My own story but you included

Me pwn a bad guy too! :D

 

well, im a good guy, and I PWN YOU ALL!!!!!!!!!!! *evil laughter*
XD lolz

and crix might pwn you all as well, shes sorta... half and half. shweet lolz.

 

ME ME ME!!
Name: Aqua
Gender: Girl
Good/bad: A little of both (like Axel >^<)
Powers: Can freeze time
Weapon: A spell book
Personality: Quiet, calm, collected, and is really nice
What he/she look like: Blondish-Brownish hair, dark brown eyes, and wears a black dress, black boots, and a tan over shirt over her dress.
Click for picture ---->
Their story: I was 12 when my village burned down, and I lost my home. Now 4 years later I'm searching for my long lost brother (who was supposed to take care of me) in the Port Royal.
Anything else: I love Sora.

 

Thank you sorarulz.I'll PM you when I post the next part.


Ok I need a little help from anyone.What I need is a down right completely evil man.Anybody please.I don't care what his powers are or what he looks like.He just has to be very very powerful.Please anybody.
Please and thank you.

 

kk

Name: Bob
Gender: boy
Good/bad: pure unadulturated evil
Powers: killing stuff and SUPERMAN STRENGTH!!
Weapon: giant a** sword
Personality: evil evil evil. hes incredibly evil. can you guess whos evil? he is. lolz.
What he/she look like: like lexious with black hair, eyes, and clothes. and sunglasses. why? idk XD
Their story:all you need to know is hes evil. PURE EVIL, I TELL YOU!!! (mermaid man: EEEEEEEVIL!!!!! XD)
Anything else: um... has a dog named bingo XD. an evil dog named bingo. XDD. hates sora. why? idk. XD. ummm... nachoz. XD

this is just a random character i made up on the spot. sort of a comic relief villan, except he doesnt suck. yea. change anything you like, as this will probably be the only time you see Bob the Evil Dude and his evil dog Bingo. XD

 

Thank you KingdomKey just maybe change the name to something more evil.

By the way LMAO XD :roll:

 

Here's the demon I made up before.

Name: Afira
Gender: Female
Good/bad: Downright Evil
Weapon: Her demon claws
Powers: Wind
Personality: Cruel, Heartless, Murderer
What the look like: A large wolf with eight tails, her eyes are purple and on her front left leg, a black bat winged heart stands out in her fur, that's her weakness. Her fur itself is a crimson red, legend has it, the color of her fur came from the blood of her victims
Additional information: She will stop at nothing to destroy the ones standing in her way

 

He what?! 0.o how can he hate Sora?! BTW it was awesome! Im suprised you were able to write all that, having a (almost gone) writers block!

 

Yup I thank my music.:D


Chapter 6-New Allies(continued)

She first went towards Karina. Karina took out her sword and their weapons were locked. Eneroc was going to attack the girl from behind but she avoided the attack. Instead of hitting the mysterious girl, he hit Karina.
“Can you watch what you’re attacking!” yelled Karina.
“I’m sorry! She’s just so fast!” explained Eneroc.
The mysterious girl dodged every attack they through at her. While the girl fought, Sora and the others just stared at her amazed. Mexony finally got annoyed of her dodging every attack so she created a sandstorm around the girl so she couldn’t see. Then Eneroc, Ionez, and Karina went into the sandstorm to defeat the girl. But a minute or two passed and all they saw was Eneroc and Ionez crash into a wall. Then the group heard two swords clash together. Then Mexony cleared the sandstorm and all they saw was Karina get kicked and was sent to where Mexony was. It was unbelievable that they were defeated. Mexony created another sandstorm around them and when it cleared they were gone. The mysterious girl was relieved it was all over.
“Are all of you ok?” she asked.
“Yeah thanks.” responded Aliza.
“Who are you two?” asked Sora.
“Please forgive me, I’m Eden.” one of the girls said.
“And you?” asked Sora.
“Roxanne.” the girl responded. “I better get going.”
“What? You just saved us and you’re leaving. At least stay with us for a day or two.” said Aliza.
Roxanne stayed quiet for a couple seconds. Then she finally said, “Ok.”
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Sorry its short.I'll have the next chapter by tomorrow or so.

 

Intros are so nice.

 

great chapter! Cant wait to read the next one! Just try not to get writers block (again) while your writing it! Noone wants you to get hurt!:D

 

After reading this, I was really exciting seeing a battle. Keep it up, your chapters are keeping my eyes wide:D (Good sign)

 

me likey teh chappy =D

like i said: EVIL!!!! (mermaid man: EEEEEEEEEEEEVVVVIIILLLLLLLLL!!!!!)

kk, how about...
Jaaku? Its japanese for 'wicked'.
... but can his evil dog still be bingo?

 

Jaaku works and his evil dog's name is still Bingo don't worry lol

 

lol
There was a bad guy who had a dog and Bingo was his nameo
E-V-I-L E-V-I-L E-V-I-L and Bingo was him nameo!
That's the evil dog Bingo's theme song, no and's, if's, or but's about it! XD
(Mermaid man, AKA my best friend Sandy: EEEEEEVIIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!)

 

HUZZAH!!!!!!!!!!!!

mermaidman: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE-*slap*
barnicle boy: SHUT THE H*LL UP!!
us: o.O!

 

I am no longer accepting characters. Please nobody post a new character.


Chapter 7-Sora Lost?!

Sora, Donald, Goofy, Rinn, and Aliza took Eden and Roxanne to the hideout.
“Eden how come last time, you saved us but then ran away?†asked Goofy.
“Oh I’m sorry about that. I was just watching over you guys from a distance.†said Eden.
“But how come now you didn’t run away?†asked Donald.
“Because now you guys are going to need help beating your new enemies.†explained Roxanne.
“New......enemies?†said Rinn.
“Yeah. Those guys you fought earlier, they are your new enemies.†continued Roxanne. “Their boss’ name is Jaaku. They teamed up to destroy you Sora. Their boss also teamed up with some eight tailed wolf.â€
“Wait how do you know all this and how old are you?†asked Aliza.
“I’m 15 and trust me I know a lot of things.†responded Roxanne with a friendly smile.
“Ok first, I hope we’re not bothering you with all these questions. Second, where did you learned to fight?†asked Rinn.
“I taught myself to fight at the age of 8. Then by the age of 13 I was already a skilled fighter.†responded Roxanne.
The group stayed quiet, starring at Roxanne.
“What?†said Roxanne confused.
“Alright in order for me to believe that lets have a match.†suggested Sora.
“Are you serious.†said Roxanne.
“Sora don’t. Didn’t you see what she did to those guys.†said Aliza.
Rinn came up to Sora and smacked him on his head.
“Ow. What was that for?†asked Sora.
“For being an idiot. If you fight Roxanne she’ll kill you.†said Rinn.
“I’m not a murderer.†said Roxanne.
“Oh. Well you’ll lose.†Rinn corrected herself.
“Sora can do it.†said Goofy.
“Yeah, Roxanne will be the one that will lose.†encouraged Donald.
“Thanks guys. So what do you say?†asked Sora.
Roxanne was smiling at the thought then she said, “Ok.â€
Sora and Roxanne stood on opposite sides. Sora seemed too serious and anxious. While Roxanne was calm with her gunblade in one hand. Aliza raised her arm and said, “This match will only be one round. The rules are to fight fair and obviously no killing. Anyways let the match begin.â€
When Aliza lowered her arm, Sora went running towards Roxanne. When he tried to hit her, she dodged the attack.
“Rule #1, never be too anxious to fight an opponent. If you are too anxious and you attack first, you will lose your guard and lose.â€
Roxanne hit Sora on his back and he fell to the ground.
“Rule #2, if your opponent attacks you, and swings their weapon horizontally, duck. If they swing it vertically move to your left or right. There, they will lose their guard and you can attack.â€
Sora got back up and tried to attack Roxanne but she continued to dodge every attack. Sora then lost his guard again and hit him and he landed in the water.
“Rule #3, if magic is their weapon then use your own magic or weapon. Obviously if they use fire use water. If they use ice use fire.â€
“What if they use like lightning?†asked Rinn.
“Then use your weapon to block it.†responded Roxanne.
Sora kept on trying to attack Roxanne but she kept on dodging. Sora then got exhausted and couldn’t keep his guard up. Then Roxanne began to attack all out. Thenone last kick, Sora fell in the water and lost.
“I.....lost.†said Sora exhausted.
Sora was still laying in the water then Roxanne came up to him and reached her arm out to help Sora get up.

 

Aww... Poor Sora, he lost.

 

well this sounds fun

Name:Absol
Gender:female
Good/bad:good
Powers:darkness
Weapon:dark keyblade
Personality:antisocial
What he/she look like:an absol
Their story:my world got destroyed so now I'm just roaming around
Anything else: *glare*

 

Um The Notorious AJM and Absol493, didnt you read the top part that was in big, bold, red letters?

I really liked how you explained the battle rules while they were fighting, it helped me understand how poor Sora lost... LQTM (Laugh Quietly To Myself) <3 the story so far! :D