Yes, I know that I smudged too much on some places, but I just want to know what everybody thinks about my first sig.
I like it. It just feels a bit too big hight-wise. Slim it down and try to find a nice focal point on the picture. :)
First of all, this is much too big. Most of the time, I won't make my signatures larger than 400 x 150. Though it depends on your prefrence (i.e. I like them small, but Jim may like his signatures to be big), try not to have them looming. Well, I can kind of see some flow here where you started to smudge, but it's not apparent in the rest of the signature. It's lacking in Foreground effects and the colors need some major help. The text is just... no. I've seen better first sigs, but everyone learns at their own pace. I'd say you're off to a good start. I'd also like the to say to the two people that commented before me, please read the sticky about CnCing.
It's a little too big, try using 400x150. Also, try using multiple colors and add some C4D's. Good for a first though.