fool like your father.â€said Jaaku.
“My father wasn’t a fool. He stood up to you to defend something he loved. Then you just go and kill him.†said Roxanne. “You made me suffer throughout my life and now you are going to pay.â€
Jaaku just laughed at Roxanne. Roxanne couldn’t take it anymore, she went running towards Jaaku. She jumped up in the air and was going to attack Jaaku. But Jaaku swung his arm and sent Roxanne flying. She dropped her gunblade near Aqua.
“Stupid child, you actually think you can beat me?†said Jaaku walking slowly over to Roxanne.
Meanwhile, Sora, Donald, Goofy, Rinn and Eden were inside the tower, on their way to the top.
“We’ll never make it on time.†said Rinn panting.
“Yes we will.†said Sora panting as well.
Sora looked up. He knew Roxanne needed help but he also had to look for Aliza first. The group was too tired from running, they couldn’t go any further.
“I have an idea.†said Eden. “Why don’t we split up. Sora you go look for Aliza and the rest of us will continue our way to the top.â€
“Ok.†said Sora.
Eden, Rinn, Donald, and Goofy began to run up the stairs leading to the top. Sora looked at them go, he then opened a door leading to a big room. He went inside and the door closed. He looked around. He then saw someone familiar up ahead. Sora squinted his eyes.
“Aliza?†he said. Sora then smiled. “Aliza!â€
Sora went running up to aliza. She had her head facing down.
“Aliza you’re ok!†said happily putting his hands on her shoulders.
He then noticed something was wrong with her.
“Aliza, Aliza are you ok?†he asked.
Aliza then raised her head. Her eyes were red. Something was wrong with her.
“Must...kill....Sora.†said Aliza in an angry voice.
“What?†said Sora confused.
Aliza took out her sword and attacked Sora.
“Aliza what are you doing?!â€asked Sora while dodging the attacks. Sora didn’t want to take out his keyblade and hurt Aliza. All he could do is dodge her attacks.
“Aliza its me Sora! Your friend!â€
But she did not stop. She continued to attack Sora. Sora finally got frustrated, he took out his keyblade, and swung his keyblade hitting Aliza’s sword. Her sword fell out of her hand and landed behind Sora. Sora put his keyblade away and ran up to Aliza and began to shack her to snap out of it.
“Aliza, Aliza snap out of it! Its me Sora!â€
Then Aliza’s eyes then began to turn blue again.
“S-Sora....â€
“Yeah! Its me!â€
But then her eyes became red again. Sora didn’t know what to do to save her. Then he thought of an idea.
“I hope Aliza doesn’t hate me for this.â€
Sora leaned in and kissed Aliza. Her eyes then turned back to blue. Sora then stopped and looked at Aliza to see if it worked.
“Sora.....did you just....â€
“Yeah. I had to save you some way.â€
Aliza smiled at Sora. And he smiled back.
“We gotta head to the top of this tower. Roxanne is there and she needs us.â€said Sora.
Aliza nodded and they exited the room, on their way to help Roxanne.
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OMG FINALLY I finally am done with this part.I'm sorry to keep all of you waiting.Just hope you like it.Especially Kairi234.

 

That was very good, the last few sentences brought me to excitement:)

 

*squeels* Yay! Im really excited! Im glade that the next part is finally done but more then that, I cant beleive I kissed SORA!!!!

 

Haha I knew you'd like it.That was my plan all along.Since your character joined.

 

I ♥ this chapter but I wish instead of

that it was

hehe :D

 

Lol nice Kairi.I should have done that XD


Chapter 10-The Battle Begins Part 9

Jaaku was walking towards Roxanne. Roxanne was laying on the floor, trying to get up. Jaaku took out his sword. Jaaku was going to kill Roxanne until Aqua got in the way.
“No, Jaaku don’t kill her!†yelled Aqua standing in front of Jaaku.
“Stay out of this!†shouted Jaaku.
Jaaku smacked Aqua. Aqua fell and she was unconscious. Jaaku then turned his attention back to Roxanne. He saw she wasn’t there anymore. Jaaku turns around and see’s that Roxanne is running towards her gunblade. Jaaku quickly grabs her leg before she can be able to get her weapon. Jaaku threw Roxanne back to the spot she was in last time. Meanwhile, Aliza and Sora were running up the stairs heading to the top of Jaaku’s tower. After a while Aliza and Sora caught up with Rinn, Eden, Donald and Goofy.
“Hey you guys!†called Sora.
“Sora!†said Donald.
“Aliza!†said Goofy.
“You guys are ok.†said Eden.
“Yeah. We’re ok.†said Aliza.
“Ok, now’s no time for reunions. We gotta help Roxanne.†said Sora continuing his way towards the top.
The group nodded and followed Sora. Meanwhile, Jaaku was running over to Roxanne. Roxanne quickly got up and went running towards jaaku. She jumped up and went over Jaaku, heading over to grab her gunblade. Roxanne grabbed her gunblade and was standing in a fighting position, facing Jaaku.
“Don’t be a fool to fight me.†said Jaaku.
Roxanne and Jaaku went running towards each other. Their weapons clashed. Jaaku began to walk, sending Roxanne to go over the edge. She then turned her head back, facing Jaaku. All Jaaku was doing was laughing.
“You’ll now be reunited with your parents.†said Jaaku grinning.
Right before Jaaku can push Roxanne over the edge, Sora and the others come in.
“Roxanne!†shouted Sora.
Jaaku turns his attention to Sora. That’s when Roxanne pushes Jaaku away and jumps over him, landing away from him.
“Roxanne, are you ok?†asked Eden.
“Yeah I’m fine.†responded Roxanne.
Sora wanted to help Roxanne but then he remembered something. He looked at his hand and saw Roxanne’s necklace. Sora then pulled back him arm.
“Roxanne, catch!†shouted Sora.
Sora then threw Roxanne’s necklace. Roxanne turned her head and saw her necklace. She then caught the necklace and looked at it in her hand. Roxanne closed her hand into a fist and looked at Jaaku. She put the necklace in her pocket and turned to face Jaaku.
“Come one Roxanne, you can beat him!†yelled Donald.
“Yeah! You can do it!†yelled Rinn.
Roxanne stood tall. Jaaku and Roxanne then ran towards each other. A strange glow was coming from Roxanne. As they got closer, the glow became stronger. Finally, Jaaku’s and Roxanne’s weapons clashed. But the glow coming from Roxanne was too strong that Sora and the others couldn’t see. When it was clear enough to see, the group saw Jaaku and Roxanne on opposite sides. They had their arms pulled back. Roxanne then stood up straight. She turned her head to the right. Jaaku then dropped his sword and he fell to the ground. Sora and the others were surprised.
“She.....did it.†said Rinn.
Jaaku’s body began to fade away. Sora and the others walked up to Roxanne.
“Way to go Roxanne.†said Rinn.
“Yeah.†said Donald nodding his head.
“Thanks you guys.†said Roxanne smiling.
Goofy turned around and saw Aqua waking up.
“Sora look.†said Goofy pointing to Aqua.
Sora walked over to Aqua. He kneeled down and helped Aqua get up.
“Are you ok?†asked Sora.
“Y-yeah.†responded Aqua.
Aqua looked around and saw Jaaku’s body fading away.
“No!†yelled Aqua.
She went running over to where Jaaku’s body was. His body had completely faded away. Aqua got on her knees.
“He was going to help me find my brother.†said Aqua, with tears in her eyes.
Sora looked at the others. He then looked back at Aqua.
“I’ll help you.†said Sora reaching out his hand. “I’ll help you find your brother.â€
Aqua looked up at Sora. She saw he had his hand out. She then looked down. Aqua looked up at Sora and accepted his help.
“Ok, so what now?†asked Rinn.
“I don’t know.†said Eden.
“Well, Donald, Goofy and I are going to help Aqua. What about you four?†said Sora.
“Well I guess we’re just going to go on our separate ways.†said Eden.
As the group talked, Afira was closely behind them. She then jumped at the group. Aqua quickly used her power to stop Afira in mid-air. Then Aqua’s spell book appeared in front of her.
“What are you doing?†asked Goofy.
“I’m looking for a strong enough spell to finally get rid of Afira.†replied Aqua. “Ah-ha!â€
Aqua finally found a strong enough spell. She looked at Sora for a moment.
“What?†asked Sora confused.
“Take out your keyblade and I’ll enchant it.†responded Aqua.
Sora nodded his head and took out the keyblade. He held the keyblade in front of him. Aqua then began to chant a word repeatedly. She finally said it one last time and the keyblade glowed. The group ran to a different spot. Then Afira began to move. She turned around and went after the group.
“Sora, quickly slam the keyblade on the ground!†shouted Aqua.
Sora quickly did what he was told. He slammed his keyblade on the ground, and that very moment, three beams of energy escaped the keyblade and went towards Afira. The beams hit Afira and as the smoke cleared, Afira or her body was no longer there.
“We did it!†yelled Sora in joy.
The group headed down and were in front of the entrance of Jaaku’s tower.
“So you guys are going separate ways, right?†asked Sora.
“Yeah. I’m going to go on a little adventure.†said Rinn grinning. “Well I’m taking off. Take care of yourselves. Bye.â€
“Bye.†said the others at the same time.
So Rinn went on her way to go where ever she wants to go.
“What about you three?†asked Goofy.
“I guess the same thing as Rinn. Or I’ll just head back home.†said Eden shrugging.
“I’m going to head back to Hollow Bastion. I miss my home too much.†said Aliza. “Bye everybody.â€
Aliza turned around and began to walk away. The group waved good-bye. Eden turned around as well and waved bye to the last few friends.
“I’m just going to go on. Where ever I may go. Watch yourselves ok.†said Roxanne turning around.
Thesmall group smiled and waved good-bye. Roxanne then began to walk away, relieved everything is over.
“Ok, lets get going.†said Sora.
Donald, Goofy and Aqua nodded and began to walk. Everybody was relieved everything is over. This journey gave them new friends. As the good friends began to go their separate ways, the sun was setting on a day that started terrible but ended in a beautiful sunset.

 

wow! That was a great story! And I dont know if I would miss my home as much as Sora! Lol! But amazing story! :D Two thumbs way up! 1000/10!

 

Glad you liked it.I'm working on a new story.I've written the Prologue already.Still working on chapter 1.

 

oh really?! Can I have the link to go their if its not to much to ask..

 

I still need to type it.But its called A Goddess Reborn.I'll tell you when I post it.

 

ok ill wait! :D Thx for telling me about it!

 

Your welcome.I've just been busy this week due to some testing so I haven't really been able to write.