Traditional Art My lame take on Xion...

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Hakurei Reimu, Oct 16, 2008.

  1. Hakurei Reimu Take my hand. And then I'll fly with you right up

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  2. Ansem59 Chaser

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    well, it's the best picture of Xion I've seen yet... it's only off becuase she hasn't been seen much yet... except for that one trailer... don't worry... you'll get it as soon as a better quality trailer comes out.
     
  3. Cocohints "Up to now, the most discussed topic is global war

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    Silly we won't sue you! o:

    If you ask me, I love the way you added such soft colours. The outfit looks fine, I think it is missing those string thingies to tighten the hood with but no matter.

    Personally, I'd say you would need to do two things:

    1 - don't make the neck so thick. Make it a little bit slimmer looking, since it's a female it will be more elegant.

    2 - maybe do the shading of the hair in the same style like you did the cloak? Right now there's two different styles, one is airbrush dottish while the other is more straight to the point.
     
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    It's better than anything I can draw.

    I think you did a great job. The only thing that's bothering me is the neck. It's too thick; it should be a little bit thinner.

    Anyways, awesome job. <3
     
  5. Johnny Bravo Chaser

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    its preety good considering she was only seen in that one trailer....
     
  6. Scott Pilgrim Banned

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    2nd best pic I've seen of her out of 4 pics. Congratulations! Anyway, I like the eyes alot. 7.5/10
     
  7. Jiku Neon Kingdom Keeper

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    Not bad, could be better. Necks too thick and shoulders are not quite right for the perspective.
     
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    Well the perspective is a bit off, but for a quick ten mintue sketch it's pretty awesome.
     
  9. Dinny I am Anime ( ⚈้̤͡ ◡ ⚈้̤͡ )

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    The time when my DA isn't working is now.. ;_;

    I'll come back to post when DA's working... but looking at the other posts... it seems awesome~! ;D
     
  10. EvilMan_89 Code Master

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    it's pretty good, it's still far better than anything i can make.