I love you like I’ve never loved before. Being alone and upset my heart it tore. Now you’re by my side, someone who is mine. Your sweet words make everything seem fine. When I’m sad you’re there to give me a hug, maybe even a kiss. At night your presence I dearly miss. I don’t want this moment to ever end. Together, you and me, because my heart you did mend. I want our few minutes together to turn into hours or days. When I’m alone my heart for you it prays. With you next to me I see the world with different eyes. Between us there is no madness, or sorrow not even lies. You are the sun that shines my life. Without you in my life in my heart there is a knife. I’m glad you came into my life because you’ve turned it upside down. When I’m with you I feel like I’m wearing a crown. I am the princess and you are my charming prince. Please stay with me because life has been a blast ever since. i wrote this part of yesterday and today once again it is cheezy but cute so CnC please
Nicely rhymed and well balanced, but I'm not sure about each line being a separate sentence though. The content is good and overall it is excellent.
No Matter NO MATTTER HOW MANY TIMES I HEAR IT OR READ IT I STILL GET DA WARM FEELING OF DA FIRST TIME I HEARD IT :luv:
thanks i'll look over the line structure awwww ur too sweet for your own good sometimes but i love you and i'm glad yo liked the poem
