My,first chronicles?

Ok,i hope you like it.And ill need help for ideas.


As a girl named Sam walked along the street, a man came up to her.
"Hello," he said, smiling.
Sam looked suprised, and she studdered, "H-h-hi. I'm new here....my name is Sam, what's yours?"
"I am Mato," he said, as he reached out to take her hand and kiss the back of it.
"Very nice to meet you, "she said, blushing.


Ok help me there.

 

sorry, but if i say anything that i'm thinking of, i'll banned.

i think i have something else
"i'm new here. my name is sam, what's yours?"

 

good good thanks

 

Um, I think this belongs in the Creativity Corner...but anyway, some help:

As a girl named Sam walked along the street, a man came up to her.
"Hello," he said, smiling.
Sam looked suprised, and she studdered, "H-h-hi. I'm new here....my name is Sam, what's yours?"
"I am Mato," he said, as he reached out to take her hand and kiss the back of it.
"Very nice to meet you, "she said, blushing.

 

Thank you nod.

 

Anytime...starts off not too bad so far.

 

no activity in over 20 min? omfg!