Digital Art my first sigs

i made these for the last few hours, they are my first real sigs i ever put together.







so what do you guys think??

 

Don't put the text over the focals, and try to make it visible...also, don't screw the image up tooooo much with effects.

 

thank you!! i will remeber that, i really want to open my own graaphic shop in the future, so anything helps.
thanks bud.

 

A: Improve the text.

B: There is no focal point.

C: In the third version the colors are way too much messed up.

And there isn´t really too much going on here =/.

 

in the third one the colors where supposed to be messed up.
i did that on purpose.

what is a focal point if i may ask?

 

The focus of a picture.
ie, the focal point in my avatar, is the cake. :3