Traditional Art My Oc's for my manga

It been awhile since I've been here so I thought share my darwings since I got my art tablet. :3 Here's my Oc's for my manga Rejects, there's 7 in total but I haven't drawn them yet >_<



Jay

Eli


Reiji

 

Are the words supposed to link to a picture, because they are not.

 

I can't see the OCs ;~;

Can ya fix it? :3

 

Whew wasn't teh computer. Red x's are pretty xD Though it would be nice to see those oc's​

 

You should try to fix those.

 

Sorry 'bout that, I believe they are fixed now.

 

yes, they are fixed now dear.

On with CnC.

I like Jay, his expression really seems to show (at least what I think) his attitude.


Eli looks pretty awesome, I love his smile! 8D

Reiji is just adorable.

Nice job.

 

Thank you so much~ :3

 

You're welcome, and may I ask, what is that in Reiji's hand?

 

It's a rubber ball. >_<

 

hmmm, the drawings of Jay and Eli are good buy Reiji's face looks out of place. try moving the eyes down a bit and adding some eyebrows ;D

 

I like all of these~ I can't really say any cnc nao...sorry ^^'

 

Jay is quite a Hotie
Nothing wrong with him
Eli Reminds me of a man down my Street
Hes quite Cheerful
But make his Eyebrow a bit more Bolder
As for Reji hes perfect
But his Hat annoys me
Its out of angle if you ask me
Also I thought he was holding a berry of some sort
If its a rubber ball
Add "squeek squeek" above it

:3
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