My own story but you included

Thank you veyr much I will pm you when I have posted the next chapter:)
Thank you

 

K, Thanx a bunchie!

 

If its not to much trouble, can I join?

Name:Aliza
Gender: Female
Good/bad: Good
Powers: Water and Ice
Weapon: bow and arrows and a sword
Personality: She can be slightly hyper and kind and then sometimes gloomy and blue
Their story: she grew up in Hallow Bastion/Radiant Gardens and is looking for adventure
What he/she look like: She has black boots, a black skirt, a black long sleeved shirt, light brown hair, and light blue eyes.
She looks like this:

 

Ok I will add into the chapter I'm working on now but if I can't I'll add you into the next chapter.I'll pm you when I post them.


Ok everybody I'm still accepting character but I've decided to make my own character.

Name:Roxanne

Gender:Female

Good/bad:Good

Powers:Can control the stars and moon

Weapon:Gunblade

Personality:She is very smart.She is very secretive about her past.She is strong physically and mentally.She is very brave.She is headstrong and has a strong heart.She is very trustworthy.And she cares deaply for her friends.

What he/she look like:She has brown hair side bangs to the right.Shoulder length hair,wavy and straight.She has light blue eyes.She wears a skirt,a brown turtle neck no sleeves shirt.Wears a jacket over it no sleeves.Wears boots.

Their story:She became an orphan at the age of 5.She then was kidnaped by Organization XIII.They tried to turn her evil but she refused.She then escaped their grasp at the age of 7.She taught herself to fight the age of 8.For her 4th birthday her mother gave her a necklace that contains a star in it.That is her most prized possession.Her parents kept the secret that she is a princess and found out when she was 14.



I won't tell you guys when she will be coming out.Its a sercret :D

Chapter 3-A New Enemy

The group finally arrived at Rinn's hideout. When they arrived, Goofy was still thinking about that girl he saw.
"Welcome to my hideout." said Rinn."Make yourselves at home."
"Goofy you ok?" asked Sora.
"Sorry Sora, its just that while we were walking through the forest, I saw a girl." said Goofy.
"Really, what did she look like?" asked Sora.
"Well she had very dark brown hair, chocolate brown eyes and pale tan skin." replied Goofy.
"Did she need help? Like was she in trouble or something?" asked Sora.
"Well no. But when I called you and turned back around she was gone." said Goofy.
"Maybe you were seeing things." suggested Donald.
As the three continued to talk, Rinn came in.
"Hey you guys wanna go walk around the city?" asked Rinn.
"Sure." responded Sora.
The group headed out the door. While they were out, they got ice cream, something to eat and got to know Rinn. While they were out, Donald noticed a man leaning against a wall. He has grey hair, white skin, he is wearing a black coat, and is wearing an earring.
"Sora look." said Donald pointing.
"Who is he?" asked Sora.
"I've never seen him around. Maybe he's new." said Rinn."Hey lets go say hi."
Rinn went running to the mysterious man. So Sora, Donald, and Goofy followed her.
"Hi, I'm Rinn. And these are my friends Sora, Donald, and Goofy." said Rinn.
The man lifted his head and looked at Rinn for a few seconds, then lowered his head again.
"What's your name?" asked Rinn."Are you new? Because if you are I can show you around if you want." suggested Rinn.
"Leave now or else." the man threaten still with his head facing down.
"Come on I'll give you a tour of the city." Rinn kept in suggesting.
"Rinn kept on bothing the man. Finally he stood up straight looking at Rinn with a serious face.
"I warned you now you will suffer the consequences." threaten the man.
He then took out a card that had the color red and the word fire.
"Is that your weapon?" asked Rinn,"Because if it is.....wow, what a threat."
Rinn began to laugh. Then Sora began to noticed that the man wasn't joking.
"Um Rinn....." said Sora.
"Not now Sora." replied Rinn laughing.
Finally the man through the card at Donald. And as soon as it hit the ground it became fire. Donald jumped onto Goofy. Donald was lucky enough to have dodge it. Rinn stopped laughing.
"Um I was kidding. You know a joke." said Rinn scared.
He took out another card that had the same thing. This time he took out 5 cards that were fire. The cards became fire in his hands and through them at the group. Before it hit the group a mysterious girl came out of nowhere and threw water at the flaming cards. The group opened their eyes and Goofy regonized her.
"Sora that's the girl I saw in the forest." said Goofy.
The man didn't want ot waste his timeso he turned around and walked away. The girl stayed there for a few seconds.
"Thank you." said Sora."Who are-"
Before Sora can finish, she left running.
"Hey wait!" yelled out Sora.
But she didn't stop. The group just stayed at that spot for a few seconds and left to the hidout.

 

O_O I save them and run? ... Where is this headed?

 

Chapter 4-Sora's New Crush

Rinn, Donald, and Goofy were inside the hideout while Sora was outside in front of the hideout. He was looking out at the sea. He was wondering who that girl was.
"Why did she save us and then just leave?" Sora thought to himself.
As he thought, he heard a young girl scream for help.
"Who was that?" thought Sora.
Sora ran into the forest where the scream came from. Sora looked around to see if he can see someone in distress.
"Someone help!!" yelled out a young girl being chased by heartless. When the heartless saw Sora coming with his keyblade, they disappeared. The girl was on her knees, exhausted from running and fighting.
"Are you ok?" asked Sora.
He grabbed her arm helping the girl up.
"Yes." replied the girl."Thank you."
She lifted up her head and Sora couldn't believe his eyes.
"I'm Aliza." the girl introduced herself.
"I'm....I'm uh." Sora couldn't talk because he thought Aliza was very pretty.
"Are you ok?" asked Aliza.
"Uh....yeah. I'm....Sora." responded Sora."Why were those heartless chasing you?"
"Those are the heartless?" asked Aliza.
"Yeah. You've heard of them?" said Sora.
"Yes. I've heard rumors at my home city." responded Aliza.
Sora took Aliza to the hideout so that they can be more comfortable talking.
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Sorry this is short.The next chapter will be up by tomorrow.

 

you asked for crix's info, ne?
Name:Crixonne (Crix)
Age: 15
Gender: girl
Good/Evil: evil, but also good, sorta (like axel)
History: a nobody (WEEE!) her somebody(rinn lolz) lived on destiny islands.
Weapon: star neclace that turns into a staff/keyblade/anything else you can think of(mansex's lightsabers lolz)
Power: magic and being awsome
Appearence: medium length black hair and charcol(sp) black eyes. wears organization cloak thats open at front so you can see her clothes, which are a white skirt and tank top. wears sandals.
Personality: usually quiet. gets VERY hyper, but this almost never happens.
Anything else: has a (secret) crush on axel (if ur gonna put him in the story). good with computers. spouts random poetry. likes cats lolz. erm... taquitoz lolz

 

Great thank you KingdomKey.She will be included soon.

 

Im Sora's new crush?! (squeals)
Sorry if this is taking up the room for your story...

 

foosh it took me fo eva to find this................yes i like the stroy so far keep up the good work ;D

 

Don't worry its not.It just shows me that people actually like my story.

By the way there might be a little surprise between you and Sora.MIGHT. Its a secret.:D


Chapter 5-Enemies Unite

Sora had taken Aliza to the hideout.
"So again why were those heartless chasing you?" asked Sora.
"Well I was just walking through the forest trying to find my way out until I saw the heartless. When I heard about the heartless, they described them. They also say they take innocent people's hearts. I didn't believe it at first but when I saw a poor man get his heart taken out of his body, I couldn't belive my eyes. Anyways when I was in the forest and saw the heartless, I was forzen, I couldn't move. Then when they saw me and began to run towards me I took out my sword and began to fight." Aliza continued,"I porbably fought up to 16 heartless or more. They kept on coming back and I was exhausted of fighting. So I just began to run. They obviously wanted my heartso I tried running faster to ut run them but I couldn't. Then that's when you came Sora. And I thank you."
"No problem." said Sora nodding and smiling.
"I'm sorry but I haven't been properly introuduced to your friends Sora, I'm Aliza." said Aliza.
"Oh sorry she's Rinn, he's Donald, and I'm Goofy." replied Goofy.
"Well it was nice to meet you all but I have to get going." said Aliza.
Sora was surprised to hear Aliza say she was leaving now. And of course Sora didn't want her to leave.
"Wh-what but you just got here. At least stay with us for a few days." said Sora in a hurry."Please."
Aliza crossed her arms thinking if she should stay. Then after a few seconds she put her arms to the side smiled and said,"Ok."
Sora smiled back and was happy she was staying. Donald and Goofy were looking at Sora with a strange face. But Sora was too busy looking at Aliza, he didn't notice. While the group of 5 were at the hideout talking and relaxing, far away from them they were being watched by Mexony, Eneroc, a young girl, and Ionez. They were able to spy on Sora and his friends with a special cauldron.
"So how are we going to beat these guys?" asked Eneroc.
"I'm thinking." replied Mexony.
"Are you thinking Ionez?" asked Eneroc.
Ionez stayed quiet not responding. Eneroc just looked at him waiting for a response. Then he turned to Mexony.
"Mexony." said Eneroc.
"AH!! Darn it!! Eneroc thank you very much, I had a plan on the tip of my tongue and now I lost it!!" yelled Mexony.
"Why do you need a plan if all you can do is take full charge." said a feminine voice.
"Who are you?" asked Mexony.
"The names Karina." replied the woman.'What are your names?"
"I'm Mexony, he's Eneroc, and that's Ionez." replied Mexony.
"And that girl?" asked Karina.
"She's Crix, but don't worry about her. How'd you find your way here?" replied Mexony.
"That kid Sora really isn't a big deal, I mean he is some what of a threat but if you pay close attention he lets his guard down a lot." said Karina."You just have to time yourselves. Also,"
Before Karina continued she snapped her fingers and in the cauldron a young girl standing in front of two graves holding flowers.
"Who is that?" asked Eneroc.
"Her name is Roxanne. I've been watching her lately and I've seen her fight." said Karina.
"So." said Eneroc.
"Are you saying she's a skilled fighter?" asked Mexony.
"Exactly. But she is more than skilled." said Karina.
"What are you saying?" asked Ionez.
"Well when she was 8 she taught herself to fight. And by the age of 13 she was already a skilled fighter." said Karina."I aready know she will eventually run into Sora. And she will help him so you three or should I say four, will need help."
There was an awkward silence. Eneroc and Ionez looked at Mexony. Knowing she is the leader of the group. They were waiting for her to answer.
"But hey if you don't need my help that's ok. But I do know her weakness." said Karina.
"What is it?" asked Mexony.
Karina snapped her fingers again and a necklace appeared in the cauldron.
"That necklace is her weakness." Karina continued,"That necklace was given to her by her mother when she was 4. Also that necklace contains an actual star."
"What star?" asked Eneroc.
"The north star." replied Karina."If you threaten to break the necklace she will surrender."
"Ok. You will help us defeat Sora and his friends." said Mexony.
"Oh no...." whispered Crix to herself.
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This chapter took me forever to type and write and my hand hurts like hell.Anyways I hope you guys like so far.

 

The North Star in a necklace? Wow O_O

 

Ok, I wonder if the suprise is a good thing or a bad thing.... I wonder if Roxanne is really going to back down.... BTW love the story so far and cant wait for the next chapter!

 

The surprised is a good thing hehe.And I'm glad you love my story:)

What do you mean if Roxanne is going back down?

 

Yay! :) And I mean that I wonder if she really is going to give in for that necklace instead of fighitng for her life.

 

Oh ok:)
I'll post the next part probably by tomorrow:)

 

Ok, cant wait!!! :3 :D

 

This is getting interesting! I keep giggling when I read. I think it's a sign of liking this story alot:D I can wait for more:) Keep the good typing:)

 

Chapter 6-New Allies

The next morning Sora woke up early. He went outside to get some fresh ocean air. As he went outside he saw Aliza at the shore. He was surprised to see Aliza up early so he walked over to her.
“Aliza.” said Sora.
Aliza turned around to see Sora.
“Sora.” said Aliza.
“Are you ok?” asked Sora.
“Yeah why do you ask?” replied Aliza.
“You seem a little sad.” said Sora.
“I’m just a little home sick that’s all.” said Aliza. “I miss my home town.”
“Really, what’s the name of your home?” asked Sora.
“Hollow Bastion.” replied Aliza.
“Hollow Bastion!” said Sora surprised.
“Yeah. You’ve been there?” asked Aliza.
“Yeah, I actually have a few friends there.” replied Sora.
As Sora and Aliza continued to talk, Donald, Goofy, and Rinn woke up and went outside to get some fresh air. As they began to feel they were relaxing they heard a big bang coming from the city.
“What was that?” asked Rinn.
“I don’t know but we better go check it out.” said Sora.
As the group headed to where the bang came from they saw a group of 4. Sora didn’t know who two of them were but he recognized Mexony and Ionez.
“Hey guys look its Sora.” said Eneroc.
“How do you know my name?” asked Sora.
Sora and the others took out their weapons to prepare themselves to fight. Karina couldn’t wait any longer, she went running towards Sora. She took out her sword and swung it at Sora. Sora was lucky enough to have blocked it with his keyblade but the blow was so powerful, Sora dropped to his knees.
“Sora!” yelled Donald.
“Sora are you ok?!” asked Goofy.
“Y-yeah.” responded Sora in pain.
Ionez took out 5 cards of fire and through them at Rinn and Aliza. Aliza was quick enough to throw water and protect Rinn and her. Rinn, Aliza, Donald, and Goofy began to fight but quickly got exhausted. Mexony, Eneroc, Ionez and Karina were too strong. Rinn, Aliza, Donald, and Goofy dropped to the floor near Sora. Then Ionez took out 10 cards. 5 of lightning and 5 of fire. He through them at the exhausted group. Sora held out his hand holding the keyblade. Then before the cards hit Sora all of a sudden these two girls came out of nowhere. One of them through water at the cards of fire the other girl used her sword to block the lightning bolts and sent it back, hitting Mexony, Eneroc, Ionez and Karina. Karina smiled when she saw who it was.
“What did I tell you. She finally ran into Sora.” said Karina to her partners.
“Hey you’re the girl that saved us last time.” said Sora.
“Can you handle them by yourself?” asked the girl that saved Sora.
The other girl nodded and went running towards the enemies.
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Dun dun dunnn what will happen next?

 

yes i pwn as a bad guy ;D