ok maybe it ain't kingdom hearts but its final fantasy xD so its related lol this are my drawings so please tell me what I should do to improve ok? thanks ~Xion [/IMG] my remake of the old fashion white mage I love the hair :3 geez I wonder who this fella is... hmmm? lolz and the hero who began the fantasy... Warrior of Light. Please be honest and tell me what can I make to improve :3
First things first, you are an amazing drawer, I love your pics. I defenitley can't draw people like that, but I can draw animals. I think you're really good.
Your drawing talent is wonderful. But your bodies are from the White Mage a little skinny. And a bit small. They're head looks huge. .__. I would say give the girl some boobs. [Not to sound pervy] It gives it more effect. And it even gives her more balance. ;D But that, and your arms look a bit long on the White Mage. The Cloud one is great. I have nothing for you on that, as well for the Warrior of Light. But, what would be good is to get a scanner. Taking your camera and trying to get as close as you can without blurring the photo isn't going to work for those really good ones. They're easy to find, but not as easy to buy. :huh:
Beautiful job! ^^ *purrs* It looks like you're drawing characters from Final Fantasy Dissidia except the first one isn't from it but it's still nice. Great job!
Since these are hand drawn and not Graphic Arts I'm going to move this to the traditional art section. Very well done.
You actually can post any type of drawing that you want, it doesn't have to be KH related. As for the drawings, they're really, really good. x3 But on the first one, the arms are too skiny, so you work on making them not-so-anerxic-looking. Other then that I can't say much...
Very nice. Wonderful drawings but, as said before, the first one seems too thin. So try working on that. It seems a littel awkward since the body's small and the head is big. Other than that, I seeing nothing else wrong with the other two. Very good and keep it up.
I love how your work has a total look of.. how should I put this... Very perfessional. But I think you should add more shadowing; to make it look 3-Dish.. I guess I should say. Haha, but um oh you should also give Cloud more spikey hair.. it looks kinda dull.. D:
lol I couldn't agree more with ya. My shading sucks, I've never taken art lessons on that, just design for pages and like abstract stuff. And thats the first drawing I have ever made of Cloud, so its the first failure..? lol I dunno I reeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaally need to practice more on shadding and body shapes and sizes and spiky hair lol. Thanks for your professional point of view and critic :3 I love it when people tell me their opinions cuz it really helps you improvise to perfection ^ ^ so really thank you so much, you rock kiddo X3 <<<<<<<<<<3333333333333333 ~Xion
Wow. That's some talent you have there :'D It's ok, you can post whatever you draw. As posted before, try to make the characters look less anorexic. Other than that, they're awesome and I <3 them :'D Keep the awesome work up!
