instead of making a thread for every piece of fanart i get, i decided to make a thread for every piece of fanart i make XD. o made this within 20 minutes~ XD watchya think?
omg! thats so good. the only suggestion that i have would be that kagomes head looks a little weird.. besides that i luv the rest! come talk to me at school and i'll help u fix it ok? =D
oh! hey euruka long tiime no see! XD im glad u liked it! and im glad u liked the picture i made for u too! yeah.... i will c u 2morrow then we'll fix watever is nessessary!
Improve on the facial proportions cuz it's a bit 'pointy'. Also, Kagome's rite hand should b a bit bigger. Other than that, it's good.
The right hand on the girl is too small for the rest of her body, and her face is pointy. Smooth off the corners of the face (not too much though) and make her hand bigger. The skirt seems kind of short in the back, added a samll amount there should make it look the right size. Her ear is awkwardly placed, bring it closer to the face, and pull her face out more where the curve is (right near her ear). The bottom of the red outfit Inyuasha (?) is wearing should be brought out a little too, so it doesn't look so tight against the legs. The coloring looks good though, try adding some shading to it and it would look even better.
thanks guys i will take ur advice and try to fix it to make it look better i luv it when ppl comment my art and tell me if something looks weird with it cuz it helps me try not to make that mistake again! so thankyou 4 your honest opinion! XD
Your latest drawing is actually better, you've been improving! ^^ Keep on practicing, and for your next drawings you should concentrate on the feet as well - they're one of the trickiest bodyparts to get right, in all seriousness. My best advice would be to study first of all on real life models: look at a friend's feet, sketch it many times quickly (about 1-3 minutes, for the purpose to get down the basic shape) in different angles/poses. It is wise to use guidelines, the foot is like a cube with orbs so build it up as one. :3 After that you could look at the feet from various animes and repeat, you'll surely find a balance suitable to the style you'll use in the end. In other words, in this picture Inu's feet are way too tiny, and Kagome's ended up in an odd angle. It looks like you tried to keep the perspective in mind, kudos to that, just study how it works some more.
Never heard of any of these people you drew. What show are they from? Oh KhCrazy, love your your avatar. I'm not girly at all but it's kinda funny.XD.
