My own story but you included

hmmz.........a little confuzling but yeah^^P

 

Great I'm inspiring you thats never happened before lol

I'm glad you like it:D

 

well i like it's to =D

 

I'm glad you like it too

But I think my number one fan is Kairi234 she loves my story:D

 

......................k den *mops* no jk so by tommorow u say?

 

Yeah I'm going to work on it later and I'll post by tomorrow.

 

okz den =D any ideas?

 

Yeah I have alot.But the next chapter might come in parts like part 1 part 2 something like.

 

kewl.....i can see it now..........in the movie theater........ahh........

 

My aunt told me that I should write a movie script and then sell it like to make it into a movie.I've been thinking about that I think I'll do it.Now all I have to do a come up with a great story that a bunch a people will like.

 

maybe like a lord of the rings thing except not as dorky or like a terrorist orginization tries to rule the world then someone tries to stop it.

 

Uhh...yeah no.I been thinking about something different.I just have to think about it.

 

k den............

 

Great story! Im your #1 fan? Yay! And did I hear movie?! I would be first in line to see it! :D

 

Yay!
I'm sure I'd make a lot of money if you went to go see it.You'd probably go see it everyday:D

 

I just might see it every day! :)

 

me too! =D =D

 

I would make a lot of money if both of you went to go watch it.

 

I would like to see it. Also i'll wait. (Waits for next chapter) Kinda excited, due to the other chapter, which was really good:)

 

Awesome!Shame on sora for losing.hes fighting so badly and she simply teaches him what she knows what hes doing wrong and kick!lost!SHAME!!!!
im gonna join this merry go round.
Name: Keath Feathertail
Gender:Boy
Bad/good: Good, but but the travellers dont believe him.
Powers: raw strength of the pheonix. Only if hes about to die, or lose, or know his normal form wont do anything, he'll turn yellow, glowing, and his weapon, and he becomes fast and can jump far.
weapon: One handed sword thats double sided
personality: quiet, and never loses his cool. He doesnt really care what happens to him.
looks like: Long coat thats blue, and a huge belt around his waist, a hat that has four points, and is baggy, he wears that hat way down so you cant see his eyes, dirty blonde hair that goes down to his chin in streaks, baggy black pants, a sheath on his back, brown boots, a compass on around his neck, an earing on his right ear.Hes tall, and hes 18
story: A boy with absoultly no weakness, was once in the organization but decided to disband and be a bounty hunter. Hes a really skilled fighter, better then Roxanne.
something else: He barely tries when he fights, and barely says anything. Maybe he could be shy, or mysterious, preferably to meet with the travellers in the city, drinking water at a pub.
Get the companions to see him, but then he disapears. remember, hes quiet, and mysterious, so dont get him to their hide out.(right now, hes hunting the enemies-the same ones-for lots of money, but he takes his time)