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Chapter 9-The Battle Begins Part 6

Then Mexony and Roxanne ran towards each other. Then their two swords clashed together. Roxanne moved her gunblade and kicked Mexony. But Mexony blocked it with her sword. Their battle continued. Mexony used the object she had with her against Roxanne. She created a giant fire ball and sent it towards Roxanne. Roxanne dodged the attack but she was getting tired quickly.
“How did she get stronger from the last fight?†thought Roxanne confused.
But Roxanne just continued fighting either way. Eventually Roxanne began to notice something about Mexony. Roxanne began to notice that Mexony had something in her hand and that was distracting Mexony. So Roxanne thought of a plan.
“What’s the matter Roxanne? Can’t handle my power.†said Mexony. “Don’t worry, it’ll end soon!â€
Mexony ran towards Roxanne. And Roxanne quickly changed her sword into a gun. She began shooting at Mexony. Mexony stopped to dodged the bullets. Then that’s when Roxanne took the advantage of attacking Mexony. Roxanne quickly kicked Mexony. Then Mexony landed on the floor on her back. Roxanne turned her gun back to a sword and pointed the tip of the blade to Mexony’s neck.
“This is enough!†yelled Roxanne.
Mexony just looked at her.
“I will spare your life. But if you interfere with me again, I will kill you.†said Roxanne in a serious voice.
Roxanne then took her gunblade away from Mexony’s neck. Roxanne then began to walkaway. Mexony got up from the floor.
“Roxanne, wait.†said Mexony.
Roxanne stopped and turned to face Mexony.
“Kill my father.†said Mexony in a serious tone.
Roxanne just looked at Mexony. She then nodded. Roxanne then turned back around and ran inside Jaaku’s tower. Mexony then walked away heading wherever she may go. Meanwhile, Sora, Eden, Donald, and Goofy finished their break and continued their way towards the tower. And they finally caught up with Rinn.
“Rinn!†yelled Eden.
“Sora, Eden, Donald, Goofy.†said Rinn.
“We finally caught up with you.†said Donald.
Rinn looked at Sora, then crossed her arms.
“I’m still mad at you Sora.†said Rinn mad.
Sora just looked at Rinn. Then something came to his mind. He looked around and didn’t see Aliza.
“Wh-where’s Aliza?†asked Sora.
“I thought she was with you.†responded Rinn confused.
“She told us she was going to catch up with you and Roxanne.†said Eden.
The group was confused. Where’s Aliza? Could it be Afira got to Aliza before she could get Sora and the others?
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This took me a while but I finished it.I have free time this weekend so I'll post by tomorrow(hopefully)

 

woah! I hope Aliza is okay!!!

 

That was beautiful! *rolls* I loved the two chapter that you posted up, me and Roxanne fighting, alot of adrenaline there! I can't wait to see what'l happen in the next chapter!:) Truly your story is great, keep up the great work!:)

 

can you let Aqua kiss Sora.. if Aqua does betray Jaaku... then helps Sora, if was thinking a kiss wouldn't hurt, since Aliza got one on Sora... *cry* My Sora- chan

 

sorarulz you better do something because Aliza is taking away your boyfriend XD

 

*pops into convorsation* RIKU!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *squee* lolz

 

*cry* SORA!! SORA!!!!! OMG SORA! DON'T FALL FOR IT! SHE'LL DUMP YOU CUZ YOU'RE NOT AROUND HER CUZ YOURE SAVIN THE WORLD!! (and Pvt. Ryan) SORA! COME BACK!!! *dies of shock*

 

Chapter 9-The Battle Begins Part 7

The group just stood there, wondering where Aliza could have gone.
“Do you think...they could have kidnaped her?” said Goofy worried.
“Boy I hope not...” said Rinn.
Eden looked at Sora. He was looking at the ground as if it was his fault.
“Its my fault.” said Sora in a low voice.
“What?” said Donald.
“Its my fault! I should have never let her go on ahead!” said Sora.
“No its not! Its not your fault Sora!” said Eden.
“Yes it is!” yelled Sora.
“Look, its best if we go and find Aliza instead of just standing here!” continued Rinn. “Lets just hope Aliza is still alive! Now lets go and save her!”
The group nodded and went on their way to help Aliza. Meanwhile, Aqua and Jaaku were still at the top of the tower a waiting for Roxanne’s arrival. Then Afira walks in.
“So did you take care of Sora?” asked Jaaku.
Aqua quickly turned around to hear weather Sora is alive or dead.
“No. But I did something a bit better.” said Afira.
Jaaku was confused and didn’t understand what Afira said. Aqua in the other hand, knew Sora was still alive.
“I kidnaped Sora’s little girlfriend, Aliza. There he will come running and will want to save her.” said Afira.
“Then that’ll be when we will have the chance to kill him.” said Jaaku smiling. “Good job Afira.”
Aqua then turned back around not facing Afira.
“Sora, please be careful.” thought Aqua.
Meanwhile, Mexony was just walking, heading wherever she may go. She then heard a voice and raised her head.
“Get her!” said the voice.
Before Mexony knew it, she was being tackled by Donald, Goofy, and Rinn.
“Let me go!” demanded Mexony.
“Where’s Aliza?” said Sora.
“Who?” asked Mexony.
“Aliza! Where is she?” asked Sora again.
“Oh, your girlfriend. I don’t know! Now let me go!” said Mexony.
“Liar!” yelled Sora.
“Sora, think she’s telling the truth.” said Eden.
“Of course I’m telling the truth! I even told Roxanne to kill my father!” said Mexony.
“The group was surprised to hear that. Then Rinn, Donald, and Goofy let go of Mexony.
“Look, I don’t know where Aliza is at. But I do know Roxanne is already in the tower or possibly at the top.” said Mexony. “Its best you guys go on your way right now if you want to help Roxanne.”
The group nodded and began to walk. Sora stopped and turned around.
“You’re not going to help?” asked Sora to Mexony.
“I don’t want anything to do with my father.” replied Mexony. “Help Roxanne kill my father.”
Mexony then began to walkaway.
“Oh Sora, here.” said Mexony throwing an object to Sora.
“What is this?” asked Sora.
“Roxanne’s necklace. Give it to her.” said Mexony walking away.
Sora nodded and ran towards the others. Meanwhile, Roxanne has finally reached the top of Jaaku’s tower. She had her gunblade in hand ready to face Jaaku.
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Phew.Finally huh.Haha almost done.

 

Ooh... scary, I'm looking forward to more!!!

 

That was an awesome chapter! Beautiful I said, I was really excited reading it all. This is a great story:D Keep up the good work:)

 

Almost done?! No!! Sorry! Its just a great story and I dont want it to end!!! But on the bright side! I kissed Sora!!!! :D *faints!*

 

lol dude. I hope it's never ending. ETERNAL....

 

I agree! Eternal, eternal, eternal!!! (goes on strike)

 

ETERNAL! ETERNAL!

 

lol! Why does the story have to end so soon?

 

Yes. Oh well, it was agood story. AND IT"S NOT OVER YET!!!*squeals*

 

thats the good thing! Yay! But to bad its soooo close from being done... :(

 

Yeah:sleepy: oh well.

 

and now V's leaving? What else could go wrong?!

 

I'm not sure, but I don't wanna think about it!