Digital Art my first vector sig....

please CnC....

 

Okies, me just here for teh GFX.

You're getting better, deffinetly, I see you're using different effects now, and making your own backgrounds. Let's start with the render, shall we? It's very blurred, I can't really see what it is. Maybe sharpening it a bit will help. As for the effects...they're repetitive. Experiment with what different brushes do, and mess around with the other tools (like doge/burn, the ink especially, I can't get enough of that thing XD). The effects you used, the big, black and bold ones, drag your attention away from the render, and I seem to be focusing more on the text. They stand out too much, or at least divert the viewer's attention. As for the text, I can't really comment on it because I haven't mastered text at all either.

 

-background draws too much attention....
-text draws too much attention....
-render is too blurry....
-experiment with effects....


got it, thnx!!!!

 

I can't even see it...is it the one on your sig?

 

yeah, the white-ish one....

 

Alright well, this really isn't a true vector sig. Anyway, the text does'nt match the style, the background is too plain, and the render is too blurry. If you try and remember those few things you may be able to learn from your mistakes.

 

thnx....but,, i was following a tutorial, so thats why the bg is white...and thats wwhy i call it a vector sig, (yes the image was vectored....)