My first poem

To You, My Best Friend

To you, my best friend
I say that I miss you so
I miss the times we had befriended
I miss the times we had fighting and feeings of low.

I never appreciated the true value
Of our friendship though
Until the times you had to go

We were best friends
But I never knew
That our friendship had so much hue

To you, my best friend
I say to you with legitimacy
That I miss the times
Of our friendly intimacy

So my final words to you
Are I miss you
My Best Friend...

 

That is pretty damn awesome, it carries a sense of loss within it :(

Nice work :) it has a great flow​

 

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Great poem man, I can relate... ;-;

Seriously... make more.

 

This is a very beautiful poem ^^ I can really feel the emotion in this . Great job bro =D

 

>_< Why does it feel like that's a poem about me? >_< Keep making more. It's awesome.

 

Wow. That was very...moving. Emotional.

It was awesome. Make more.

I command you. ;3

 

great poem, short and to the point but with a lot of meaning well done.