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Chapter 9-The Battle Begins Part 1

Sora and the others began to prepare themselves for the biggest fight of their lives.
“Everybody ready?†asked Sora.
The group nodded.â€it might take us up to 4 or 5 hours to get to their layer. And when we get there, we don’t know what to expect so be prepared and keep your guard up.†explained Roxanne.
The nodded and headed out the door. As they went through the mountain pas that heads to the enemy’s layer, Sora began to notice Roxanne was serious throughout the whole journey. While everybody was talking, she was quiet. Sora didn’t ask her anything. In just 4 hours, the gang finally arrived at their destination. Strange enough, it turns out their layer is an abandon castle.
“How come every bad guy chooses an abandon castle as their hideout?†asked Sora.
“Maybe its all the space and privacy.†said Donald.
Sora looked at Roxanne again. She was still serious.
“Roxanne are you ok?†asked Sora.
Roxanne didn’t bother turning to Sora. She didn’t even respond. She then began to walk towards the abandon castle.
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Sorry its short.This is just part one.Part two will come soon.

 

great part 1! Cant wait for part 2!

 

roar! I are back now! ^^ nice chapters, a little short, and i made a little apperence (Aqua) but that was good. GOOD LUCK WITH 2nd PART! *sits and waits*

 

same here X~P

 

That was exciting! I can't wait to see the next chapter. Things are getting serious!:D

 

Chapter 9-The Battle Begins Part 2

When the group entered the castle, they saw that the castle was still in good shape. Eden, Aliza, and Rinn noticed a portrait on a wall. The portrait had three people.
“Who are they?” asked Rinn.
“They could be the owners of this castle.” said Eden.
“Well the adults could be the king and queen and the little girl could be their daughter.” said Aliza.
While they wondered who the people in the portrait were, Sora, Donald and Goofy were looking around the castle. Roxanne was looking at the symbol that was on a small statue. Sora walked up to the girls that were looking at the portrait.
“What are you girls looking at?” asked Sora.
“Look at this. It’s a portrait of the owners of this castle.” said Eden.
“You know if you keep on looking at the little girl, she’ll look like someone we know.” said Aliza.
“You’re right.” said Rinn.
“But who?” wondered Sora.
“Wait I got it! The little girl looks like Roxanne!” said Eden.
“Wait if that is Roxanne then......Roxanne is a princess!” said Sora surprised.
The group turned to Roxanne. She was still at the small statue. Before they could say anything to her, Eneroc, Mexony, and Ionez showed up.
“Sure does bring back memories huh?” said Eneroc to Roxanne.
Mexony created a sandstorm around Roxanne so she couldn’t see. Then Eneroc and Ionez ran into the sandstorm to grab something Roxanne was holding. Sora and the others went running towards Roxanne to help her but two girls got in their way. The group didn’t recognized who they were.
“Move!” said Sora.
The two girls just looked at each other smiling. While Roxanne was fighting in the middle of a sandstorm. She kicked Eneroc and he went flying towards Mexony. He fell on Mexony and so the sandstorm cleared. Roxanne and Ionez were fighting.
“Sora.” said Rinn.
“What?” said Sora.
“That girl is my nobody, Crix.” said Rinn.
“What?!” said Sora surprised.
Crix and the other girl began to fight with Sora and the others. Crix and Rinn were fighting each other. Out of nowhere Karina came and began to attack Roxanne.
“Roxanne!” yelled Sora.
Eneroc came up to Roxanne and took the necklace Roxanne was wearing.
“I got it!” said Eneroc.
Roxanne ran after them. She then turned her sword into a gun and began shooting at Eneroc. But before she knew it they were gone.
“Roxanne relax its just a necklace.” said Sora.
“No its not just a necklace. My mother gave me that when I was 4. That is my most treasured possession.” explained Roxanne.
“So.” said Sora.
“That necklace has special powers and contains the north star. If that necklace is in the wrong hand only chaos will happen.” said Roxanne.
“Whoa.” said Sora.
“Yeah whoa. I have to get that back.” said Roxanne.
“Where are your parents?” asked Rinn.
“Jaaku.....Jaaku killed them. That’s why I’m after him, to avenge my parent’s death.” said Roxanne.

 

whoa i'm a little confuzled bout dis one......

 

That was.. AWESOME! I grinned through my whole way reading this. Such excitement! I can't wait to see next!:D

 

thats deep, man =D

 

That part made me chuckle. :p

I'll be checking back in on the updates to this. It's looking pretty interesting.

-Kairi

 

This story just keeps getting better and better! Cant wait for the next part or chapter!

 

whoa. It awsomes...

 

Chapter 9-The Battle Begins Part 3

After Roxanne told the group what would happen if her necklace was in the wrong hands, Sora began to think. Roxanne was determined to get her necklace back.
“You know we’ll stop them from using the necklace for their own use but its only a necklace. So I don’t know what the big deal is except for chaos.†said Sora.
Roxanne raised her head and just looked at Sora. While the others were surprised to hear Sora say that.
“Sora, how can you say that?! If that necklace means so much to Roxanne, then we are going to get it back.†said Aliza.
“But...†said Sora.
“Sora no! Her parents are gone and all she has to remember them is her necklace.†said Aliza.
When Donald looked around, he didn’t see Roxanne. But then he saw Roxanne running over the bridge that led into the garden.
“Sora!†said Donald.
The group turned around and saw Roxanne.
“Roxanne wait!†yelled Eden.
Roxanne was running towards the tower where Jaaku was waiting.
“I’ll get that necklace back. Even if it takes my life.†thought Roxanne to herself.
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I'm sorry its short I'm just back at school so I can only work on it when I get home or on my free time.I'm working on the next chapter so don't go anywhere.

 

why is rinn not hitting sora on the head for reasons previously mentioned?

 

Don't worry it will happen soon ok.

 

okies ^-^ ^-^

 

Nice chapter. This is getting more and more interesting:)

 

Aww... I feel sorry for Sora, I mean, how could I be so mean to him?! Lol! Cant wait for the next chapter! Take your time though, I dont want the story to add stress to you.. :D

 

Chapter 9-The Battle Begins Part 4

The group did not understand why Roxanne was acting this way. Rinn was so mad at Sora, she went up to him and hit him on the head really hard.
“Ow! What was that for!†demanded Sora.
“For being a complete and total IDIOT!!†yelled Rinn. “How can you say such a thing! Obviously you don’t know how she feels! She’s alone, with nobody to turn to. And then you go and say something IDIOTIC!!â€
Sora just looked at her confused. While the others agreed with what Rinn said. Sora looks at the others with a sad face.
“I’m going to go HELP Roxanne.......unlike you.†said Rinn in a strong tone.
Rinn went off running to help her friend in need. Eden, Aliza, Donald and Goofy just looked at Sora with sad faces. Aliza turned to the others and said, “Lets go.†in a soft voice.
Sora just stood in the same spot thinking of what he had said. He then walked right behind the group looking down. Meanwhile Rinn was looking for Roxanne, and Sora, Aliza, Eden, Donald, and Goofy were walking, Roxanne was almost to the tower. She looked at the tower for a couple seconds and then was about to continue walking until she heard a voice.
“Looking for something?†asked the voice.
Roxanne looked around wondering where that voice came from. Then from behind Roxanne a young girl took out a keyblade and attacked Roxanne. But Roxanne quickly took out her gunblade and blocked the attack.
“A-aren’t you Rinn’s nobody?†asked Roxanne.
“Bingo.†the girl said.
“Then Crix backed away.
“But I’m sure she hasn’t told you my name. I’m Crix at your service.†said Crix a bit sarcastically.
“I’m not going to deal with you. I’m going to let Rinn take care of you. I have something more important to do.†said Roxanne walking away.
“Wait.†said Crix.
Roxanne stopped and turned around looking at Crix with a serious face.
“Watch your back when fighting Jaaku. He’s pretty tough.†said Crix.
Roxanne just starred at Crix for a few seconds and turned around and continued her way to Jaaku’s tower.
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I'm almost done with part 5 just give me until later if not tomorrow.I had free time yesterday so I was able to do this part and a bit of part 5.

 

poor Sora..... BTW great chapter! I wonder if Roxanne is going to win the battle or even if their going to be able to actually fight!