My own story but you included

lolz sora no baka <3 =3

 

I'm sorry about the delays everyone.Its just school.I'm getting homework and it tends to get in my way.I'll try to post the next part soon.
Again sorry.

 

np, take as long as you need!

 

Chapter 9-The Battle Begins Part 5

As Rinn continued her way to help her friend, she ran into Crix. When Rinn saw Crix, she quickly took out her keyblade.
“Crix, where’s Roxanne!†demanded Rinn.
“Geez it has to be like that.†said Crix
“I said where’s Roxanne!†demanded Rinn again.
Crix signed and said, “She’s heading towards Jaaku’s tower.†Crix turned and pointed to the tower. “Jaaku is waiting at the top.â€
Rinn was looking at where Crix was pointing. Then Rinn began to think if Roxanne can be able to handle Jaaku by herself. Then Crix began to disappear. Crix returned into Rinn’s body. And so Rinn continued her way to help Roxanne.
Meanwhile, Jaaku was at the top of the tower with Aqua, Eneroc, and Afira.
“Can I go and kill them now?†asked Eneroc anxious.
“Shut up!†said Jaaku annoyed.
While Jaaku was thinking of a plan to defeat Sora and his friends, Karina walked in.
“Where’s Ionez?†asked Eneroc.
“He left. He said he didn’t want anything to do with Jaaku.†replied Karina.
“We’re going to have to destroy Jaaku ourselves then.†said Eneroc.
As Eneroc and Karina continued to think of a plan to over power Jaaku, Jaaku himself was thinking of something.
“Afira.†said Jaaku.
“Yes.†said Afira.
“Go kill Karina and Eneroc. Kill them how ever you want.†said Jaaku.
“My pleasure.†said Afira smiling.
Afira went running towards Karina and Eneroc. Before they knew it, they were being killed. Aqua couldn’t bear the sight. But she couldn’t turn away. In a matter of minutes, Eneroc and Karina were dead. Jaaku just grinned.
“Aqua.†said Jaaku.
“Y-yes sir.†replied Aqua scared.
“You want to find your brother don’t you?†asked Jaaku.
“Yes, of course I do.†replied Aqua.
“Then don’t betray me. If you do, you will end up just like those two.†said Jaaku pointing at the motionless bodies of Karina and Eneroc.
Afira walked up to Aqua growling.
“Now Afira, I want you to go kill Sora and his friends.†said Jaaku.
Afira just smiled and went on her way to do her dirty work.
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Finally.Well its not over yet.Hope you like it so far.

 

Interesting chapter! Wonder where Mexony was. Oh well that was interesting, kinda grinned my whole way. Probably inspiration:D

 

... Oh crap........ Not Sora, please don't kill Sora! Please Afira, don't!

 

o crap, i'm gonna turn on Jakku, its just the rebelious part in my character. I'M GONNA BETRAY HIM! I'M GONNA HELP SORA! *dances* Well, that's just a guess...

 

Oh no! Sora, Dont die! BTW great chapter!

 

Cool story =D!
Yay.I'm so happy(some how.0.o)
omg...The story caught me in a happy mood.wow.
More!!! (0_0)

 

yayz! just caught up on the story, WONDERFULL!!! wahhhh! Karina diezz! I have a big question 4 Thalassa_Shells, sorarulz, and u. WAHHH! KARINA!!!

 

and that question would be...?

 

Cud I use Rinn and Aqua in an off-line story?

 

Well thats ok with me just ask Thalassa and sorarulz.

 

only if you give me a link =D
and a cookie =D

 

Aqua's mine right? I haven't been on here in EVER! but if she is, its fine! ^^

 

YES! Thank u SO much!!!! I've started and like it so far, it begins with a fight between Rinn and Karina. Then Aqua comes and takes Rinn before Karina cuts her head off:)
Also...*gives Thalassa_Shells cookie*

 

YAY COOKEH!!!!! =D *puts whole thing in mouth*

 

i left the floppy with the story on it at skool...:(

 

Chapter 9-The Battle Begins Part 6

Sora, Aliza, Eden, Donald, and Goofy stopped to get some rest. Aliza looked at Jaaku’s tower for a small moment. She then turned back around.
“I’m going to go on ahead.†said Aliza. “Rinn and Roxanne might need help.â€
Eden, Donald, and Goofy nodded in agreement. But Sora was looking down at the ground. Aliza walked up to Sora.
“Aliza, do you.....hate me?†asked Sora to Aliza in a serious voice.
“No. Why would I hate you?†responded Aliza.
“Of what I said to Roxanne.†said Sora.
Aliza signed and said, “I know you haven’t said you’re sorry, but I know you are sorry. You don’t have to say it. You can stay here with Eden, Donald, and Goofy for 5 more minutes but I’m going to go on ahead.â€
Aliza kissed Sora on the cheek and left on her way to help her friends. Eden, Donald, and Goofy stayed with Sora. Meanwhile, back to Roxanne, she has finally arrived at the front step to go through the doors of Jaaku’s tower. When Roxanne was about to take one step to go through the doors of Jaaku’s tower, a strange explosion came from inside. The doors bursted open and Roxanne jumped back taking out her gunblade. When the fog cleared, Roxanne saw Mexony. Mexony had a sword in one hand. And in the other hand she had an object that was giving her powers. Could it be Roxanne’s necklace?
“Ready to fight my father?†asked Mexony.
Roxanne just stood there in a position to fight.
“Hm, we you’ll have to get through me.†said Mexony in a serious voice.
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FINALLY!!It took me a while.Well I finally posted it.This part isn't done yet I just wanted to post it already to not keep all of you waiting.

 

Wahooz! MORE! no pressure or anythin though:rockdover: